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Premium Member Daybreak In Richland Hills

Daybreak in Richland Hills
Written: by Tom Wright
August 7 2008

In Richland Hills the dawn is showing,
I sit on the patio peering over my cup.
From across the alley a Rooster’s crowing,
I sit motionless as the sun comes up.

I hear dogs barking a few hundred paces,
Chadick Farms is beginning to break into song.
Squirrels are scurrying to their feeding places,
I’ve two days to visit and that isn’t long.

This is the time of day I cherish most,
For God speaks to me in the morning air.
I hope early arousal hasn’t disturbed my host,
While the city awakes I’m deep in prayer.
© Tom Wright  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Lyric


Premium Member Tree

A murder of crows screech my funeral song,
disturbing the eerie silence that surrounds.
Heartless hands have left scars etched into my crumbling bark,
as bleeding sap drips upon ivory sands,
which fail to comfort the aches of my collapsed torso.

I once ascended under sapphire skies,
as golden rays adorned my emerald lush leaves,
but now I've descended into dismal decay,
realising humanity has no use for me -
offering me as a sacrifice to toxic tides.

I can still remember the sound of crashing to the ground,
as men with axes laughed at the glory of my demise,
allowing me to slowly sink toward the abyss of nothingness,
now I'm helpless as ripples of regret carry me into the sea.

Alone and abandoned, above me is only dreary darkness.
I'm barely breathing, listening to careless whispering waves,
smashing against my soaked motionless trunk,
drowning me deeper in self deprecation. 
Frigid branches begin to crumble and snap,
as I slumber cradling echoes of worthlessness

Premium Member Astral Trip - Version 1

It seemed like
An innocent experiment
Simple enough
I had read the steps
Bedtime routine out of the way
I was ready to start

Relaxing tape playing for ambiance
I was gone in an instant
With zero recollection of
The next thirty minutes
When I heard a thunderous clic
Most annoying signal
The music had suddenly stopped

Overcome with a blissful calm feeling
I refused to open my eyes
Having a very different reaction
Than my bedfellow
Who was quite unaware of 
My little experiment

While he was busy
Screaming and throwing pillows 
At the figure there in the dark
Standing motionless at the foot of the bed

I managed to let slip out
A couple of reassuring “it’s ok’s”
Eyes still blissfully closed
As I was savoring
The last milliseconds
Of my soul’s sudden re-entry
Briskly sucked in 
Inches above my navel
With almost a slurping sound

That was my first and last astral trip
A little too very real for my liking



AP: Honorable Mention 2023

Premium Member Night Sands

The evenings breeze moves the curtains, 
ever slowly,
motioning to the world their compliance.
Behind them hides the moon,
rising,with clouded scattered light,
like a flock of birds frightened by thunder.
On the table, a candle with smoke lifting upward,
after being snuffed out
curtains parting, the moon's soft light,
an empty wine glass,
your fingers motionless on its stem,
your eyes lifting slowly with smiles

All this cradled in my mind, 
as I rise,
reach for your hand and kiss your eyes with mine
Knowing that the night is still young
and we have a date with the ocean's sand
where we will leave footprints trailing,
filled by the dark water of the night
leaving only two sets at the high water mark,
facing each other

7/20/16

Premium Member - Primp and Preen - 3

PRIMP and PREEN



Passersby’s halt, they fear to walk by, to fall to this feline
in her prime. No moggie is she who’s primped and preened
in contemplation she flaunts her flair. Motionless as art, her
body’s dreadful covered in copious layers of azure fur.  
This she cat finds each passerby a meal, a most delectable prey.
 
Primped and preened, her snaking tail waving rhythmic.
Her trunk’s molded like a rounded goblet full of wine.
Her paws arrest, slender, like a maiden's finger fine.
Her chest full and firm, she posed with influential height.
 
Her translucent tabby orbs shutter, then focus to gaze
reflecting a light, shadowed by a panacea of unfolding lies;
twin spheres speak, solid, content in serenity and pride.
There's a bombshell shining in this cat's eyes.
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~Inspired by: The Blue Cat by Pamela Colman Smith 1907~

***For Debbi Guzzi's: Ten Paintings, Ten Poems, ALMOST DONE

__Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__
08:24; January 13, 2015


Premium Member The Ruin

It stood on the top of the hill
dominating all of its surrounds.
Its drawbridge these days lay open
spanning with ease the now dry moat.
Like a fairy tale fortress it had turrets
that soared up high brushing the clouds.

Its four towers majestic as blankly,
they stared, covering all points of the compass.
Slit windows peered out of casements
through walls up to six feet thick.
The massive double oak doors
fifteen feet high and twelve wide
stood thrown open allowing glimpses
of the enormous courtyard beyond.

Battlements led to each round tower
that once housed the nobles.
Old battered forgotten furniture
grandly carved four poster beds.
A sword or two lay scattered
amidst the clutter and bird dropping.

Wide stone staircases meandered 
curling round and round the walls.
A gallery or two dotted here and there
perfect hiding places above the hall.
Some for musicians to play unseen
Their notes floating through the air
as below the dancers swept and strutted
as the ladies hooped dresses swirled.

Long tables once laden with food
stood a skiff with broken legs.
Wooden pint tankards higgledy piggledy
strewn about midst wooden platters.
Tattered standards limply lay motionless
against walls dotted with scattered torches.

The Lord of these lands killed in distant lands
leaving an infant son removed to the city
by his grieving mother who sought to forget.
Now ninety years later his grandson views
the devastation of years of neglect and vows
to return the castle to the glory of its heydays.

After three long years of often brutal work
removing shrubbery, moss and decay
Life starts to re-emerge Flags flutter
gaily high up on the battlements.
Chandeliers sparkle and the torches flicker
Tables once more groan with a feast of food
Happy shrieks of laughter fill the grand hall
And one would swear the castle wore a smile,     
as children played around the buttress's.
Form: Epic

Premium Member The Anniversary V

On pain's bed, after the operation, my body rests* 

Motionless the view out of the window tries to enjoy

While my soul the opportunity of peace grasps to think

How the gifts the spirit provides, could I better employ!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
     19 October 2022






* Last year, on the 19th of October, after a fall a large Hematoma 
was created in my brain. The doctors didn't think I could survive, 
or even if I managed to survive, still were not certain I could walk or talk.
However, a young doctor, named Christos Koutsarnakis, who believes in God,
performed an extensive Craniotomy that lasted for four hours. His faith was rewarded! I was saved and, thank God I have no problems with my walk or my speech. I thank the Lord and the good doctor! God bless him and God bless my wife who saved my life by taking me to the hospital while unconscious, plus all of you who have prayed for me!
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Imagine This

You wake up to commotion, throw on some clothes.
Outside you see some bloody bodies piled on the street.
People are screaming, running in all directions
away from oncoming military trucks and tanks.
Your heart is pounding; your mind shouts
what should I do? Where should I go?

You can't head back home because now 
soldiers have headed there,
collecting folks and dividing them into groups:
Men separated from women, 
the elderly from the young, boys from girls.
Trucks are filling fast with the different groups of people.
You look all around and see only confused and mortified faces.
The fact that all these others share your emotions 
is your only comfort.

A woman breaks loose from a line crying out for her son.
A shot rings out; she collapses to the ground.

You can see one small group of people have escaped -
perhaps unnoticed - beyond a fence in the near distance.
Another group have all scattered, and easily seen,
they  scramble toward a store.
They fall randomly when intermittent shots from the soldiers' guns fire out.
You stand motionless, knowing soon you will be tagged
by soldiers herding people into trucks.
Will you try to sneak toward the fence or will you remain as you are
to face your frighteningly unknown fate?

Are there more tanks beyond the fence of which everyone is unaware?
Won't those racing for their freedom eventually be caught?
you must make the decision while no one seems to have noticed you yet:

Freeze or flee?


April 2, 2019 for Laura Loo's
'Favorite Poem From Last Week (March 31-April 6, 2019)' Poetry Contest
March 21, 2022 for 
A Brian Strand 1094 Poetry Contest

Premium Member Ashtavakra Gita verse 19:3 revisited

19.3
“Where is past and future,
or even present?
Where is space, or even eternity? 
I abide in the glory of Self”


Brahman or God, The Absolute
Luminous darkness, alone is
Motionless beyond space and time
Universe birthed by His bliss fizz

All worlds are then but mere bubbles
Reflecting God’s luminescence 
Illusionary is ego
Light of Self is our quintessence

God is the light who lights all lights
Consciousness ~ one energy field
Each God-spark mirrors His heartbeat
Merging with source when fully healed

Holding firm awareness of Self
Thus immanent and transcendent 
In but not of this dream like world 
We are always bliss resplendent
Form: Quatrain

I Will Not Remember You

Tonight,motionless is my sleep

without a thought of you passing my mind

And if the wafting wind breathes softly its zephyr breeze

 upon the pearl blush of my cheek

I will not remember you

Like the rattling sound of crickets 

on the first branch of Spring 

you had come and gone

Now your shadow

blocks the silver of my moon,no more

Like a woodpecker in its last sonata 

you stole our music

but I am learning how to dance

without your song

Forget-me-not petals

scattered in silence on autumn's sidewalk

Fluttering snowflakes covered my hair

with false proposals and winter frost

Your summer footprints have been washed out

I lay in solitude,I lay in solitude

yet still not lost,No,still not lost

Here I am now, a mourning swan yet still a swan 

which pirouettes on a glass stream

There He comes now, splash in calm beauty

Fresh face reflecting upon my dream

Tonight,motionless is my sleep

and if the wafting wind breathes softly  its zephyr breeze

 upon the pearl blush of my cheek

I will not remember you


Inspired by Elton John's song- 'The One'

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