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Night Sands

The evenings breeze moves the curtains, ever slowly, motioning to the world their compliance. Behind them hides the moon, rising,with clouded scattered light, like a flock of birds frightened by thunder. On the table, a candle with smoke lifting upward, after being snuffed out curtains parting, the moon's soft light, an empty wine glass, your fingers motionless on its stem, your eyes lifting slowly with smiles All this cradled in my mind, as I rise, reach for your hand and kiss your eyes with mine Knowing that the night is still young and we have a date with the ocean's sand where we will leave footprints trailing, filled by the dark water of the night leaving only two sets at the high water mark, facing each other 7/20/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/1/2017 2:43:00 PM
Now that is romantic, congrats on your win
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Date: 11/1/2017 10:35:00 AM
Back with congrats on another win, enjoyed this one again!
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Date: 11/1/2017 7:06:00 AM
Just beautiful dear Frederic...thank you and congrats
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Date: 8/17/2016 3:46:00 PM
I am getting to know you more and more each time i read you I'm more impressed. Congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 8/17/2016 1:47:00 PM
Frederic, just beautiful and exactly what I was looking for...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:53:00 PM
beautiful romantic free verse Frederic congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:12:00 PM
Such romance, Frederic. It's beautiful. Well done.
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Date: 7/21/2016 3:33:00 PM
fascinated by the sweet mood of your piece so delicately quilled, frederick... huggs
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