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Surroundings

SURROUNDINGS

      Wind water  matter material
      Little louse and mini mouse in haunted house
      Scorching Summer hits hot hammer
    ..Rapid Rabbit moved fast: Slow snail reached last.
      Frigid frost on rigid rock.
       Rippling river runs flows forever.
       Nurture nice Nature for far future.


  11 /15/21
Syllable counts :  9-11-8-10-7-9-9

Alliterisen-7 lines

                                   Third Place.  
Contest By Joseph May

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/30/2021 9:54:00 AM
Anisha, nice poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/29/2021 6:23:00 PM
Nicely penned Anisha, Congrats on your win
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