Muddying Poems | Examples


Premium MemberThe Brumby 6-25

The brumby of Australia, not known to be well bred
Some are tough as leather, but that not often said
More criticised that praised, for damage that they do
Muddying the waterholes, as cattle never do

The biggest problem that they have, their wish to have a roll
Find some nice clean water, then muddy up the hole
They will get to station horses, the mares have foul breed foals
The quality completely gone, and fences torn to holes

The stockman love to muster them, the wildest of the rides
Chase them way along the flat, and down the mountain sides
But we also have a saying, and is so very true
You should never kill a good horse, as some brumby chasers do

So though it is so very sad, we have to thin them out
We can only breed fine horses, if no brumbies are about
Your life depends on stamina, and full trust in your mount
It is your horse that saves your life, more times than you can count
Categories: muddying, animal,
Form: Rhyme

The Trains of Cunning

The trains of cunning

Two men in a vast field of grain waited for the trains
to meet on a one-track railway line, one a mathematician 
had worked out where the train would meet
the other was a reporter skilled in muddying the news.
Of the train drivers, one has a skilled hand used to getting 
his way, the other was an upstart backed by western money
and told to call the older man’s bluff.
And there, in the brilliant winter light, they saw the trains
At great speed nearing, the point of no return.
There was a side track where one of the trains could stop
And let the other one through, but would they choose 
To be sensible; we shall not know.
I mighty missile struck the track and blew part of it away
The driver of the eastern train was able to stop, but not so
the driver of the western train that ran onto the prairie 
that had no cowboys or cattle and exploded.
The mathematician was happy his calculation was right
the reporter wrote an obfuscating article telling readers
 the west had won; the man from the east smiled his
calculations had been spot on.
Categories: muddying, blessing, confidence, hate,
Form: Imagism


Feast At the Swamp

those  fresh swamp rains came
 muddying faces of  swamp,
       all    toads and frogs feast...
Categories: muddying, adventure, allusion, appreciation, extended
Form: Haiku

She Protests Too Much

With irascible words, she continues to bemoan
Writing about poets with whom she picks a bone
Chastising those who like to compete in contests
She's infected with hate, like a pustulant abscess

Her bitter sarcasm abounds for quite a few poets
Shaming their competitiveness, then she blows it
She adds POTD beside her poem title when chosen
but her attitude is not what I would call ambrosian

Her "truth" is not what all of us choose to believe
It's so sad that she tries to offend us and aggrieve
She doth protest too much, and it's unbecoming
She's muddying the site with so much chumming

Many of us write what lies deep within our hearts
But we're not what she calls arrogant or up-starts.
We don't need our wrists slapped, like she has said
Leeches try to draw blood. We don't need to be bled.
Categories: muddying, bullying,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberAged Swamp Monster Lament

I get tired of their dead muddying up my clean fresh waters for sure.
I drag these bodies back to them day and night, hoping for a cure.
Oh, sorry, they apologize, as if they did not know what they did.
Wonder at their ethics, these weird two legs, worse than squid.

This one was the ugliest yet, with long hair that had not been washed at all.
I lifted her from the resting place of a school of fish forming a gentle squall.
She was heavier than the little ones they throw in, maybe it was the hair.
I lifted her back up and threw her onto their deck without a nod or care.

Ooh! One of the pirates said. This one looks pretty great if you ask me.
I guess they were going to form her into a stew or steak with brie.
I had tasted steak once when they threw it into my clean cool water.
Then I heard a scream and someone yelled “Hey! That’s my daughter!”

Not sure what a daughter is. Maybe it is a synonym for lunch.
All I know is that this one weighed more than a bit of a bunch.
I am sick of the two legs throwing their dead into the water.
I hope that they throw back a little taste of this heavy daughter.
Categories: muddying, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Rhyme


Crushed

I tug my vibrant summertime skirt
but it unravels from a chair ;
Reaching dutifully for muse's pen
this mind now becomes a haze.
I seek to light an imaginative flame
still, phrases yield not to me,
and with despair in the glaze of sunglow
imagination's furnace would not spark
on crushed pages seemingly obscure--
Beneath verses smashed by juggled letters
my fresh ink muddying through heated hours
and papers remain blank with dead-end rhymes.


16th June 2020
Crushed Contest by Anthony Biaanco
Categories: muddying, conflict, writing,
Form: Dramatic Verse

Premium MemberBeware He's Circling Soup In a Veiled Disguise

There's a shark swimming in the soup
quietly circling and lurking
Hiding behind mean metaphors
and toothy snide similes

He's poised, ready to strike
and feast on the unwary
Ripping off the heads
of anyone muddying his waters

12/24/18

Contest Sponsor Anthony Slausin
Categories: muddying, bullying, conflict, poetry, prejudice,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberMarch

March…you melancholy madman
Lion or Lamb….
sibling rivalry’s unpredictability
bending the trees in bowed submission
coaxing  investment in your budding scheme
draping the hope of warmth under falling snow
muddying the future with drenching rains
lying to the nesting Robins
howling at an ice blue moon
dancing among the Jonquils
Lion or Lamb
Mother Nature’s siblings
taunting each other.


John G. Lawless
© 3/14/2017
Categories: muddying, march,
Form: Free verse

Enemy Inside of Me

Enemy Inside of Me

I know what I have is at least one enemy;
It is temptation that lives inside of me,
And so deeply buried yet still secure;
How much of it can I really endure?

With God always surely am safe and sane
As long as inside me He does remain
I do pray daily while Bible am studying
And others their water may be muddying.

I also love reading God's each Psalm
Brings peace to my soul making me calm
Still things exist in world which do disturb
And I decided to read one more proverb.

While some in mud and sin may wallow
Only true Son of God will I forever follow
Until my last day when I have been dying
On God's Son still will continually be relying.

Jesus, enemy from me be sure to remove
So that my life again will start to improve
And no longer can there be another tragedy
God purified me, my soul and whole anatomy.

James Serious Mysterious Horn
Retired Veteran and Poet








http://www.poetrysoup.com/poets/top_100_poets_most_poems_all_time.aspx
Categories: muddying, allegory, analogy, religious,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberPushing the Envelope

With the unlikely proposition that winter would end
	green tips took

form

             beneath the softening crust of snow around the

mail
	box, a

collage congealed by road salt and sand
               buried the early dream of spring in 

a
	granular mass 

My slippered feet sank muddying the soft 
           sheepskin leather. Joggers pushing the envelope
	as well

people the curb

cutting to the heart of the matter
	springing forward with a rabid desire to bloom.




*I printed out Charlotte's contest direction and cut out the first word
in each of these lines.
Categories: muddying, spring,
Form: Free verse

The Tall Country

There are these dreams you 
never want to wake from.
Last night you sat in a theatre, 
watching a movie, marveling at Spain, 
unrolling before your eyes, a memory
of the Pyranees you never wanted
to leave, dream mountain images,
dream lakes more impossibly 
grandiose and gorgeous than anything 
in waking life.  Then, starring 
in your own movie, the one the Id 
spins for your nightly entrapment, 
there was no transition: you
did not step into the screen, as in 
a Woody Allen imagining.
There was even a landmark 
the mind holds to station in a later 
story, so that in the unknown
there's something known. The mind 
muddying reality, as if reality 
wasn't muddy enough.  The mind 
up to its old tricks: layering comfort 
in the tall country so you never want
to leave. Your last leave taking, 
maybe something like that.
Categories: muddying, dream,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberThe Misfit

The forest's morning sunlight tip-toes through the trees
casting puzzle pieces round, oh so, carelessly;
hiding all the corner bits scattered by the breeze.

The slighter boles of ash whisper endlessly
as their upright slash of gray teases 'tween the green
while their larger cousins stand, oh so, stoically.

And, the sky far over head blues the in between
back lighting, spruce and pine, as far as the eye can see.
Man intrudes like a child, man and his machines.  

Knocking down the squirrel's nest, disturbing the bee 
leaving waste along the path, muddying the stream
misplaced is his disregard in that we all agree. 

Oh so brashly, mankind walks through nature's domain 
a misfit son, a terror, crippling while he reigns.
Categories: muddying, men, nature,
Form: Terza Rima

Raingod's Song

Down and down and down they fall,
into rivers and oceans and seas,
into eyes looking up,
and onto uncaring heads,
making streams gurgle again,
overflowing suburban birdbaths,
filling a little bottlecap on the side of the road,
making a puddle in a tiny dip,
muddying the roads where tires run through,
down and down and down they fall,
my tears water the earth,
and without them there would be nothing.
Categories: muddying, devotion, life, nature,
Form: Free verse
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter