~ Oh Wondrous Christmas Day ~
( The Tree)
~O~
Day
Of joy
Filled with Love
Celebration
Birth of our Savior
Time of cheer and good will
World proclaim His majesty
Christ is Lord and King eternally
D
A
Y
OF JOY
~o~
Christ
Jesus
Came today
Sent by Father
To bring us all joy
Died for your sins and mine
Rose and lives now in Heaven
Christmas time is all about Him
C
H
R
I
S
T
JESUS
~O~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2023
December.15.2023
'Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.'
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
"The Tree" is a poetry form or style created by Dorian Petersen Potter, aka Ladydp2000, on September, 20,2009
.
So now Faith, Hope, and Love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is Love.
1 Corinthians 13:13 (NIV)
"Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power."
- Abraham Lincoln -
~O~
"Lord, make me an instrument of thy peace. Where there is hatred, let me sow love."
-Francis of Assisi-
Going back in time to save you two
For almost 10 years is all I've wanted to do
The thought of it possesses my very soul
It obsesses my mind and heart - it's taking a toll
I've heard 2028 is when time travel will be possible
If I get up the money to go - I'll be ing unstoppable
I'm make sure I do my research and get the accurate time and dates
And I'll take back your greatest mistakes
Would you believe me if I said it to you?
Would you believe that I came back to save you two?
Would it disrupt the rift of the universe's effect?
Or could it backfire on me and forever you two I'll forget?
I'm so broken inside - when you two killed yourselves and died - I did too
I can't believe you guys truly did it - it's true
I'll find a way to save both of you
Would you believe me or laugh in my face?
Would you believe me initial reaction in the first place?
Obsessive, compulsive, impatient, and so ing scared
I can't believe suicide you two even dared
I'm mad, enraged, pulsating - irate!
But something tells me it's never too late...
RIP MATTHEW EVAN CARTER 1985-2016
RIP ERIC ALAN PETERSEN 1986-2013
~ Autumn Has Come ~
( Rick's 32 )
~O~
Autumn's come
Weather is cool
Trees change hues
Gold, browns, copper, greens, reds
Trees start losing their leaves
Leaves then fall
Sometimes they soar
In the wind
~o~
Autumn's fun
Great Holidays
Pumpkins, masks
Adults, kids, have great time
Halloween's a fun night
Treat or trick
Then celebrate
Thanksgiving
~o~
Yes, autumn's
At last is here
I'm happy
No more sweat, hot weather
Relax, eat piece of pie
Have good time
With family
And Thank God
~o~
For all friends
For everything
Autumn's come
Is a time of Thanksgiving
To look back and Give Grace
Summer's gone
But be glad that
Autumn's come.
~O~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2021
November.01.2022
-“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain -
~Author's Notes:
' The Ricks' 32 ' is a poetry style created by Erich J. Goller (Vienna) in 2008.
Tell me, why your thought comes to mind,
throughout day; how our thoughts we bind?
Do you also have same feeling?
Don't know, is it love that causes
to think or natural forces?
Surely, I'm not in day dreaming.
Tell me, why your thought comes to mind,
throughout day; how our thoughts we bind?
Does it happen at any age
or just only in true love stage?
Do you also have same feeling?
Surely, I'm not in day dreaming.
Tell me, why your thought comes to mind,
throughout day; how our thoughts we bind?
~x~
Sonnetina Rispetto is a new poetry form
created by Dorian Petersen Potter on September 8, 2009.
This form has 14 lines with 8 syllables each.
It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or
with an Octave(8) and a Sestet(6) lines.
The rhyme scheme is as follows: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2.
The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2…stands for the refrain lines in the poem.
Pasted from http://the.a.b.c.of.poetry.styles.patthepoet.com/OtoS.html
Thanks to Christina R Jussaume for the resources at PoetryStyles site.
~ I Give You My Love ~
( Mirrored Rondelet)
~O~
Give you my Love
See the sky with stars, and the moon
Give you my Love
Sent to us all way from above
As night leaves, brings promising dawn
Gracefully Love, glides like a swan
Give you my Love
Give you my Love
Gracefully Love, glides like a swan
As night leaves, brings promising dawn
Sent to us all way from above
Give you my Love
See the sky with stars, and the moon
Give you my Love
~O~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017
February.24.2020
“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
The ' Rondelet ' is a French poetry form or style.
The " Mirrored Rondelet " is a poetry form or style that was created by
Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000,in 2010.
I just love all the repetitions or refrains in all of the French poetry forms, I guess, it must be
a lot of that French blood that I have in me :)))...lol
~ My Dearest Love ~
( Cinquain Suite )
~O~
For you
My love grows more
With heart so full of love
While dreaming of you always 'neath
Moon stars
o~ O ~o
So soft
Your love just comes
Like a breath of fresh air
I feel your presence inside me
Day night
o~ O ~o
You are
My shining star
My only one true love
My love for you will always shine
So true
o~ O ~o
My sweet
Love I love you
So and very much more
For you my loves forever and
Ever.
~O~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017
February.05.2020
“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
The " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the American Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.
~ Coloring Is Fun ~
( Whitney's Kiss )
Coloring
Books, are great fun
So many
Are to choose from
Just awesome!
For all moods, taste
Get one, two, three, maybe more
Color away, sky, indoor
It's much fun. Learn,
Pick Colors
I just love it
Soothe mind, soul
Relieve your stress
Books bring joy.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2018
January.16.2020
'Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.'
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
The "Whitney’s Kiss " is a poetry form or style created by Janet Vick.
It is 14 lines with syllable counts of 3,4,3,4,3,4,7,7,4,3,4,3,4,3. The 7 syllable lines rhyme. Any subject.
"Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power."
- Abraham Lincoln -
~ With All My Heart ~
( Lanterne Suite )
~0~
I
Love you
So very
Much more and just
More
~0~
Each
Day night
All the time
With all my heart
Soul
~0~
As
I dream
Of only
You neath moonbeams
Stars
~0~
Hold
Me tight
My sweet love
Never let me
Go
~0~
As
I dream
Of always
Been with you my
Love
~0~
Just
Kiss me
Now more and
More and all the
Time
~0~
I
Love you
Forever
And always my
Love
~0~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017
January.13.2020
“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
The " Lanterne or Lanturne" is a syllabic Japanese form or style shaped like a lantern.
~Master Painters~
(The Cinquain Chain )
~O~
Paintings
Some beautiful
Masterpieces I love
The Mona Lisa with that smile
Arcane
Arcane
Delightful ones
Paintings that bring much joy
Rembrandt, Vermeer, Van Gogh, Kinkaid
Masters
Masters
Of great paintings
God given gifts that glows
Study their work looking at them
Brings joy
Brings joy
Many stand time
Picasso, great painter
J. Waterhouse, just mention some, are
All great.
~O~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012
December.09.2019
“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain
~Author's Notes:
The " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.
~ Autumn Has Come ~
( Rick's 32 )
~O~
Autumn's come
Weather is cool
Trees change hues
Gold, browns, copper, greens, reds
Trees start losing their leaves
Leaves then fall
Sometimes they soar
In the wind
Autumn's fun
Great Holidays
Pumpkins, masks
Adults, kids, have great time
Halloween's a fun night
Treat or trick
Then celebrate
Thanksgiving
Yes, autumn's
At last is here
I'm happy
No more sweat, hot weather
Relax, eat piece of pie
Have good time
With family
And Thank God
For all friends
For everything
Autumn's come
Is a time of Thanksgiving
To look back and Give Grace
Summer's gone
But be glad that
Autumn's come.
~O~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2010
November.26.2019
-“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain -
~Author's Notes:
' The Ricks' 32 ' is a poetry style created by Erich J. Goller (Vienna) in 2008.
~ Forever My Love ~
( Lanterne Suite )
~0~
I
Keep you
So close to
My heart and my
Soul
~0~
You
Melt my
Heart you bring
Me much joy my
Love
~0~
Just
Dreaming
I am here
Of you all the
Time
~0~
You
Are my
Sweetest dream
My only one
Love
~0~
In
My mind
Kissing and
Holding you my
Love
~0~
Can't
Never
Get enough of
All you say and
Do
~0~
As
I dream
Of only you
Here always my
Love
~0~
Just
Love me
Always and
Never let me
Go
~0~
Please
Never
Stop loving me
My very sweet
Love
~0~
Love
You so
Hold you tight
Forever my
Love
~0~
I
Love you
Forever
And always my
Love.
~0~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017
November.22.2019
“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
The "Lanterne or Lanturne " is a syllabic Japanese form or style shaped like a lantern.
~Fall Is Amazing~
(Linked)
Fall is am'zing
F
Am'zing and nice
A
Nice to see trees
L
Trees just changing
L
Changing take place
I
Place this season
S
Season of change
A
Change all around
M
Around we see
A
See weather start
Z
Start to get cool
I
Cool outside home
N
Home warm in fall
G
Fall is am'zing.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2010
November.18.2019
-“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain -
~Author's Notes:
" The Linked" is a poetry style created by Erich J. Goller. ( Vienna ) in 2008 .
~ Always And Forever ~
( Lanterne Suite )
Hold
You so
Close always
Your loves in my
Heart
~0~
Your
Love makes
Me happy
With you my heart
Sings
~0~
Each
Day I
Desire more
Your love dream of
You
~0~
You
Are so
Beautiful
Through you I feel
Love
~0~
Each
Day you're
A blessing
You're in my heart
Thoughts
~0~
I
Love you
Always and
Forever my
Love.
~0~
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017
November.07.2019
“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
The "Lanterne or Lanturne " is a syllabic Japanese form or style shaped like a lantern.
~My Sweet Love ~
( Cinquain Suite )
My love
You're my sweet dream
My one, only true love
The one I love forever and
Always
o~0~o
For you
My love grows more
With heart so full of love
While dreaming of you always 'neath
Moon, stars
o~0~o
Your love
Is a candlelight
That just never goes out
With true love I follow always
Your light
o~0~o
Love you're
So beautiful
In your heart, soul, see love
And always, forever I do
Love you.
o~0~o
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017
April.26.2019
“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
The " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the American Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.
~ With All My Heart ~
( Lanterne )
I
Love you
So very
Much and more just
More
~0~
Each
Day night
All the time
With all my heart
Soul
~o~0~o~
As
I dream
Of only
You 'neath the moon
Stars
~o~0~o~
Hold
Me tight
My sweet love
Never let me
Go
~o~0~o~
I
Love you
Forever
And always my
Love
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017
April.05.2019
“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.”
- Mark Twain-
~Author's Notes:
The " Lanterne or Lanturne" is a syllabic Japanese form or style shaped like a lantern.
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