Holding Back Tears


She stood there, holding back her tears,
      He was going far, what to do?
She had to keep aside all fears,
      Or she would end up feeling blue,

      A soldier was going for war,
She stood there, holding back her tears,
      Would he come back safe? Her heart tore,
For he was posted at frontiers,

Looking back, recalling past years,
      She smiled as she bade him goodbye,
She stood there, holding back her tears,
      Her fearful heart stifling a sigh,

      The hope of her meeting him soon
Kept egging her on, as life steers,
      Each day, she’d pray under the moon,
She stood there, holding back her tears.




07.31.2021

For Edward Ibeh's "This or That, Vol 5" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Hard to hold back tears when a love one is leaving. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
Alex Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 8:09 AM
Touching the heart. Great Work. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Gorgeous piece that tugs at the heartstrings, Jo:-) Great job! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:39 AM
It is so common; very few families have not been impacted by loving a soldier. In my case it was my daughter who joined the Air Force during the Gulf War.
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 8:34 PM
Related to this one so well. Have a son at the Lebanese border. Thanks, Jo.
Pandit Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Many can relate to the emotive scene, Jo. Much rhythm to these poignant words. Beautifully done.
Rose  Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 4:10 AM
It takes serious love to hold on to someone as they walk away, into the danger zone, very poignant poem dear Jo, thankyou for sharing have a great weekend :)
Y. Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 3:55 AM
WoW! Jo, This is a good entry for the contest. A loved one going off to war is so heartbreaking. Your poem complemented the photo very well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 3:07 AM
A common scene in wartime, hard to lead a normal life while her loved one is way. Good luck Jo and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 1:20 AM
Almost heartbreaking. Hope he will return. Best wishes.
Evans Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 1:13 AM
So, so lovely, Jo! Best wishes on the contest.
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