Astral Trip - Version 1

It seemed like
An innocent experiment
Simple enough
I had read the steps
Bedtime routine out of the way
I was ready to start

Relaxing tape playing for ambiance
I was gone in an instant
With zero recollection of
The next thirty minutes
When I heard a thunderous clic
Most annoying signal
The music had suddenly stopped

Overcome with a blissful calm feeling
I refused to open my eyes
Having a very different reaction
Than my bedfellow
Who was quite unaware of 
My little experiment

While he was busy
Screaming and throwing pillows 
At the figure there in the dark
Standing motionless at the foot of the bed

I managed to let slip out
A couple of reassuring “it’s ok’s”
Eyes still blissfully closed
As I was savoring
The last milliseconds
Of my soul’s sudden re-entry
Briskly sucked in 
Inches above my navel
With almost a slurping sound

That was my first and last astral trip
A little too very real for my liking



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Capitano Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 7:46 AM
An interesting experiment Line, well done. Adding to what Frederic said, everything is connected by many planes of existence, astral travelling is just one of those forms to access reality and new forms of understanding.
Parker Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 12:51 PM
if one takes the point of view that everything in the universe is connected, then your journey wasn't really a journey, rather the revealing of what is already known by your soul as it opened its eyes to see beyond...my first thought after reading your poem
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Thanks for your visit, Frederic. Best regards from Ottawa.
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Thanks for your visit, Frederic. Best regards from Ottawa.
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