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Anatolian Dreams

“Go and catch a falling star.”
(John Donne)

St Barbara, a poor white gloved icy ingénue,
Has long been a dusty piece of Black Forest wood
That grew out of the ashes of Sibylline books;
The black stone is gone from the Palatine --

Only infinitesimal phantasmagoria of the sea
Dwells deep within the grave mound of the soul
Whilst carrying a torch clothed with the sun;
Nikola Tesla still feeds a pigeon every day --

It’s an aperiodic dolphin atavism.

Awakened by an unknown lyre,
Such things drink virtue from a moon beam;
Only Saturn, the herald of lavender hope,
Silently watches the humble bird

From the depths of our star-drenched earth.

Premium Member Twilight Captive

Formless and soft gossamer air
Wherein twilight ghosts reside
My senses and mind are gently invaded 
Willingly captive to distant past.




Palatine Hill
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30-08-2021

Premium Member Palatine Hill

 A lifetime ago
Before age caught up with me
I walked Palatine hill
     Skirting decapitated sculptures-
that speak of beauty and
Graceful arches a joy to see
Elegant ruined temples-
retain a sense of mystery
     Spring grass hosts colourful wildflowers'
Together their perfume's a narcotic fragrance
Opening portal to erstwhile time
Faint whispers torment as -
     Atmospheric breath sweeps hillside
Giving rise to the supernatural
Formless and soft gossamer air
Wherein twilight ghosts reside
     My senses and mind are gently invaded
Willingly captive to distant past
Memory savored of a bygone world
Living the moment on Palatine Hill.


Sanmati Jain a Source, Part V

Sanmati, my angel, has decorated jawline.
Aside puts cold anger and does repine
Negative things in her life, but always supine
Merry things about the wide world divine.
Against me or her things she despise saline.
Tough tenderness she got for me in palatine,
Ignoring angry love or a speck on her tine
Jot down related things like family of feline.
Almighty may support her in future design
Illustrating Triumph and Failure, outshine
Nebo by her sweet behavior saccharine.

Now, Palatine

the odor is brown
home wreaks of it
its emote 
sullen; somber

detriments
heavy waste
pervades

Premium Member The Swan King - Key To My Heart

~The Swan King~ 
(Key To My Heart) 



Dream 
Within 
A dream 
Breathless 
Symphony 
Castle********Of dreams 
Romantic King of Bavaria 
King Ludwig II was that 
Yes was that and more 
Tender hearted tortured soul 
Unforgettable 
His vision unique 
Forever 
A gift 
that keeps 
Giving 
Thru the years 
Misunderstood 
Not mad 
Sleep in 
Peace sweet 
King 




Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp200 
copyright@2012 


August.28.2015


~Authors notes: 

My very humble tribute to King Ludwig II of Bavaria. 

King Ludwig II or Ludwig Otto Friedrich Wilhelm, was King of Bavaria from 1864 until his death. He is sometimes called the Swan King and der Märchenkönig, the Fairy Tale King. He also held the titles of Count Palatine of the Rhine, Duke of Bavaria, Duke of Franconia, and Duke in Swabia. 

Ludwig II of Bavaria (1845-1886), King of Bavaria, 1864-1886~


"Key to my Heart" is a poetry style created by Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000 in 2010.


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