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Merit may not inherit merit

Progeny of the people of merit,
May not for sure would inherit merit.
Take fire and sandalwood,
The ash born smells no good,  
To wit, O never generalize a bit.       
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Translation |27.01.2025|  

Poet’s note: Sanskrit has thousands of verses of wisdom called Subhashhitam. This verse says that the progeny of people of merit may not necessarily inherit the merit. Sandalwood is all fragrant but when burnt along with fire the ash produced is not so fragrant.  The transliteration of the Sanskrit verse follows:

Na vyaaptireshaa guninah 
   gunavaan jaayate dhruvam |
Chandana-anala sandagdhah
   na bhasma surabhi kvachit || 203 ||

I will distribute my poems left and right!

I know that life is a continuous fight,
Who can hear a quiet person might? 
May today be a celebration for mankind, 
I will distribute my poems left and right!

Let my poems flash like lightning slights,
Let it intensify as my inspiration strikes.
My thoughts are deeper than the sea,
I know it will never run out as lights!

I distribute my poems without pain,
Let my poems bring people to gain.
Even seven layers of heaven fit my chest,
What is a poem like a drop of rain?

Let my poems be food for the immortals, 
Let it be a star when man seeks true and false. 
Let be light which seen from afar, 
To the country whose hopes are worse!

Come on!
Come and take fire from me double!
Take double fire and kill up trouble!
Without extinguishing the flame of my poem,
Take a fire on the future tower!

Arguing over time the Poem will fly,
It does not fade like a star in the sky.
Until the last man remains will be alive,
I will leave this world with a goodbye!
Form: Other


Castles Made

soft light falls
in golden hues
white crystals take fire
	in breaking dawn

bright sounding laughter
	on gentle breeze
of innocent joy
	growing louder

eyes quickly glancing
	with newest seeing
discovering footsteps
	their changes made

thoughts are dancing
	through simple visions
of shaping changing
	of what might be

fingers tiny
	exploring touching
shaping forming
	thoughts burst free

see visions
	hands then forming
building the shapes
	of youthful dreams

skin is cooling
	breeze is a growing
flowing more quickly
	across the sand

fire is fading
	growing dimmer
in distant darkness
	upon the sea

dark high castles
	steal the daylight
and the warmth
	of the day

waves once lapping
	now are rolling
with foam breaking
	and growing high

water does slowly
	at the dreams eat
foaming over
	erasing away

in empty darkness
	restless ocean
waves caressing
	smoothing all away

at days ending
	in growing darkness
dreams are gone
	as never were

The Unusual Speech

The statesman ascended the podium and though
Heckled, he bravely prepared and delivered
Everything in his mind in a foreign nation

“Usually I thank whoever hosts me anywhere
Not a lie I ever told; I have enjoyed all my desires
Unless you reject, when you come to my home I’ll revenge
Suffering with transport is impossible in the nation I lead
Under me I will build everywhere bus park for airplanes
And I have a program for a whole one year
Listen to me carefully;

Sincerely I will take fire everywhere
People’s homes I will take fire, streets, and hotels
Everyone will be happy when fire burns all places
Even industries will have fire burning
Come, you will see with your eyes,
Heaven on earth in my country”
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member Big Ideas

BIG IDEAS


UNG!!!!  Fire was the big idea
Flaming Woolly Mammoth on a hot stick

OHH!!   The wheel was the big idea
Woolly Mammoth are heavy

Caves were the big idea
Condos of cohabitation.

Cave Drawings were the big idea
Decorative stories

Road Trips were the big idea
Keep moving with the food

Evolution was the big idea
Creatively adapt to change

Music was the big idea
Drums and whistles and chants

Dance was the big idea
Moving in the fire’s glow

Words were the big idea
The poetry of survival

Texting was the big idea
Messages scratched on a wall

Moving out was the big idea
UNG!!!  Take fire with you


John G. Lawless
5/17/2015

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