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~Oblivion Dark Sunshine~
Rhyme Scheme: I took a journey in life to see the world. I was just a nature freak culturally in love. I knew when I reached my peak; my vision would explode to what I saw before me. Flow: Then I would begin to write about all that was before my eyes. The lines would form a story that told about the world in its most glorious form. I would sat under a tree for warmth because winter is upon the earth. Prose: Jake Castle is a Bean Person that has discovered a new universe. He knows that he is in an awkward situation when he stands 5 ft and several inches away from a Giant. Lucky he was not seen. Poem Short: What a monstering this is. A giant stands 3 inches from here. Might I exaggerate from my fear. If he stomps, I am deaf in both ears. The Composer: I must move. I journeyed to see a new world. Evidently, this is not the one I am from. Jake Castle leaves with both of his arms.

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Date: 3/6/2014 5:42:00 PM
Verlena, another amazing write... I will enjoy reading and getting familiar with your poetry... You seem to be a very strong writer... LINDA
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Date: 3/6/2014 6:22:00 PM
Thanks Linda and please do as stated :)s.... Verlena
Date: 3/6/2014 2:53:00 PM
Verlena... such a beautiful write... I agree with you... we are all freaking naturalists!!! ...i'm in love with nature...the world is my home..and nature is my religion... you penned it so well!!! ...thanks!! ^__^
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Date: 3/6/2014 3:03:00 PM
Thank you for the thumbs up :)s... I glad you stopped by... Verlena