Sanmati Jain a Source, Part V

Sanmati, my angel, has decorated jawline.
Aside puts cold anger and does repine
Negative things in her life, but always supine
Merry things about the wide world divine.
Against me or her things she despise saline.
Tough tenderness she got for me in palatine,
Ignoring angry love or a speck on her tine
Jot down related things like family of feline.
Almighty may support her in future design
Illustrating Triumph and Failure, outshine
Nebo by her sweet behavior saccharine.
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Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 1:46 AM
The way you brandish words with dexterity is awe-inspiring. Keep it flowing and make hearts rejoice with your beautiful crafts.
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October 14, 2017 at 2:57 AM
Honour to receive such reviews. I will surely follow your instructions. My next poem is full of alliteration. Let's see how many valuable critics review my poems...
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