SURROUNDINGS
relaxed
traditional
life
longings
emphasised
in
modest
ventured
respectacled
beginnings
customary
dedicated
proclaimed
charms
sublime
support
metaphorically
complex
of
resigned
melanchoy
NEW SURROUNDINGS
detached
beginnings
gradually
dissolving
outlines
inexpressive
variations
becalmed
anodyne
gestures
irreconcilable
chaotic
pliable
malleable
abstraction
close-up
care-free
incidental
symbols
of
confidence
breathing
freedom
in
a
relaxed
unrestrained
layered
sequential
atmosphere
a vigorous
vital
amorphous
delicate
conceptual
unchanging
shape
of
single-minded
energy
D-azzling
A-urora
I-lluminates
S-ilent
Y-onder,
M-aking
A-ll
N-earby
L-andscapes
A-ppear
N-aturally
G-reat
I-n
T-ranquility
©bfa042525
Monocrostic (Birthday of Daisy Manlangit)
Be angry with no man
And you will increase your life span.
Anger works against your conscience
And is a public relations hindrance.
Find out the good in everyone
For it' is in all under the sun.
Admittedly, some do dastardly things,
Often born of their yearnings.
Infect all around you with love,
Thereby building wealth up above.
You'll furthermore win people's hearts;
Yes, a niche in their inward parts!
You sure will suffer mistreatments
But if you bear up under disappointments
You are accepting your business losses
And are on track for reaping grosses!
Even with a good
I may not be
If I become a true
it never gets worse.
As she walks barefoot into her garden, her body connects to the earth's healing magnetic fields.
She then sits on a faded wooden bench and is greeted by the flowers, who gently nod their heads.
A smile lights up her face as the warmth of the sun bathes her skin, and the green grass cushions and tickles her feet.
She then closes her eyes and relaxes in nature's surroundings.
The soft summer breeze caresses her hair as the soothing sound of leaves rustles on the trees.
She listens to robins sweetly singing their songs and breathes in the sweet perfume from the lilac blossoms.
She is connected and content.
SURROUNDINGS
lfestyle
discerned
in
billowing
images
of import
a
foray
with
shadows
a
source
of inspiration
a
genuine
suprise
to
illustrate
&
reflect
fascination
in
an
etched
manner
susceptible
to
the
particular
to
emulate
&
experiment
ensuring
an
effective
self conscious
perfection
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
I remember before my conception,
when I was not alive.
Where the light found my eye's and yet
I wasn't blind back like now.
Look to the show's,
where electronic technology can catch the
word's and energy,
from long ago past lives.
SURROUNDINGS
Wind water matter material
Little louse and mini mouse in haunted house
Scorching Summer hits hot hammer
..Rapid Rabbit moved fast: Slow snail reached last.
Frigid frost on rigid rock.
Rippling river runs flows forever.
Nurture nice Nature for far future.
11 /15/21
Syllable counts : 9-11-8-10-7-9-9
Alliterisen-7 lines
Third Place.
Contest By Joseph May
Loneliness strikes
When you're lost in people's eyes
When you're astrayed from people's companies
When your existence is left unattended
Loneliness strikes
When people's six senses betrayed you
They didn't appreciate your effort
They didn't admire your work
And so you lost your self-esteem
And so you lost your confidence
And so you're exhausted
Loneliness strikes
When you lost your interest to the surroundings
You're too self-centered that
Too high is your ambition
Too high is your expectation
Too high are your dreams
While
No man is perfect
Man excuses himself
By accusing others
Hurting others tremendously
And building a wall isolating them
Wrapping himself with prolonged hatred
That hurts him eternally
Man excuses himself
By accusing the surroundings too
Spoiling them innocently
And hurting himself without knowledge
Suffering from the pressures and pollutions
Accumulated by himself
In his own cursed surroundoings
Walking down the countryside footpath,
Side stepping here and there,
Looking downwards as I go,
Missing the beauty all around me,
Only seeing what's left behind,
Bags thrown in the hedge and on the ground,
Trying not to step in what has not been cleaned,
It's not the scenery I want to see,
Dog walkers take your dogs doodoo's away.
Fluidly intack colors flow
initiates an attack
surrounded by black
Rainbow gathering
Orange Reds yellows
Do occupy The Meadows
Surrounding by lilacs
Daunted by the Mountain Shadows
Surrounded by black
10/25/19
Written by James Edward Lee Sr 2019
Purpose has a purpose
Does amounts to something
Some things has this way
I'm making this around me
These dismal surroundings
Coveted having its way
For in instance I survey
Reason has reasons
I'm making this observation
These days most surrounded
By these dismal surroundings...
9/30/19
James Edward Lee Sr 2019
SURROUNDINGS
Something surrounds me
It's all deep inside me
Something inside me
It sets around me
What does this all mean
Surroundings
11/25/18
written James Edward Lee Sr.©2018
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