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Mister Cue Ball Man

Just noticed for the very first time My hair line is definitely receding My crowning glory, my silvery dome My time here is short I'm conceding If I ever wind up as Mr. Cue Ball Man It'll be time to close up shop Basically it'll be over, over and done No incentive without my silvery crop May sound vain, a wee bit conceded But with this mug that I possess Really need these charming adornments Need all the help I can get To impress the ladies, my hair was it Running fingers through my silvery locks They murmured tender sweet love words Offering me all that they've got Dream on dear fellow, you sound delusional It's the total package that's the thing With or without your silvery locks As long as you've still got that zing © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 12/9/2013 1:05:00 PM
charmed by this write,. i forget the top gone!... sensational, jack.. you got the zzing!.. huggs
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2013 1:22:00 PM
Old Santa's still got the zzzzzing! LOL Big hugs my dear Nette! XOXOXOX
Date: 12/9/2013 10:59:00 AM
Its all in those shining eyes and by the way it's your silvery tongue..we love!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2013 12:42:00 PM
HUGGEROONIES straight from my silvery tongue! LOL Hey Miss Sweetie Pie Donna... love ya dear lady! XOXOXOXXOX
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Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 11:00:00 AM
Telling us huggeroonies and stuff like that!!! ..:-) :-)
Date: 12/9/2013 8:01:00 AM
Thank goodness you added that with or without it you've still got the zing! Dragon was getting worried and asking me to get on the internet to look up hair pieces for him! I explained hair doesn't make the Dragon... We'll watch a Yule Brenner marathon to help him understand... We'll start with 'The King and I' since Dragon thinks he's so majestic... Then 'The Magnificent Seven' to bring his ego back down.. Then we'll watch 'West World' for the Techno Trolls... It's their all time favorite....
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2013 8:06:00 AM
LOL A Yul Brynner marathon!!! What an icon to be compared with but so far, I still have my silvery locks! For how long... hmmm... that's the question of the day! XOXOXOX

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