Muder Poems | Examples


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Murder Myself

Murder myself,
Murder myself,
cause all the pain that I have felt.
The lies and hurt that I have dealt,
I true do feel to murder myself.
Murder myself,
murder myself,
instead of killing someone else.
Let them too just kill themselves,
to swim in blood that's red has felt.
Murder themselves,
murder themselves.
Muder myself,
murder myself.

Fleeing Temptation's Grasp

Fleeing Temptation's Grasp...


There was a great king, 
whom did sin and fall.
David.  When from his balcony, 
Bathsheba he saw.

In his heart... he sinned as 
lust was conceived.
A plan of muder in his heart 
was soon received.

This sin led to another 
and had soon willed.
To have Bathsheba's 
husband to be killed.

The consequences of his sin
 was later explained.
His first born died, and his 
son Absalom was slain.

Once his sin was conceived, 
it brought lust and soon death.
Sin is always this way--
until you take your last breath.

Think of the consequences... 
and flee tempation FAST.
Enjoy a victory and blessings 
from God that will last!

By Jim Pemberton

Trapped and Then Saved

I could'nt escape it, it had me
trapped. I was screaming bloody muder,
but noone could hear me,
and if they did, why were'nt they helping me?
Didn't they hear me screaming for help?
Didn't they see the large knife, that
was being held to my throat,
he had me trapped, and I was screaming trying to
get away from him, I finally got free,
I ran, but he caught me, and gave me a small
cut, I bled, and screamed,
hot tears falling from my face,
That is when he appeared
the love of my life,
he saved me,
He killed him, and took the knife
from him, and deposed it in the 
dumpster. "Why does a gut need a knife
like that anyway?"
"I have no Idea." I replied in a shaky voice.
He pulled me in for a kiss, and
said, "I'm never gonna let that 
happen again, baby doll."
I felt relieved, to know that I didn't
have to live in fear
anymore, knowing that he was gone
forever.
Briana Lynn Minard(Pickett)


Fleeing Tamptaion the Story of David and Bathsheba

There was a great king, 
whom did sin and fall.
David.  When from his balcony, 
Bathsheba he saw.

In his heart... he sinned as 
lust was conceived.
A plan of muder in his heart 
was soon received.

This sin led to another 
and had soon willed.
To have Bathsheba's 
husband to be killed.

The consequences of his sin
 was later explained.
His first born died, and his 
son Absalom was slain.

Once his sin was conceived, 
it brought lust and soon death.
Sin is always this way--
until you take your last breath.

Think of the consequences... 
and flee tempation FAST.
Enjoy a victory and blessings 
from God that will last!

By Jim Pemberton   
2007

King David and Bathsheba

There was a great king, 
whom did sin and fall.
David.  When from his balcony, 
Bathsheba he saw.

In his heart... he sinned as 
lust was conceived.
A plan of muder in his heart 
was soon received.

This sin led to another 
and had soon willed.
To have Bathsheba's 
husband to be killed.

The consequences of his sin
 was later explained.
His first born died, and his 
son Absalom was slain.

Once his sin was conceived, 
it brought lust and soon death.
Sin is always this way--
until you take your last breath.

Think of the consequences... 
and flee tempation FAST.
Enjoy a victory and blessings 
from God that will last!

By Jim Pemberton   
05/14/08

Why Have It...

It lives inside all of us. Doesn't it?
No, it only lives in some.
Some don't have it.
Some aren't able to use it.
Some choke it and throw it in a corner.
Some choke it further so it is silenced forever.
Muder it's called.
Those are the worst (smartest?).

A conscious choice was made to give them up.

A conscious choice, conscience.

They kill it.
Easier not to feel, not to allow others around you to feel.
Feelings, the word is perverse.
It should be removed from all language,..NO, all thought.
No one uses them anyway.
They only use the word.


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