The harvest moon is seen in autumn
Around the world this time of year
It helps bring in the crops we need
With feast that come with food and beer
With thanks given as summer ends
The harvest moon is seen in autumn
It blesses us with its moonbeams
From earths top unto its bottom
Now chants and prayers are given
To thank the One who blessed it all
The harvest moon is seen in autumn
It is a light that never dulls
It glows to us so extra bright
We sing of it while others strum
The music is a great delight
The harvest moon is seen in autumn
A place that I sometimes will go
So I can settle down my mind
Somewhere that I can sort my thoughts
A place where they will then refine
It's their I figure what I'll do
A place that I sometimes will go
To build upon what has been done
So I in life can surely grow
I find that I can think my best
When I find myself alone
A place that I sometimes will go
Will have no map where it is shown
For it is solely in my thoughts
When I extract myself to know
To free me from what causes strife
A place that I sometimes will go
Life ripples with love's rhythm --- clear
reverberating kindness' hope
allowing hearts that hold each dear
remain vibrant as they both cope.
Against confusion-propelled woe
life ripples with love's rhythm --- clear
while faith lights partners midst truth’s glow
vanquishing angst of deceit’s fear.
Upon faithful devotion’s gear
toward triumphant friendship-tie
life ripples with love's rhythm --- clear
as hearts beat as one, closely nigh.
Tuned gladly with serene refrain
relationship basks in blest cheer
thanking God that along race-strain
life ripples with love's rhythm --- clear.
To think of lands that don't exist
Except inside the writers mind
To ponder what new worlds look like
Then to decide to loose or bind
We now create what has not been
To think of lands that don't exist
There's knights that rescue kingdoms dear
Others that come from inside the mist
The writers muse is quite varied
It changes with each story told
To think of lands that don't exist
To then decide what will unfold
Excites me when I do it well
With pics the reader can't resist
To write one more is all I ask
To think of lands that don't exist
I am that I am still the core,
A quiet truth inside the night,
I rise above the fading roar,
And hold a pure and steady light.
Through shifting shadows on the floor,
I am that I am still the core,
A silent promise to restore,
The heavy burdens we ignore.
Beneath the heavy ocean floor,
Where distant waters softly pour,
I am that I am still the core,
An ancient grace forevermore.
Beyond the distant myth and lore,
Where time and space can charm no more,
And earthly tides forget to soar,
I am that I am still the core.
Line of inquiry:
“We look at spirit not at form
Our touch is gentle, kind and warm
We but reflect God’s love and light
‘Tis the path to which we conform” - Unseeking Seeker
Bliss we find on the path we’re on,
for spirit has become our guide.
Since God became our liaison,
free of pride, we are open-eyed.
Since thoughtfulness to all we show,
bliss we find on the path we’re on,
and we are engulfed in the glow
of a wonderfully bright dawn.
It’s to light and love we are drawn,
reflecting these in all we do.
Bliss we found on the path we’re on,
and more than lovely is the view.
We glide with grace in God’s embrace
with inner beauty of a swan,
our mindset in a peaceful space.
Bliss we find on the path we’re on.
When summer's heat cries out for rain,
Flowers bow beneath the strain.
Yet deep below, the roots still keep,
Revival stirring in deep sleep.
Wilt is not a finale farewell,
Nor the tolling of a death knell;
The earth remembers every seed,
And yearns to grant what plants need.
Saudade drifts through twilight air,
For things once loved—or never there.
A sweet ache woven through the heart,
When hope and longing dwell apart.
The rose may mourn the vanished rain,
Bow in submission to drought's domain;
Yet dawn returns with silver grace,
When dewdrops fall on an uplifted face.
So when the soul begins to bend,
When weary days seem without end,
Recall the bloom that learned its art—
To wilt, to wait, and mend the heart.
It is the art of wilt and wait,
By which flowers haunt at the gate,
Knowing their wilt and wane,
Will call the gardener, back again.
Heart’s at peace in our sunset years,
which is no mere figure of speech,
since reduced are desires and fears
and heaven’s light seems within reach.
Ambling along in witness mode,
heart’s at peace in our sunset years,
wherein singing to love an ode,
we’re suffused with bliss that endears.
Our destiny God Himself steers,
for now with ego cravings gone,
heart’s at peace in our sunset years,
with each life breath ushering dawn.
According to conscience consent,
going wherever bliss throb spears,
simply by following the scent,
heart’s at peace in our sunset years.
To think of what might soon appear
To think of things that just might be
To plan each step that you will take
So your path is not hard to see
You take your time because you know
To think of what might soon appear
Around the traps you then will go
A life you'll have that knows no fear
You understand how to adhere
To standards that are set in life
To think of what might soon appear
Will help others to avoid strife
Though others think you move to slow
You understand when you come near
Of the place that will be your goal
To think of what might soon appear
For Constance La France Ponder in Poetry Contest
A simple rhyme a simple beat
A subject simple come alive
Is now to me an awesome treat
That creates images in mind
A simple story told quite well
A simple rhyme a simple beat
Give an enchanting little spell
To write of one now seems so sweet
To take a subject that's quite neat
With pictures that enchant the brain
A simple rhyme a simple beat
I love a poem with a refrain
I think it seems much like a song
That when well written's quite a feat
That when done right cannot be wrong
A simple rhyme a simple beat
Can you feel me in my silence?
I hold my words like fragile glass~
unclear which ones will agitate,
unsure if truth will cost too much.
I wait, my patience wearing thin.
Can you feel me in my silence?
I want to speak, but shadows rise;
and every thought retreats again.
I reach for courage, lose my grip.
I stall, falter, then hesitate.
Can you feel me in my silence?
I do not want to disappear.
I hope you hear the pain I hide~
the ache behind my quiet breath,
the fear that love might break again.
Can you feel me in my silence?
it it feels so proud, the wafting cloud
but what is it without the breeze
yet together they spoke out loud
that they could do just as they please
floating about in the vast sky
it feels so proud, the wafting cloud
but space remains whilst forms will die
so dark fears begin to enshroud
the mist cries to God, Who endowed
all forms manifest with His breath
it feels so proud, the wafting cloud
even though fleeting is its wealth
wake up hermit, pray and atone
shining as God’s light in a crowd
though it has no life of its own
it feels so proud, the wafting cloud
Hold me in your heart that's so fair
I want to hold you through the night
Who longs to keep me from despair
To be with you at mornings light
I'd love to know your thoughts and dreams
Hold me in your heart that's so fair
I want your light in all life's seams
I'd love to have a life we'd share
All of my desires I would lay bare
If you my lass were here with me
Hold me in your heart that's so fair
Then I'll lift you for all to see
My dreams are all I have of you
This love we'd have would be so rare
Tonight I'll dream of all we'd do
Hold me in your heart that's so fair
For the Dramatize the Desires Poetry Contest
When life's falling apart it seems
Even though you've done all you can do
Will you give up now on your dreams
Or look for help to get you through
You should not be going alone
When life's falling apart it seems
Instead seek help from those who've grown
To where your life can be redeemed
In failure you can wisdom glean
As long as pride's not in our way
When life's falling apart it seems
We should then get on knees and pray
I've seen that help that's from above
Will be to you a well-placed beam
That comes from Him who's full of love
When life's falling apart it seems
For the Open the Door and Enter the World of Possibilities Poetry Contest
Line of inquiry: “joy, empathy, compassion on an upward arc an effervescence eternal causes bliss ignition to start”
Joy, empathy, compassion rise~
fruits Your Spirit stirs within me,
living waters bubble inside,
cleanses my heart, making it new.
Fruits Your Spirit stirs within me,
joy, empathy, compassion rise~
Your holy breath lifts up my soul,
effervescence from heaven’s light.
Living waters bubble inside,
Grace gives warmth to my humble soul
joy, empathy, compassion rise~
igniting faith the way fire falls.
Cleanses the heart, making it new,
fruits Your spirit stirs within me,
living waters bubble inside~
joy, empathy, compassion rise.
Introduction
The special pleasure of reading a Quatern comes from hearing a familiar line enter a new dramatic position. What first appears to be an opening statement may later sound like an interruption, an answer, a memory, or a verdict. Because the surrounding language keeps changing, the repeated line gathers meanings that were not audible at its first appearance. The reader remembers it, anticipates it, and tests each return against what has happened since.
As you browse the community poems, notice the range of uses available within that recurring movement. One poet may build a quiet meditation around a natural image; another may use the return for comic timing, grief, romance, suspense, prayer, or protest. Some writers make the recurring line stable and reassuring, while others let it become increasingly doubtful or ironic. Differences in rhyme, sentence shape, imagery, and voice can make poems with the same underlying design feel strikingly unlike one another.
Reading several Quaterns side by side reveals more than an isolated example can. You begin to hear how the placement of the returning line alters pacing, how compact lines intensify word choice, and how each stanza must both stand on its own and contribute to a larger emotional journey. Compare several poets' approaches before deciding what the form can do. The most revealing question is often not whether the line repeats, but what the poem has done to make that line mean something new each time.
Reading Guide
A useful way to read a Quatern is to treat the recurring line as a sensitive instrument rather than a fixed decoration. Its words remain recognizable, but its emotional pitch can change whenever new images, claims, or narrative details surround it. On a first reading, follow the poem's surface movement. On a second, concentrate on the returning line and the transitions around it. Then compare community poems to see how differently writers create anticipation, continuity, surprise, and closure from the same formal pressure.
- The first line's hidden capacity: Notice whether the opening can sustain more than one interpretation. A line that is too narrowly tied to its first context may have little room to develop. As you compare poems, ask: what latent question, image, or emotional ambiguity allows this line to deepen?
- Changing grammatical relationships: Look at how the recurring words connect with the sentence before or after them. They may remain independent, complete another thought, or redirect the stanza. Ask: does each return feel naturally spoken, or does the surrounding syntax seem built merely to accommodate it?
- Anticipation and pacing: Once readers recognize the pattern, they begin listening for the next arrival. A poet can satisfy that expectation smoothly or create tension on the way toward it. Ask: what happens to the pace immediately before the familiar line appears?
- Sound beyond end rhyme: Listen for consonants, vowels, internal echoes, and rhythmic emphasis shared between the recurring line and nearby language. These links help the poem feel composed rather than assembled. Ask: which sounds quietly bind the changing passages to the refrain?
- Development between returns: Each new passage should contribute pressure, information, imagery, or tonal change. Repetition becomes inert when the poem circles without advancing. Ask: what has the speaker learned, remembered, lost, or reconsidered before each recurrence?
- The final arrival: Pay close attention to whether the last return confirms the opening, contradicts it, mourns it, or leaves it unresolved. Ask: if the final line were encountered alone, what would be missing, and what has the preceding poem added to it?
Read beyond the first example and resist judging every Quatern by one preferred treatment. The form can support direct narrative, meditative lyric, playful speech, and symbolic argument. Comparison helps reveal which effects belong to the shared design and which arise from an individual poet's voice.
Writing Tips
Begin with an emotional or imaginative situation that benefits from returning, not merely a sentence that is easy to repeat. The strongest starting line contains an image, assertion, question, or tension that can survive changes of context. Before shaping the full draft, write the line at the top of a page and list several possible meanings it might acquire. This keeps formal planning connected to discovery: the poem should not simply carry the line through its pattern, but transform the reader's relationship to it.
- Choose material with stages: Favor subjects that can unfold through recollection, contrast, escalation, reconsideration, or changing perspective. A static description may struggle to generate meaningful returns. Sketch the emotional movement first: where does the speaker begin, and what becomes harder or clearer as the poem proceeds?
- Give the recurring line flexibility: Avoid loading it with names, dates, or explanatory detail unless those specifics can resonate repeatedly. A vivid but open image often travels better than a complete summary. Test whether the line can sound tender in one place and troubled, comic, or defiant in another.
- Design contexts, not padding: A common beginner mistake is writing filler solely to reach the next required return. Make every intervening line earn its place through action, sensory detail, argument, or tonal pressure. If a passage only restates what readers already know, replace it with a consequence or complication.
- Let syntax create surprise: The recurring line need not bear exactly the same grammatical relationship to its neighbors every time. It can answer one sentence and challenge another. Preserve its wording while experimenting with punctuation and sentence boundaries, but do not force awkward constructions merely to produce novelty.
- Use the compact measure as an editing tool: Short lines expose vague verbs, bulky phrases, and unnecessary transitions. Prefer exact nouns and active verbs over compressed prose that sounds unnatural. Do not twist ordinary word order simply to satisfy count or rhyme; formal correctness cannot compensate for a voice no one would believe.
- Build a sound world around the return: Even without an elaborate rhyme plan, repeated vowels, consonants, and rhythmic gestures can make the poem cohere. Avoid surrounding every recurrence with the same obvious echo, which can make the pattern sing-song. Vary sonic density according to the poem's emotional pressure.
- Differentiate the stanzas: Let each passage perform a distinct task, such as establishing a scene, introducing conflict, widening the perspective, or facing a consequence. If every stanza begins again from the same emotional point, the refrain will feel mechanical rather than cumulative.
- Prepare the ending without announcing it: The last return should feel inevitable in structure but newly charged in meaning. Avoid explaining immediately beforehand what readers are supposed to feel. Instead, place a precise image, revelation, or tonal turn close enough to alter the familiar words without interpreting them for the audience.
During revision, mark every abstract phrase, weak verb, forced rhyme, and unnatural inversion. Read the draft aloud once for rhythm and again while pausing before each recurrence; those pauses reveal whether anticipation is building or merely repeating. Finally, ask another reader what changed for them each time the line returned. If the answer is little or nothing, revise the surrounding action and imagery rather than decorating the refrain itself.
Interesting Facts
- A repeated line does not produce a repeated experience. Its changing position alters what the reader hears before and after it. The same words can function successively as premise, interruption, evidence, and consequence without being rewritten.
- The opening carries delayed responsibilities. Readers first encounter it without knowing all the work it must later perform. On rereading, however, they can hear its ambiguities from the beginning. This makes a well-made Quatern especially rewarding to revisit.
- Predictability can create suspense. Once the reader expects the familiar line, attention shifts toward how the poet will reach it. Smooth preparation can create inevitability, while a sharp tonal or syntactic approach can make the return feel startling.
- Formal freedom increases editorial responsibility. When rhyme and metrical emphasis are not used as dominant organizing devices, diction, internal sound, sentence rhythm, and image sequence must provide cohesion. Freedom from one constraint does not remove the need for musical design.
- Performance changes the refrain's force. A pause before the recurring line can make it sound ceremonial or ominous; carrying the syntax across it can make the return feel conversational and swift. Reading aloud reveals effects that the visual pattern alone may conceal.
- The ending can close or reopen the poem. A final recurrence may deliver resolution, but it can also expose doubt or send the reader back to reconsider the beginning. Its effectiveness depends less on finality than on accumulated context.
- Comparison reveals interpretive range. As you read the community poems, notice how different writers treat recurrence as comfort, obsession, testimony, comic callback, or emotional resistance. Several examples show that the form's identity can remain recognizable while its dramatic purpose changes.
Popular Themes
Subject matter and form interact most fruitfully when recurrence is part of the experience being represented. A Quatern naturally invites the reader to encounter an idea more than once, but never from quite the same position. The themes below are literary possibilities rather than claims about which subjects are statistically most popular in the collection.
- Memory and grief: A recurring line can resemble a thought the mind cannot release. New details may gradually turn remembrance into acceptance, anger, guilt, gratitude, or unresolved longing.
- Love and separation: Repetition suits promises, private phrases, remembered speech, and emotional questions. As circumstances change, affectionate words can acquire vulnerability, irony, or the weight of absence.
- Nature and seasonal change: A stable image such as a tree, tide, bird, snowfall, or fading light can anchor shifting observations. The repeated image lets the poem measure change against apparent continuity.
- Family and inheritance: Recurrence can echo traits, stories, habits, and conflicts passed between generations. Each return may connect an individual moment to a larger pattern without requiring extensive exposition.
- War, conflict, and public witness: A returning statement can gather moral urgency as consequences emerge. It may sound first like a claim, then like evidence, protest, accusation, or lament.
- Faith, ritual, and doubt: The refrain can evoke prayer or ceremonial language, while its changing context tests conviction. A repeated declaration may strengthen through adversity or become more complicated with each appearance.
- Humor and everyday mishap: Anticipation supports comic timing. A familiar line can operate as a running joke, an increasingly absurd excuse, or a deadpan response whose meaning shifts as the situation escalates.
- Music and creative practice: The returning phrase can behave like a melodic motif, while surrounding passages supply variations in mood and intensity. This invites close attention to cadence and sound.
Browse the poems in this collection with these possibilities in mind, but look beyond subject labels. Two poets may address love, nature, or family while producing entirely different emotional journeys. Compare how each writer chooses the recurring line, changes its context, and decides what the reader should hear in its final return.
Editorial Insights
The central artistic tension of the Quatern lies between recurrence and discovery. The reader knows that familiar language will return, yet a memorable poem ensures that familiarity never becomes mere duplication. Its refrain acts as a stable verbal object placed under changing emotional light. The words remain available to memory while their implications expand, contract, darken, or become ironic. This tension is what gives the structure necessity: the subject itself must seem to require repeated encounter.
A technically recognizable draft may place every element correctly and still feel assembled. Stronger work creates causal or emotional movement between returns. An image introduced early may gain symbolic force; a speaker's certainty may weaken; a narrative detail may expose the cost hidden inside the opening statement. Editors notice whether each passage changes the conditions under which the recurring line is heard. They also listen for natural syntax, controlled cadence, and sound patterns that support the voice without calling attention away from the poem's human stakes.
Predictability becomes a weakness when the refrain says everything at its first appearance and the rest of the poem merely illustrates it. Mechanical transitions, filler inserted to maintain the pattern, strained word order, and over-insistent rhyme can make formal compliance more visible than thought. Over-explanation causes a related problem: if the poet tells readers exactly how the refrain has changed, the return loses its power to demonstrate that change. Insufficient development is equally damaging. Repetition intensifies only when something meaningful accumulates around it.
Individuality survives the shared convention through diction, perspective, sentence movement, imagery, humor, restraint, and the kind of transformation the poet asks the refrain to undergo. One writer may make the line an emotional anchor; another may allow it to become unreliable. One may favor seamless transitions, while another uses the return as a deliberate break in thought. As you compare several community poems, attend to which pieces make you anticipate the recurring words and which make you reconsider them afterward. That comparison develops a more discerning sense of quality than checking structure alone, because it reveals when craft, subject, and voice have become inseparable.
Read, Write & Share
Read several community poems before settling on a single impression of what a Quatern can accomplish. Compare the changing role of each refrain, the movement between stanzas, and the way different poets prepare the final return. When a poem stays with you, leave a thoughtful comment about a specific image, tonal shift, sound, or moment of transformed repetition.
Then try composing your own. Choose a line capable of gathering new meaning, test it aloud in changing contexts, revise away anything merely mechanical, and publish the finished poem on PoetrySoup so other readers can respond to your interpretation of the form.
Collection Statistics
This collection currently includes 559 poems, providing a broad field for reading beyond a single model. Visitors can compare how poets handle recurring language, tonal development, sound, imagery, and closure across many individual interpretations. Some poems may follow established conventions closely, while others may adapt or challenge them. Taken together, the collection offers opportunities to examine both formal recognition and the creative choices that give each contribution its own character.
Quatern Categories
Read wonderful quatern poetry on the following sub-topics:
christmas, death, dog, family, food, friends, funny, kids, life, love, music, nature, school, sports, war
and more.
Definition | What is Quatern in Poetry?
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