Imagine This

You wake up to commotion, throw on some clothes.
Outside you see some bloody bodies piled on the street.
People are screaming, running in all directions
away from oncoming military trucks and tanks.
Your heart is pounding; your mind shouts
what should I do? Where should I go?

You can't head back home because now 
soldiers have headed there,
collecting folks and dividing them into groups:
Men separated from women, 
the elderly from the young, boys from girls.
Trucks are filling fast with the different groups of people.
You look all around and see only confused and mortified faces.
The fact that all these others share your emotions 
is your only comfort.

A woman breaks loose from a line crying out for her son.
A shot rings out; she collapses to the ground.

You can see one small group of people have escaped -
perhaps unnoticed - beyond a fence in the near distance.
Another group have all scattered, and easily seen,
they  scramble toward a store.
They fall randomly when intermittent shots from the soldiers' guns fire out.
You stand motionless, knowing soon you will be tagged
by soldiers herding people into trucks.
Will you try to sneak toward the fence or will you remain as you are
to face your frighteningly unknown fate?

Are there more tanks beyond the fence of which everyone is unaware?
Won't those racing for their freedom eventually be caught?
you must make the decision while no one seems to have noticed you yet:

Freeze or flee?


April 2, 2019 for Laura Loo's
'Favorite Poem From Last Week (March 31-April 6, 2019)' Poetry Contest
March 21, 2022 for 
A Brian Strand 1094 Poetry Contest
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Delaney Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 5:48 AM
So vividly imagined, Andrea: Let’s pray we are never caught in this horrific situation. I know I would attempt to flee. Congratulatiions. on your top placement. SuZ
Alex Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 1:37 AM
Great and dramatic. Ended with a thought-provoking question. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Congratulations on being at the top of the best new Poems list Andrea. xxoo
Shines Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 12:46 AM
Congratulations!your poem painted the scary picture.loved reading it.Have a good day :)
Pandit Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Back again with congrats on your top spot on the best poem chart.
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 10:03 PM
Back again with congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea! xxoo
Fairbrother Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 5:14 AM
Hi Andrea, Your verse sends a chill, your description is vivid and meaningful,a great write, enjoyed the read, Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Kev.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 1:55 PM
Congrats on having this wonderful poem at the top of the best new poems list! This is your year Andrea! Hugs, Connie
La France Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Andrea, congratulations on POTD, what an emotional write !
Proxenos Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Hi Andrea, Way to go my friend - congratulations on POTD - such an honor. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Lindley Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Congrats my dear friend on the well served honor and placement of this immensely creative and very inspiring free verse poem! A most well deserved recognition..'Truly another one of your fine gems..
Duet Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 3:38 AM
I see you made the top 100 Best New Poems too. Congratulations, Andrea. It is a fabulous write for sure.
Kannan Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 1:56 AM
Congratulations on being the second in the best 100 poems of the month.well deserved one and congratulations on your POTD.
Ashley Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 6:52 PM
A haunting and compelling poem, Andrea, rich in imagery and emotion. A potent piece. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 2:38 PM
Congrats on being #3 in the top 100 poems for the month.
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 6:04 PM
wow, Richard. I had no idea!! Thanks for letting me know that.
Smith Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 7:08 AM
A cruel decision to make, knowing the outcome of most situations running seems the only logical course. Terrible, terrible. Congratulations for POTD honors Andrea...
Knowlton Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Congrats on POTD Andrea…A good one.
Barden Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Oh I adore this one, Buddy - I hardly ever get to the POTD page, (just don't think of it sadly), but I must start making it a habit. Fav-ing this one! Congratulations!! :-) <3
Michael Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 5:30 AM
I knew this was special...Congratulations Andrea...
Nicole Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 7:31 PM
As these words unfold and the story is told. Truth tugs at the heart so deeply. This is very emotional. We are surrounded by these moments, as the world falls apart. I wish it were not so, but sadly- it is. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Freeze or flee... This is a wonder land poem, it puts one in a state of dilemma, choosing to follow evil, an undefined one for that matter. This poem is full of stress for the mind to pound and ponder around with it. Congratulations Andrea, I love the poetic mind you used here.
Duet Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Wonderful...and disturbing. But, I don't know if you are talking about when the Jews were persecuted by the Nazis or now when the Jews are persecuting the Palestinians. Horrible either way and very very sad that humans can be so cruel to other humans who just want to live their lives in peace and love for each other. And, it happens in other countries too...genocide must be stopped! Congrats on POTD, dear friend. Bravo for your courageous write. So well-deserved.
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 4:15 PM
it is whatever you want it to be, Carole, and I think any of the situations you described qualify. It's simply freedom being stolen from innocent people.
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 1:35 PM
This expressive poem can bring on the shivers, especially when one looks at the present, and ten goes gradually back in time, remembering the atrocities which have taken place in different countries to different people. ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Andrea. Regards // paul
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 12:16 PM
Wow, a powerful write indeed! Congratulations on POTD!
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