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- Primp and Preen - 3

PRIMP and PREEN



Passersby’s halt, they fear to walk by, to fall to this feline
in her prime. No moggie is she who’s primped and preened
in contemplation she flaunts her flair. Motionless as art, her
body’s dreadful covered in copious layers of azure fur.  
This she cat finds each passerby a meal, a most delectable prey.
 
Primped and preened, her snaking tail waving rhythmic.
Her trunk’s molded like a rounded goblet full of wine.
Her paws arrest, slender, like a maiden's finger fine.
Her chest full and firm, she posed with influential height.
 
Her translucent tabby orbs shutter, then focus to gaze
reflecting a light, shadowed by a panacea of unfolding lies;
twin spheres speak, solid, content in serenity and pride.
There's a bombshell shining in this cat's eyes.
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~Inspired by: The Blue Cat by Pamela Colman Smith 1907~

***For Debbi Guzzi's: Ten Paintings, Ten Poems, ALMOST DONE

__Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__
08:24; January 13, 2015
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Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Not the easiest of paintings to write about Olive, but you carried it it off really well ~ hugs//James xx
Nunez Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 8:26 PM
A bombshell indeed! The last line caps the image you see, Olive. Lovely lines you gave here. It's inspiring how each entry widens the interpretation of this painting. hugs! :-)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Hi Kim, Im pleased to read your comment on my poem.. =`) I'm glad that you like it... wahhhhhh!!!! to be honest, i really do not know what to write regarding that painting.. :) ~Olive ELoisa =`)
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