Night Sands

The evenings breeze moves the curtains, 
ever slowly,
motioning to the world their compliance.
Behind them hides the moon,
rising,with clouded scattered light,
like a flock of birds frightened by thunder.
On the table, a candle with smoke lifting upward,
after being snuffed out
curtains parting, the moon's soft light,
an empty wine glass,
your fingers motionless on its stem,
your eyes lifting slowly with smiles

All this cradled in my mind, 
as I rise,
reach for your hand and kiss your eyes with mine
Knowing that the night is still young
and we have a date with the ocean's sand
where we will leave footprints trailing,
filled by the dark water of the night
leaving only two sets at the high water mark,
facing each other

7/20/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Davey Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Now that is romantic, congrats on your win
Hamilton Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Back with congrats on another win, enjoyed this one again!
Scars Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Just beautiful dear Frederic...thank you and congrats
Hamilton Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 3:46 PM
I am getting to know you more and more each time i read you I'm more impressed. Congrats on another fine win!
Scars Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Frederic, just beautiful and exactly what I was looking for...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 3:53 PM
beautiful romantic free verse Frederic congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Such romance, Frederic. It's beautiful. Well done.
Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 3:33 PM
fascinated by the sweet mood of your piece so delicately quilled, frederick... huggs
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