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The Wise Men and the Roman Authorities

“Are we under them or not?” they debated, 
“Do we owe them explanation?”, they demurred, 
Sure of their validation of this baby, they stated, 
To Herod that one day it’d be the king conferred. 

They knew they were doing something wrong,
To the Christ family and Jesus life which awaited,
Making his work harder by allowing scoffing long, 
Specifying him for the Romans to have him fated. 

But they believed in sociology as the mechanism, 
For difficulties to be worked out through, 
And upheld life and society as the atheism, 
Which would confront their classism rue. 

So revealed to Herod the birth of the child divine, 
But kept back his address and how he looked, 
So Herod ordered the death of every baby fine, 
In order to kill that one infant that he’d booked. 

He didn’t like the intelligence of the Zoroastrians, 
The magi respected by all as insightful wise men;
Jews were bypassed easily as emotional pedestrians, 
But the magi comprehended rational thought, ken.  

So the wise men had integrity by respecting authority, 
Showed consistency in their task to specify and select; 
Were the original intellectuals who had subjectivity, 
To both the Israeli people and the government elect.
Form: Quatrain


Premium Member Compared to What

It’s the little things you notice
That make other little things in life shine.
Like an overflowing outhouse somewhere else
Makes the flush toilet at home seem great
And how this little thing
Makes you appreciate the greatness of a life
You may have disparaged out of familiarity.
The bottom line is it can always be worse,
But as our day to day life just gets better,
Softer and more luxurious
It’s easy to see our life as terrible
When others see it as blessed.
So which is it? Whose subjective view?
Beauty, comfort and appreciation,
Is always in the eye of the beholder.
Go with the flow they say,
Appreciate what you’ve got,
Because it can always get worse…

(8/16/26)

Premium Member It's a Crying Shame

George Washington would never believe it and call it a crying shame. I have observed the prohibition of prayer in public schools. Free speech is not free but is for sale to the highest bidder. Moreover, there is an attitudinal atmosphere suggesting that any speech that is not my own should be abridged, censured, or abolished. Traditional norms and family values are dropping like flies under the spell of pesticides. The Bible is considered to be narrow-minded hate-speech. I have seen people terrorized, their civil rights decertified and denied. Moral values have been devalued, set aside, and liquidized; Constitutional rights are diluted, disputed, and no longer solidified. Whatever happened to the great 'thinkers'?  I have noticed the terminal illness and demise of noble ideas. Education is being replaced with political persuasion and propaganda.                                                                           

Abraham Lincoln would never accept it and call it a crying shame. Minority rights are being revised, realigned, reassigned, and redefined. I have witnessed human rights ignored, disregarded, and not prioritized. The cultural revolution is forging ahead in jet-propulsion speed like there is no tomorrow nor time of reckoning. Belief in evolution is man's best hope for a future without accountability. There are no absolutes nor need for resolution. Majority rights are brought into question, unguaranteed, and in retreat. Equal rights are desired but unclarified, undefined, and unobtained. I have beheld the orchestrated disappearance of common sense, and before long we shall be worry-free because 'Big Brother' will always come to our defense. Alien rights are well protected, highly promoted, and unwisely provided. There is a free admittance of subjectivity and the utter rejection of objectivity. I started to weep when I realized that sanity is being burned at the stake. I'm hoping and praying that we return to our senses before it's too late.                                                           

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Rhoda Monihan

When I was only just school age,  
My dad became very serious once, 
As he was a fundamentalist Christian, 
And wanted to know how I was forming my words. 

When he asked how I felt about roads, 
I knew exactly what he was talking about, 
He was taking the phonetic sound, 
And asking about my subjectivity for my shout. 

But I was glad secretly to myself, 
That my first name was a positivity, 
That it spoke outrightly of a journey, 
And that it was after the Island of Rhodes most definitely.  

I knew what my dad was up to, 
He was subliminally asking if I believed in god, 
‘Cos he’d insisted that Rhoda in the Bible, 
Was the only derivation of that name somewhat odd. 

So, yet again, I evaded the question,  
And used my disability to claim lack of knowledge, 
But since I couldn’t fake a speech problem the whole time, 
Concluded with an admission of liking Rhodes carriageways! 

But seriously, Rhoda is after the island Rhodes, 
And Monihan reminds me of monkeys, 
‘Han’ is for hands which state activity, 
In evolution’s process of family trees. 

‘I’ is for me, which emphasises that I matter, 
To the whole scale of things, the entire picture, 
That evolution made me and I that affect it, 
And that I can be met by other people or organisms of different structure. 

I think my name is just fine, and it has done me well, 
Given me strength when I had none, 
Directed when I needed suggestion and focus, 
And commended me for what I have done.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Late Night 'n Youthful Futility

  
     Those of a religious inclination 
       tell me that ‘this world’ is pure illusion
     That ‘Truth’ resides in the Heavenly Station
       though it is they who dwell deep in the grips of delusion

     You see, Truth is based on individual perception
       which differs from one wo/man to their fellow
     Of this they seem to have zero conception
        at least by the way they bellow – 

     that I deny the existence of objectivity
        which, while true, is nothing new
     Philosophers from time immemorial speak of subjectivity 
        If a tree falls in the forest and no one is there to hear it – on this they chew 

     Whew! Here I am in my advanced senility
        reverting to long-ago ~ late-night discussions of youthful futility
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member TRIPTYCH EXPERIENCES

TRIPTYCH EXPERIENCES
portrayed 
    surrounded 
now
repotoire
recited 
recalls 
    questioning 
      the formulae
to
 stimulate 
     subjectivity 
delicious 
  luminous
dialogue 
in
        bizarre 
graduated
contrasts  
   with unbridled 
shades 
predominantly 
  prevailing
afresh 
in sensitive 
      hesitant
 scenarios
 passionate
     unreachable 
role-play 
   studies
of
 facial 
  splendour 
in
lavish  
   concept 
a 
   formulated
 process
to
  conveys
a 
    quiet relaxed 
series
carefully
fronted  
    emphasis
balanced 
precise 
    awareness 
with
vital
  counterparts
in
  closely 
     occasioned 
devices
Form: Verse

Premium Member Divine Kinship

Our way of looking at people traverses
The complex multi-layered perception
Manifested in the myriad motifs
We design for the animated images.

The superficial visual discernment
Transforms transiently into deep sensitivity
Takes symbolic shapes on the mental screen
Our focused inner sight desires to see in people.

The external attributes of appearance per se
Disappear within the meaningless subjectivity
At the hermitage of godly soul of oneness we look 
Inspired by the supreme spirit of divine kinship. 

_______________

January 10, 2023
Contest : The Way We Look
Sponsored by : Unseeking Seeker

Premium Member Ambivalence Part II

But Freud could not vouch
For one lying on his couch
It’s God, our mind’s He unlocks
To wrestle with this paradox
This ambivalence
For the world fixes stints
For lungs that need air
For a heart needs repair
This is what we’re left with
No life, just a death kiss
At atheistic insistence
And with ambivalent resistance
There’s prejudicial conjecture
There’s personal conjecture
But no absolute or objective truth
You don’t need to be a sleuth 
With subjectivity solicited 
Two intellectual sins committed
Arbitrariness and inconsistency 
Condition critical insistency 
Circumspectly we point this out
Without a doubt, we don’t flout
Compare two worldviews
(as atheist’s hit the snooze)
We share the Gospel with the hostel
With no subterfuge or solipsism
No false religion’s systems or schisms
The 2nd Coming will be the loudest day
The trumpet sounds, the saintly strain
Will  w/Jesus comeback with no foray
The final stop for the Gospel train
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Forbearance Riddle

The finest forbearance is perseverance.
Kindness then becomes a self-fulfilling prophecy.
The concept of consistency is of major importance.
Moral qualities are comparable in relevance.

Quietness, not priggishness, is a suitable property.
Individuals akin to this are content with their lifestyles.
Subjectivity reveals resiliency.
Being a significant impact requires being sturdy.

It is critical to maintaining consistency.
Being brave is the path to happiness.
To be halcyon, you must be mindful.
Variety and success are inextricably linked.

Pardoning is common in all dulcet situations.
Persistence is a critical component of significance.
To succeed, the attitude must be idyllic and heroic.
Patience is a crucial ingredient in greatness.

Written: July 1st, 2021

1st place contest win 

A Brian Strand July 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.

Kid-Landers, They Were

He was smiling with his fingers 
Shaping a heart
He was not the focus of the camera
He was on one side, with his all-time favorite sister
His sister was holding him with a full-blown smile.
Kid-landers, they were.


I was looking at the picture, especially him
His eyelashes were awfully long, still are
He is a kid with no demand at all
He is a gentle, silent one
With a lot of words for his sister only
Kid-landers, they were.

I was trying to crop the picture, 
For a subject of picture of those two
Unable to do that, as they were mingling 
with other subjects so vividly, and I understood
Not everything is a subject of scissor-cut of subjectivity
Kid-landers, they were.

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