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disfigured

A poem about the recent loss of my identical twin sister. I love and miss you, sis...

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there were two of me
once

not in the way people mean
when they talk about reflection
or similarity
or matching outfits in photographs

i mean two heartbeats
that learned each other
before language
before memory
before the world could name us separate

you were not beside me
you were with me
woven through one another
a second nervous system
a quiet, constant knowing
i never had to reach for


blue eyes
identical to mine 
but still entirely yours 

and now

reality keeps insisting
i am singular 

as if that is not an amputation

as if i have not been bisected
without anesthesia 

in a way that leaves no clean edge
no visible place to point and say
“this is where she was.”

i walk around
with an invisible wound

something missing

mutilated

i was torn apart
and whatever held me together 
went with you 

people look at me
and see a whole body

but i feel

disfigured 

expected to live
without a vital organ


who am i
without the person
who made me make sense

who am i
without the witness
who knew me before i became
someone existent

they tell me
you are still here
in my laugh
in my hands
in the small, indescribable things

but that feels like
being asked to accept fragments
as a whole

i don’t want traces
i want what was ripped from me 
as something outside of me
someone i could turn toward
someone who could look back
and lay your head on my shoulder 

not this silence
stitched over
where you used to be 

nerve endings exposed
left this way

there is no buffer
to help make sense of the world

turned inside out
like all the parts meant to be protected
are suddenly visible

and still

somewhere beneath the damage
beneath the wrongness of being only one

there is a thread
that did not break

i feel it

in the quiet moments
once filled with your voice

not gone
just unreachable

like a room in a house
i no longer have the key to

there were two of me

once

and even now

in ways i cannot prove

or properly survive


there still are.


A Cold Winter Sigh

A frost cloud hovers above me
Numbing my senses
Trying to freeze a vital organ inside you see
Sometimes it gets so cold nothing seems to matter
As im put in a deep freeze
I spit it up
And cough out my lungs
Feeling dissappionted with the world
As im sure it will be also with me
I guess i could live a life unsung 
Because all this frustration in me builds pressure
Oh how i wish i could just run and fly 
What's the point in being sober
If you still feel like you want to die
Just want to run and hide
Waste away
And burn out in a twinkle of an eye
So are these thoughts in this cold winters sigh
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Naive Faith


At a frightful time when a vital organ of mine began to fail, 
I thought that was the beginning of the end,
for myriad modern medicines seemed not to work.
As the disaster came unushered in my beleaguered life 
the miserable mind plunged unanchored
into the unfathomable abyss of despair.

Hovering over the perilous edge of the receding hope 
the helpless mind sorely got the unmistakable signal 
that I had almost reached the end of the road.
I surrendered to the benevolent power of the almighty,
prayed for His blessings for the miraculous cure
contrived by the design of divine intervention.

In the darkness of opaque nights the tormented life found
in the wilderness the winding course illumined by His light.
To reach the seemingly unreachable shore my soul swam 
in the sea of uncertainty with naive faith on the supreme savior,
for I innocently believed to the core in the age-old axiom
that God’s grace protects whatever He creates.

As my servile senses perceived the reliant ways of providence
the feeling of getting assured protection in His benign shelter
invigorated my mental strength for the destined rejuvenation,
that I never thought my fragile psyche ever possessed.
My heart responded to the divine healing touch for revival,
being grateful to Him for holding up my devout conviction.

Premium Member Under the mystical veil of night, where stars whisper ancient secrets

Under the mystical veil of night, where stars whisper ancient secrets,
I feel my failure intensely, as if it were a vital organ,
Birthed by merciless gods, growing from the side of my head.
You can't hide it with a hat, and I can no longer sleep on that side, it's so tender and raw.
I was not faithful enough to carry this celestial burden up the mountain.
When I took my vows at nineteen,
I had no inkling that the gods wielded such cruelty.
Fear molds obedient servants, while courage is a grand illusion.
When I awoke, I wasn't awake enough to truly see.
Beneath the shade of whispering pines, I am enshrouded in a mantle of melancholy,
Each thought cascading like a dark river through the labyrinth of my mind,
An endless tale of failures and unfulfilled desires,
A cosmic dance of pain and shattered hopes.
I feel my failure throbbing in sync with the beat of my heart,
An invisible organ, yet ever-present, sculpted by gods too harsh.
I cannot hide it, nor soften its sting,
It is part of me, an indelible chapter of my unpolished story.
Often, I ponder whether I was ever strong enough,
If my vows bore any true weight,
Or if I was merely a servant to fear,
A deceitful soul, searching for courage in the shadows of misplaced dreams.
Under the starry canopy, I lose myself in a sea of thoughts,
Each star a distant memory of what I could have been,
A reflection of all my failures and dreams,
A universe of possible realities, all woven into the fabric of my story.
When I awoke, the harshness of reality cut deep,
I was not awake enough to face its unyielding truths,
But in this twilight of semi-consciousness,
I discovered a strange beauty, a bittersweet melancholy,
That defines my existence, granting me the strength to continue.
For under the mystical veil of night, within the whispering pines,
I find solace in the depths of my own thoughts,
A painter of dreams, a weaver of worlds,
In an eternal ballet of failures and hopes,
I am, simply, and profoundly, myself.
© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member With Every Breath We Take

With every breath we take
It is the world that breathes
It the world that lives
And when we die what grieves

We are its vital organ
Its senses that proclaim self
Our laughter, our tears, our joy
Individual aspects of nonself

The beauty of a sunset
The wind blowing through trees
It is we who perceive
And through us the world sees-

Touches, taste, smells, and feels
Our dreams are the worlds dreams
All our hopes and our fears
The rushing brooks and streams

The sun rise ‘bove the mount
Surmounting all our doubt
The moon thro’ glooming night
midst the silence, a shout!

We need but feel a part
Of all that which we share
From the stars that clothe us
To every breath of fresh air


Premium Member Power of Prayer

At a time when a vital organ of mine began to fail, 
I thought that was the beginning of the end. 
The miserable mind plunged in the abyss of despair,
for modern medicines seemed not to work.

As I reached the fading edge of optimism, 
receiving the destiny’s signal for departure,
I submitted to the benevolence of the Almighty,
prayed for His blessings for miraculous cure .

I found in the gloom of the dismal nights, 
His light illumine the darkness of the future. 
My soul sailed in the sea of faith as never before,
and my organ got the divine healing touch.
 
I got a changed life as the epiphany dawned
with new sunrise in the firmament of consciousness,
my senses felt the essence of His munificence,
and I realized the power of prayer.

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August 27, 2022
Contest : The Epiphany That Changed Your Life Forever
Sponsored by : Chantelle Anne Cooke

Premium Member The Tip

At the end
of the river's exhausted reach
where swamp firmed
into solid ground, there was a place
the locals used as a tip.
Broken, worn out stuff
from clean outs, hoarded 
household effects finally let go,
garage junk 
and the discarded leftovers 
from deceased estates
were dumped there.

The place was a goldmine for boys
on the hunt for soapbox wheels
and parts or anything 
that could be used to build 
wonders blueprinted
on raging minds. Pipes bent 
into chopper handlebars 
to lend lift to a boring bike, fit outs
for tree houses, defenses for forts,
the frames for boats and airplanes 
that were born in hope
but would never float or fly
beyond a backyard.
The thrill was in the making.

When the council closed the tip
and moved it miles away,
it was as if a vital organ
in the neighborhood soul had been
taken out. Boys were deprived 
of the lifeblood and source
of their making. For some time,
groups would ride their bikes there
and pause before an empty space
and stare. They had no words 
for their grief. Slowly, the hole 
healed over though something
inside had been lost. The bounty
that was once provided by the tip
was replaced by shiny things 
bought brand new from shops.

Premium Member Divine Rejuvenation

I faced the miserable plight of a failing vital organ
Thought that was the beginning of the ordained end 
As modern medicines didn’t work the way they should
My mind plunged into the abyss of stark despondency.

I hovered at the crumbling edge of fading optimism 
Receiving destiny’s distinctive signal for departure
As the last resort I sought the benevolence of God
Prayed for His blessings for a miraculous recovery.

Agonized by the gloom of dismal nights I perceived
His radiance illumine the darkness of my fatal future 
My soul swam to the supreme savior in the sea of faith
Knowing that He always takes care of what He creates.

As my servitude sensed the signal of His omnipresence 
The trust of getting sure protection in His benign shelter
Enhanced my mental strength to fight for the rejuvenation 
I was blessed my organ revived through divine intervention.

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May 14, 2022
Contest : Divine Intervention
Sponsored by : Chantelle Anne Cooke

Premium Member My Heart

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                                                                    My\     I   /Heart
                                                       @ @oooooo\  I  /ooooo@ @
                                                 @The great power\I/house that@@@ 
                                           @stores up blood, thumping incessantly@@
                                        @@ in rising rhythm. The most vital organ @@
                                        @@in me. The great fulcrum that works day@@ 
                                        @ and night.   It being fragile with delicate@@@
                                         @@ tissues, incarcerated in the strong fortress@
                                          @@of sternum and ribs. It keeps working@@@
                                             @@ day and night sans leisure. If it goes@@
                                               @on strike, all our life will come to a@@@
                                                  @stop. It is a magic casket. It keeps@@
                                                       @beating- lub-dub, lub- dub @@
                                                          @sure, to my ears, such a@@
                                                                @@ sweet music@@@
                                                                       @ooooooooo@
                                                                             @ooo@

My Heart-
The great Powerhouse that stores up blood,
thumping incessantly in rising rhythm
The most vital organ in me.
The great fulcrum that works day and night
It being fragile with delicate tissues, incarcerated,
in the strong fortress of sternum and ribs.
It keeps working all through, sans rest.
If it goes on strike, our life will come to a stop.
It is a magic casket. It keeps beating-
lub-dub, lub-dub, sure, to my ears 
Such a sweet music.
Form: Other

Premium Member Churianna

something stirred in this place, long, long ago
  presence lingering
  half-hidden haven on the crowding hillside
  enchanted enclave
  Iberian portal still open to a time confused
  dreams drifting on through

  thrum across the gridiron, quiet gravel grinding gently
  the sentinel awakens
  drowsing, curious at the latest visitation from the future
  the bubble reseals behind
  the house is real...and unreal, the garden weaving spells
  light gathers and pools

  pause at the fronting porch, then enter an inner sanctum
  a fulcrum where eyes uplift
  dark images look down from a facing wall, side-lit
  high pointed fenestration
  shadows fall and mark fine furniture with moments passing
  feel the slowing...of now

  the outside follows room to room, minds roaming free
  tranquility lost in thought
  foliage frames fields above the sandy isthmus curving coast
  chameleon sky shaping
  worn-down mountain flat-top with broken-ended stack
  vantage glimpsed by gods

  vital organ chambers in this ancient time-spun being
  pleasure spots under the sun
  blissful verandah vista beyond the stay-forever lounge
  arterial corridor, cosy nooks
  quaint meandering kitchen parlour, the Churianna heart
  memories replenished

  oceanic winds deflect clear of the insulating calm
  cyclic seasons hesitate
  storm clouds cumulate around a thinning efflorescence
  imprisonment below
  containment creaks, dead weight of imagination lacking
  chain-gangs build borders and walls

  human habitation draws in, ... the membrane may burst !
  sky cracking, dreams leaking
  the sentinel awakes more fully, observing the scene
  small steps of avoidance
  humanity dances to a new tune, Inishowen reeling
  to the slow beat of aeonic time
© Ian Love  Create an image from this poem.

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