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Gin and Tonic

Beneath a parapet of color rich and bright the shiny sidewalk beckons me to come closer to his revels closer to his warm caress, As the rainy afternoon remises light two mesic hearts begin to drum in keeping with the rhythm of love's guess The red umbrella shades us from the world and keeps the rain at bay while we adhere devoted to each other we find spark inside an afternoon of dance and swirl The old cafe gives witness to our near as Benjy marks his loyalty with bark The scent of petrichor feels clean and fresh as we get lost within our love's embrace the clasp undoes and we are winded in pressed soft against each other's flesh desirously we poise standing face to face, he tastes like tonic with a splash of gin. November 4, 2018

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Date: 11/19/2018 6:13:00 PM
Such a charming, romantic poem portrayed with fine imagery, Pixie! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/17/2018 1:12:00 PM
You interpreted the image so beautifully Pixie:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:46:00 AM
- A great win poem, Pixie :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2018 11:16:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Pixie... Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/13/2018 9:20:00 PM
Great poem, PD! Imagery is all inviting and culminates ecstatically with such passion. It draws the reader in and holds them spellbound right to the end.
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Date: 11/11/2018 11:19:00 AM
your command of flow and rhythm is on point! Love how you play with the meter and beat, my kind of writing!
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Date: 11/5/2018 11:54:00 AM
This was wonderful my friend. Love in the rain is so enticing and the fact that Benjy shared it with them is priceless.
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Date: 11/5/2018 7:17:00 AM
Mesic hearts, scent of petrichor and love love love the last line! Nicely done, dear Poetess!
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Date: 11/5/2018 6:34:00 AM
You did a great job, Pixie..I like your story..excellent flow and rhythm. A winning poem, as I see it.
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Date: 11/4/2018 11:05:00 PM
What a lovely poem, and wow the photo goes so well with it!!
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Date: 11/4/2018 6:43:00 PM
Absolutely enjoyed your creativity, my friend.. A wonderful and inspiring write.. Many blessings!!
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