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Premium Member Does Any Adult Slightly Wonder

The puffy, stomach-fattened mouse is closing in on the ballerina.
They do a pirouette around the stage, and the crowd goes wild,
But silently.  This is an auditorium, and we are taught obedience
By the mere reverent attitude of Nutcrackers past.

But do the children go silently wild?  
Or are they now ripe for a good nightmare?
Are they as enthralled as the adults?
It is a tradition to go wild, because our parents said
It is so, and so it is.

Does any adult ever slightly wonder 
How we would feel, if we ever saw these skating
Mammals in the same room, and they were the
Same size?  If you have ever observed the scary
Quickness of a mouse darting out of a kitchen floor crack,
You might realize that children, who are much smaller
Than this Christmas mouse, might feel intimidated
And fearful after such a show.
Any thinking adult would hope to not see the mouse
And the little girl the same size in real life also.
However, on stage, with the tin soldiers, and the Christmas tree,
We are okay with it

Some of us, not all.
A Christmas ballet, some of us 
See yearly, without thinking of that.
When the children cannot explain their nightmares,
Do we figure out why?


Did Not See Me Leaving

You only take me for granted 
because I put the offer there 
you don’t create the advantage 
it’s the offer I prepare 
only comfortable when I followed 
I allowed you lead our pair 

I watched you grow in confidence 
in control declining care 
treated like your loyal servant 
who isn’t going anywhere 

free to cheat with other persons 
forgiven when you share 
I’ll do the work, you cause the problems, 
grasped out of thin air

how happy you would look 
allowed to do what you dare 
I can read you like a book 
you are your only care 

no effort spent on me 
abusive and unaware 
love I had has gone extinct 
oh look a moody stare 

thinking I’m happy like this 
power mad beyond repair 
reality is a hazy mist 
when it clears I’m not there 

blinded to what this is 
the power’s disappeared 
you’re single now you b***h 
and I don’t even care!
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Thine Eldest Graduating Sharply Splendidly Supremely

Into Young Womanhood

this glorious role, sans
     helping beget and nurture thine first born
three day shy of Christmas 1996,
     fills thy being
     with joie de vivre and doth add dorn

more resplendent than any horn
of plenty, and aye can only imagine
     more precious than fine spun gold
ah...how this papa doth recall,
     when he didst hold

and/or swaddle his edenic bundle of joy
     and taking stock,
     how she (christened
     Eden Liat) didst mold

herself into an autonomous offspring,
     rarely receiving a scold
cuz, she most times seemed well mannered
     and infrequently told,

and thus said benevolent prized progeny
     required no special programming nor app
even when a child, adolescent or,
     latte (sipping) teen,
     this genetic bounty evinced

     laser like thinking
     with a custom made thinking cap
although...yes, (there erupted a verbal flap
toward the missus or me,
     (the latter and former

     markedly differed asper child rearing,
     which unseen rift 
     engendered a figurative gap
mollycoddling, holding, consoling,
     et cetera distraught daughter on me lap

which cradling, fas incubating, rocking...,
     which oft found 
     this biomedically cherished baby taking her nap
twas at such poignant bonding moments,
     aye DID NOT decry the parent trap,

thus now, special "gifts"
     with bittersweet motions bespeak
as tears (viz - ode to joy)
     stream down each stubbled cheek
this middle aged grown man,

     doth recollect with embarrassment
     how as a teen thyself as classic "geek"
whereat mine demeanor extremely meek
AND let NO chanced avail

     for one to take a peak
and now...unstoppable
     grievousness awoke, 
     oh no...nothing un speak
or print able did occur only a human weak

ness, when thine voice 
     un-necessarily raised yet,
blink back moistened 
     slightly crowsfeet darkened eyes set

tills within this intelligent 
     well read and let
hard bloke accepts the "circle game of life"
...listening to thee

     beautiful, charming, exemplary dulcet
an em ma nant treasured 
     valuable accouterment tummy life...
     YOU BET!
Form: Elegy

Just Waiting For My Bus

I'm sitting on a bench
Waiting for my bus
Thinking in my head
What my daddy said
Just waiting for my bus

I'm planning my next move
Waiting for my bus
Strumming my guitar
But I can't get too far
Just waiting for my bus

I'm making all this up
Waiting for my bus
Singing my own song
Not sure where I belong
Just waiting for my bus

I'm getting soaking wet
Waiting for my bus
Linking my own past
How long will it last
Just waiting for my bus

I'm sitting in the pouring rain
Waiting for my bus
Drinking my bottle of whisky
Out here, it's all a bit risky
Just waiting for my bus

I'm sitting here all alone
Waiting for my bus

I'm just waiting for my bus
Waiting for my bus
Just waiting for my bus
I'm just waiting for my bus
Form: Ballad

Premium Member Winter Sleep

My grandfather
Worked hard all his life
And died
When I was 
Away.

I remember him 
Sitting in the dark
By the kitchen stove
On cold winter nights 
Rubbing his calloused hands
Over and over again
Not saying a word 
To anyone
Listening to the voices on the outside
Whistling in the winter wind.

Once I walked 
In by mistake
Breaking the silence
I asked what he was thinking about
Nothing he said 
The his voice changed
Listen to me son
Everyone has a lesson
To learn in life
You’re young now
But later on
You’ll need to know
When to grab life
In your own two hands
And shake it
Until you get
What you want. 

The sudden anger 
In his voice
Startled me like a
Short fuse in the night
And I ran from him.


Grandfather didn’t work during winter
It was too cold he said
The need 
To work more 
To buy more
Never suited him.
What he needed was nearby
A pair of old work boots
A jacket carelessly slung
Over a chair
A pair of cotton twill pants from better days
And a bottle of brandy.

For him, winter was 
Meeting old friends
After Sunday Church
Congregating in the park
In small groups
Standing their ground 
Against all outsiders
On days when the snows receded
And winter’s end seemed close.

Some rested on canes
Others stood tall
Survivors of another winter
Arguing politics
Talking about this and that 
And how well their grown up children were doing. 

Life can go on without us
They seemed to say
To the empty park
And the gray skies
We will meet again one day
But for now 
We’ll stay here until the sun goes down 
And winter returns.
Form: Narrative


Premium Member One Wish

Politically speaking I lean to the left which makes it difficult to unite
with people who, politically speaking, are leaning to the right.

Even though we have our differences I was brought up thinking it would be wise
if both sides want to progress…is to find a compromise.

But over the years the fundamental differences in our beliefs 
in our souls and in our hearts
have made compromise impossible…have torn us all apart.

To the point where we’re calling each other names
when saying politically I lean left or I lean right
is not a path to compromise…
but a source of anger…
an invitation for a fight.

So today I make a wish for peace, acceptance and understanding
I make this wish with all my heart
as I watch a country I once loved…tear itself apart.

This wish I shall not make upon on the wind…to be lost among the trees
I shall not share it with the clouds…or upon the seven seas…

A wish, like each of us, need it’s freedom…to travel wide and far
so to give this wish a chance to succeed…I shall attach it to a star.

And send it to the heavens…not just to my God but to all your Gods too
with the hope they will unite and make this wish come true.

I’m not sure we will ever find our peace
It seems, politically speaking, of solutions we are bereft
but for me…and for all those friends on my right
perhaps one wish is all have left.
© Jim Yerman  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Verse

Our Beautiful Mom

"Our Beautiful Mom”
© 2015 Michelle Lynn LeBlanc



Mom, here I sit on this special day, 
Thinking of you and your caring ways

You were always so giving
Had a heart that was true
You sure loved your kids
There was no wrong we could do

Even when we were selfish
You'd always find a way
To give more of yourself
Without any delay

You loved us unconditionally
Wanted us to always have the best
Always giving all that you had
Not caring if you had anything left

That was just who you were
It sure came naturally for you
You loved to brag up your kids
But never saw the beauty in you

But Mom, you were beautiful
In just so many ways 
You left a lasting impression
That will remain all our days

You gave us so many memories
How growing up could be fun
Pranking total strangers 
Was one of your favourite ones

Yes, you were beautiful, Mom
And we will never forget
The legacy you left us
And the example you set!


© 2015 Michelle Lynn LeBlanc
Form: Rhyme

Learning to think healthy thoughts/anger issues

White knuckle straining 
Gripping the laces 
At the edges of my thoughts
Praying the laces
Don’t come off
I am screaming 
You cannot hear me 
Because I am learning 
I am learning what is healthy
And tearing down the dry wall 
Until your nail beds are bleeding is 
Not. 
I do not hate you. 
How do I say 
I hate the way
I have to relearn how to think 
How to speak 
I have to weigh every opinion
Every porcelain inkling 
So that I do not break 
It 
Break
Me 
Break, you. 
Break through! 
I can do this sober. 
Unless 
I can’t. 
String me up by my neck 
There is only silence 
Until the next
The thought
Rips its way in 
Unfamiliar nasty little friend 
I white knuckle strain
And grip the lace 
Hoping for a soft landing 
A greeting 
A whisper instead of the screaming 
I am gritting my teeth
Praying 
And they call this 
Healthy, 
Self understanding. 
But thinking for me 
Feels more like disease 
Punishment seeping internally 
Pushing my face into gravel 
Threatening to leak 
Through my teeth 
And onto my life where 
I’ve rebuilt 
Piece by piece. 
Silence. 
I breathe. 
Release. 
Repeat.

Sonnet To a Midnight Fox

Wretched fox, how you compel me to write!
I hate the way you scavenge, shriek and prowl,
Invading my mind through the humid night,
With calls that drown out the melodic fowl.
I liken your shrill voice to a harpoon:
It is more sharp, strident and harsh
Than crow flocks cawing in the gales of June,
Or air baring scents of a rancid marsh.
How do I hate you? I shall list the ways.
I hate your ginger fur and charcoal snout.
Thinking of your horrid shout fills my days
With woe: ‘tis your call which caused this fallout.
Oh dearest fox, I must sleep without fright
So please ponder these verses this fine night.
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Love Among the Stars

When we look above at the nighttime sky
We are filled with this great mystique
With the untold number of heavenly bodies
So foolish to think we're unique

If I was a gambler which I certainly am not
Could now be a very rich man
Betting on the existence of other life forms
In this heavenly scale so grand

Certainly, I'm not all alone in my thinking
Many have thought this before
So to all of us bright minded individuals
The odds just can't be ignored

Unfortunately, my time will end long before
A meeting with beings we call aliens
Most fantastic event in the annals of mankind
To finally discover other civilizations

When we look above at the nighttime sky
We are filled with this great mystique
To think that one day we will finally meet them
And discover we're not so unique
Form: Rhyme

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