Long Tonic Poems

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Premium Member God Will Win

In La Crosse we see it's not very pretty; a goliath is towering but Altman is gritty'
The numbers are stacked the way I see, but number One can make your enemies flee
I'd faced the foe five weeks in all, with burning eyes cold sweat did fall; the darkness
Loomed as with ears on fire; I staggered and crawled under covids fire no mask no gloves
For me three cared; If we had known more we might have not so well fared'
Yet this is Dec 2019 the UK was supposed to have no sickness there' yet many signs I
Bore that year; a weight on my back; and  delirium dreary wore, depression stalked the walls closed in
My chest near solid, air seemed oh so thin, in my nostrils thick the stench extreme, yet I won through with the
Lord and prayer; a quinine tonic ever there, till the storm within me calmed then I knew
My sight was harmed.' My retina displayed clear dots of light; I thought what type of flu?
And rued
The fight'  yet after weeks my sight was improved , I'm healthy now my breath is well'
For 99'6 percent survive that's the fact I know to tell'  and that's why I strive; against misinformation
Against the tide' that beats against the free world's will, yet don't despair dilute the swill
James Altman makes a worthy stand, so Rally Rally around the man' no one is right
Before the Lord,  yet to serve in adversity we are called'
god
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member The Earl of Pence

'Twas a dark and stormy night! (OK - so I'm being a tad histrionic!)
The Earl of Pence was lounging by the fire sipping his gin and tonic.
Lightning flashed and thunder roared sending shivers down his spine.
Even his hound, Lord Percival, was so upset that he began to whine!

'Twas well-known thereabouts that phantoms haunted the earl's castle,
And on such frightful nights they were bound to cause a spooky hassle.
Nefarious deeds had occurred within Penceshire Castle walls in the past,
And were replayed in 'spirited' form leaving generations of earls aghast!

A shriek from the bowels of the castle sent the dog into howling fits,
And brought the earl bounding to his feet, scaring him out of his wits!
The blood-curdling screams were from a former Earl of Pence who in 1642,
Was hung by his thumbs in the dungeon for a fair maiden that he slew!

Suddenly, the ancient organ in the hall began playing eerie chords.
Heard on the floor above was rowdy dancing by ladies, knights and lords.
Ghastly emanations from the past paraded through the terrified earl's room,
Antecedents all, leering and grinning and predicting the anxious earl's doom!

Lord Percival sensing trouble long before, across the moat had bolted!
The storm subsided and the apparitions faded leaving the earl quite jolted!
He felt a bony hand upon his shoulder that took away his final breath.
'Twas his valet who offered a gin and tonic to the earl who now lay in death!
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Paesano of Gulf Circle

the gulf circle is where 
brown pelicans dive for their 
dinner over the heads 
of the hungry masculine 
wood storks looking men
swarming in schools like shark 
 
preying on beautiful elderly women 
for they jewels life savings retirements 
pensions property and real estate
anything he deems of value 
wearing khakis by day tropical 
shirts baring parrots coconuts

both hands in their sunken empty 
pockets scouring dreams and life 
savings of grandmothers and somebody's 
aunts strolling along the antique shops 
thrift shops following artists writers 
thrive awaiting a time to dive his prey 

shoulders raised and back knees knocked 
feet flat turned outward over canvas 
looking penny loafers he smells of cheap 
hair tonic his eyes lock beneath dark 
sunglasses while the woman approaches 
big straw hat beach bag retired poet 

brilliant writer removing her own book 
she took years to write the pink flamingo 
sings a warning for all ladies sunbathing 
to watch out run for cover while his knees 
pop and stretch backwards he opens 
his long beak of a nose and grunts 

he raises the longest arms unusually thin 
smooth fingers as if he never lifted not one 
of them to work ever he snatches the old 
woman book spilling her pink grapefruit 
juice grabbing her change purse retrieving 
her coin collection finally the last coin falls 

a very rare Abraham Lincoln penny he picks 
it up the woman cries contadino contadino
he mumbles quickly removes one 
of his tattered and warn penny loafer 
places the rare coin inside his shoes
strolls along simply singing the blues
Form: Sonnet

Gin and Tonic

Beneath a parapet of color rich and bright
the shiny sidewalk beckons me to come 
closer to his revels closer to his warm caress, 
As the rainy afternoon remises light 
two mesic hearts begin to drum 
in keeping with the rhythm of love's guess  
 
The red umbrella shades us from the world 
and keeps the rain at bay while we adhere   
devoted to each other we find spark 
inside an afternoon of dance and swirl 
The old cafe gives witness to our near 
as Benjy marks his loyalty with bark 

The scent of petrichor feels clean and fresh 
as we get lost within our love's embrace 
the clasp undoes and we are winded in  
pressed soft against each other's flesh  
desirously we poise standing face to face, 
he tastes like tonic with a splash of gin. 

November 4, 2018
Form: Rhyme

Belladonna

Oh, belladonna, deadly bloom,
Potent in your smile,
Bold, the dew-drops in your eyes,
Bewitching in their guile

Blazing with a brazen nerve, 
Your irises aspire
To burn the embers of your fire
In flames of our desire –

Deal your deadly night of shade
Let it, with stealth, conceal
Your flower fruited to appeal
– A thief set out to steal 

Dispense your tonic potion, 
In lethal doses drip
Your biting kiss upon our lips
– A bite we can't resist

Oh, beautiful lady, femme fatale,
Seductive in design,
Your bite of berry, toxic wine,
Is not the glory we divined

Your deadly nightshade, deadly guise,
Which takes our breath away, 
Reveals in beauty's masquerade
A belladonna that betrays
Form: Rhyme


The Unlikable Social Life

Could the air we breathe be seeds of anxiety?
Winter flowers bloom in diamond breeze. 
Watery eyes searching for handout charity.
To form a habit with the cold and sneeze. 

Bittersweet social scene for this moment,
when we are forced to suspend activities. 
We couldn’t have predicted this torment.
Like a box of chocolates virtual celebrities.

We wind away hours on our backs and bum.
Going cold while conspiring with a friend. 
The state we are in has gone hot on Instagram.
Arguing in whispers and chuckling to the end.

With power ensconced stuck at the head. 
Social life has a new brand of epicenter. 
Making us feel drained and heavy as lead. 
The likely place to rest with an isolated fever.

Sat in our little green space, a vibrant escape
Some have never left the tonic for daily life. 
And a chance to let the stress incubate. 
Dissolved in the air to another greater site.

The lengthy, the brief, the confounding season,
the engraving; reminds me of sad memories.
Where obscured plaques enter without a reason
Look out for inscriptions but find only stories.

For the first time in years, life is sliding dossier. 
That takes place almost entirely in the home.
The anonymity we have forged together. 
Becoming clowns with no safe salary to come.

Synthesis of Senses

A splash of tonic to set the mood. A warm bath to dull the senses. A mere 10 minutes into my aqua therapy and it happens. As promised, the sandman shows up smelling of sweet death to send me to that gentle embrace I have waited for this entire day. As I walk along the clouds I leave behind drops of regret to help me find my way back to consciousness. Sensual fog to relieve me of the mediocrity that is existence. I find in this realm a peace that has escaped me in life. What seems like an eternity passes and I start to find myself among the living knowing that my only reward for this sentence is a gentle passing into that most favorable experience that refuses a long term commitment.

Mine Liberal Hierarchical Goodbye Construct

Absent deliberate intervention
     vis a vis suicide,
supposed "natural" longevity of generic human 
     starring sallying forth primate ride
ding bareback across avast
     broke back mountain minus pride
defies accurate prediction,
     though hypothetical

     projections can override
unknown factors, whereby
     excluding misfortune nationwide
(and/or globally deadly accidents,
     catastrophes, diseases, mudslide,
fatalities from gunshot, et cetera)
     unexpectedly arise dismissing by landslide

mortal adversity can be generally,
     and more accurately spell joyride
ding calibrated to continue,
     thus subsequent existence,
     viz getting inside
scoop of this basic fellow, aye surmise
     to continue for many another hayride
say...two score plus more orbitz,

     whereat linkedin, flickr ring guide
by invisible hand snapchatting
crackling and popping fireside,
twittering whatsapp pining
     during eventide,
watching virtual twilight at dockside,
witnessing artificial intelligence,
     perfectly mimicking

     illusory edenic countrywide
vibrantly melds scenic ideal tonic bedside
counting black sheepish crows, 
      thence set sleep number
      putting all worries aside
while merrily rowing boat
     with gentle creatures alongside.

The Return of the True Trim

They write me off when I'm down 
say it's my place to underachieve 
some say it to the point it's what I believe 
putting belief in me makes a rumbling sound 
fires deep down in me fire up breeding heat 
self doubt annoys me up out of my seat 
as the fury spreads new motive's found 
when my thoughts obsess over the grief 
and suddenly tricks pour from out my sleeve 
surging tech tonic energy gains ambitious growls 
shifting my focus positive with the air I breathe 
and down from the bottom the tension relieves 
thus propelling a catapult force up at the clouds 
and I morph from my written off rock bottom seed 
into a Superman circumnavigating the seas 
killing the silent shy recluse now shouting loud 

I may fall down, but I'm never out
and that means never, I love the doubt,
it's the start of the best I house, 
I love silencing doubting mouths
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Doc, These Pills Are Killin' Me

Seems each time I visit my doc he recommends more pills for my health!

I'm not sure they're effective but this I know, they're depletin' my wealth!

And with all the side effects, I'm really concerned about my early doom!

"He expired from excessive medications!" might aptly be etched upon my tomb!

The list is endless - Diuretics, Beta Blockers, Nexium, Advil and Tylenol,

Alpha Blockers, Vitamin D, Zantac, Zocor, Micardis and a bit of Timolol,

Carisoprodol, Hydrocholorothiazide, Alphagan, Moltrin and Fosamax,

Hydroxyzine, Caltrate, Phillips Milk of Magnesia and some Atarax!

The black-box warnings say I could suffer everything from dehydration,

To blurred vision, dizziness, diahrea and a serious case of constipation!

My Pa seldom saw a doc and lived to the ripe old age of ninety-four!

He survived by sippin' SSS Blood Tonic and usin' horse linamint for

His aches and pains and other such stuff peddled by the Watkins Man!

I may toss the bottles and use his home-remedies to increase life's span!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Form: Couplet

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