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Premium Member 16. a Short and Violent Life Ends. a Legend Begins Part 2

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She slowly approached the lifeless form on the floor.
She knelt down, turned him over and gasped in horror at who she saw.
"Is he dead?" Garrett asked. "Is it The Kid?" He asked again.
Deluvina rose to her feet and lounged out at him.
She violently pounded her fists on Garrett's chest
as she screamed the vilest curses she could bestow upon his head.
She wanted to scratch his eyes out of his skull.
She wanted him suffering. She wanted him dead.
Garrett's deputies and her friends tried to pull her away from him
but even with their combined strength it was a task difficult to employ.
Interspersed between her tears, Deluvina Maxwell cried out to all who could hear,
"They've killed my little boy!"
Billy's body was then carried to the carpenter shop 
and carefully laid down on top of a table.
Lit candles were placed surrounding The Kid.
The village then held an all night long candle lit vigil.
Women and children, the old and the poor,
even manly men were seen openly weeping,
as they all walked by giving their final good bye
to their fallen young friend now eternally sleeping.
 
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Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Crossing the Toad - New Collaboration

Theme for collaboration suggested by Tim Smith


Two enormous old toads crossed the road
On Tom’s back lounged Thomasina toad
Both are ugly and warty
Thomasina’s so naughty
As her bowels on his back she’d download

06-16-17

WRITTEN BY JAN ALLISON

When Thomasina toad dumped on old Tom
He thought her poop explosion was a bomb
He hopped in the air
gave her a mean stare
shouting, "I'm not taking you home to Mom!"

WRITTEN BY LIN LANE


Ribbit rubbit robbit  'n ro
this crazy toad has got to go
She's turning quite mean -
Fifty shades of green
No time to chat but still does crow

WRITTEN BY TIM SMITH

"Why don't we do it in the road?"
Said Thomas, the old horny toad
Thomasina hissed,
"Get a load of this!"
and a "blessing" on him bestowed

WRITTEN BY LIM'RIK FLATS

Thomasina was on a road trip
Her taxi was Tom's back she'd grip
But she strained as she held
And her bottom expelled
So she said "I've just left you a tip"

WRITTEN BY RAY GRIDLEY


Tom and Thomasina were the perfect pair
They were ancient toads without a care
He had a huge wart
She gives a mean fart
Anyone in her vicinity better beware!

WRITTEN BY ALEXIS Y


Now Tom was an over achiever
He wanted the lady, not leave her
He sprayed his back with Scotch-Guard
and rubbed down with lots of lard
the dumper was now the receiver

WRITTEN BY DALE GREGORY COZART

Tom gave Thomasina the boot
Got sick from the smell of her poot
told her to get lost
right after he tossed
She gave him the one finger salute

WRITTEN BY DANIEL TURNER



Thomas and Thomasina loved to hear
the waterboatmen rubbing their gear
Thomas tried and started to croak
causing Thomasina to choke
you two will never get it right I fear

WRITTEN BY SEREN ROBERTS

When T'sina hopped on for a ride
Old Thomas reminded his bride,
"Though you're my sweet dish,
on the road we'll get squished",
"Just do it!" was her terse reply.

WRITTEN BY CRAIG CORNISH

Thomasina and Tom a heavy load
Lingered a little too long on the road
He could have kissed her all night 
shocked at the oncoming lights 
Croak and ribbit was heard; two flattened toads

WRITTEN BY EVE ROPER

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06-16-17
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Valley’s Echo Singular Song

"In the echo of silence, the whispers of the Divine are heard."  By Rumi

I entered the winding path into the captivating vale
Surrounded by ice-capped mountains and ancient trees
Firs, larches, redwoods, spruce, and ash, all grand
I shouted in glee: “I’m here!” All around some Echo replied.

A repetitive Echo, always vibrating and mesmerising.
What a singular sound to hear nature at its best!
I lounged beneath the shade of an old maple tree,
Where the verdant vale lay sprawled in front of me.
Balmy breezes blew through dark green trees, an Echo divine.

Tiny thrushes flitted from bush to bush.  
They permeated the vale with their familiar songs.
Occasionally they rested on a dense bush,
Hush!  Did I hear the song again?
Choirs of echo resounded all around the lush plateau.

Down on the majestic plain, a babbling brook meandered
Towards a clump of cottages, providing water for all.
The rivulet was a sight with fronds of ferns unfolding.
How delightful to hear the water emanating such dulcet echo
As the stream zigzagged around rocks and small waterfalls.

Every echo ended in silence profound and I was in God’s peace.  
A holy hymn hummed serene:  echo after echo, all divine.


Placed 1
Form: Imagism

Weekend With Drew

Spending an entire weekend
             with one of your best friends
                        is a treat onto itself,
           but spending an extended weekend
               with the same friend
                     is even better...
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               Drew had come over, with his parents,
             to get a haircut and enjoy some conversation.
            Before they had a chance to leave,
                 he was talked into staying the night.
             We spent it lounged on basement couches
            enjoying our viewing of Spartacus.
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             The next morning, 
          we reenacted historical skirmishes,
           with a bit of artistic license,
           until it was time to accompany my mom 
           to a friend's cookout.
           We enjoyed the usual fare of burgers & hotdogs
          as we quizzed one another on random movie trivia.
            Although we weren't all too athletic,
          Drew and I played a few games of pickup football
       with a group of kids we'd never met before,
             before retiring to my place for the night.
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            Sunday was set aside for camping,
           the original reason Drew and I were
            supposed to hang out.
           My parents took us to one of my favorite spots,
          Kennerdell,
             where we delighted in swimming in the creek,
        hiking the trails, 
            and watching Return of the King.
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             A copy of Wedding Crashers 
            kept us entertained on the drive back home.
             After dropping Drew off at his house;
           back to his temporarily estranged family,
            it was time for me to finish,
              and begin,
             work on my D.A.R.E. project.
           I finished pretty quickly
            & spent the evening thinking about
         how wonderful of a Memorial Day Weekend
           it had been
            in the company of one of my best friends.
Form: Bio

Premium Member Pour Me Some Wine, My Love

We lounged on the back deck as twilight fell
and gazed as tiny fireflies cast a spell.
 
As Nature placed her glory on display,
we sipped red wine, reflecting on our day.

We’d had a scrumptious meal my love prepared,
and then a soothing bubble bath, we shared.

On cool silk sheets, we’d shared . . . oh, so much more
till both of were sated to the core.

We’d watched a Lifetime romance on TV
and swayed to tunes we love by Kenny G.

We didn’t wash one dish or make the bed.
“The maid will do those things!” my lover said.

“Of course, she will. We’ve better things to do.”
I said. “I’m ready for the back-lawn view.”

That’s when we got the wine and went outside.
A place like this is such a source of pride--

Out front car doors were slamming, and we knew
to all that splendor we must bid adieu.

The owners of the home returned too soon!
We fled through woods on paths lit by the moon.


August 3, 2021
entered in An Interesting Couplet contest
Sponsor: Funom Makama
Form: Couplet


Premium Member Ode To the Madman

Ode to the Madman

It was heaven in hell, both.
It was 115 degrees and I was in hell.
But heaven was in sweltering Palm Springs.
And I tasted nectar and ambrosia, both,
Under the dauntless palms.
I took in the majesty of the gods
As they bowed to each other,
Like kow-towing Chinamen in white robes.
I took in the flames and the feathers, both.
I took in the shadows and the spotlights of the stabbing sun.
The book was Women by Bukowski.
I lounged by the winking, blue-eyed pool,
Eyeing the half-naked women in bikinis,
Reading the drunken madman,
Sipping daiquiris on ice
Brought to me by the big-breasted beautiful girl
From behind the bar.
The way she walked as she brought me my drinks,
Was a Revelation and a turn-on, both.
It seemed, as I discerned from her big-breasted body language,
That she already knew the answers to life’s unasked questions.
That she had already traveled 
To the farthest star in the galaxy.
That she had already tasted the wine of eternal wisdom.
Yes, it was the way she walked.
Bukowski would’ve smiled and said:
“Comon honey, let’s dance!”
I was in heaven and in hell, both.
It was 115 degrees, and I sweated.
But I saw paradise under the dauntless palms.
Ode to the madman!
“I sip this daiquiri in your name.”
Brought to me by the big-breasted beautiful girl
From behind the bar.
Form: Ode

Premium Member The Hero

Bordering the local 
football ground, young 
mountain ash bend 
in the cold wind.
Almost reaching to full height,
their lean, pliable trunks bow
and spring back,
whipping against the air.
Defiant, almost arrogant
they dance and swirl 
their leaves like balls 
of streamers waved 
by frenzied fans.

Boyhood comes charging back
as I walk the boundary,
booted up and wearing
number twenty five.
I inhabited the hero,
rode wild applause
to the consummate ease
of my play and saw
my name bannered
in large print
across Sunday replays.

Imagination flew far above
my skill and as time 
chastened dreams,
ambition retreated to a place
in a noisy crowd
carried along on the swells 
of boisterous cheer,
or lounged in a chair
watching an ad riddled
game at home by myself
with a beer.

Premium Member Fever, Night Fever

With chips and fries, girl buddy Pam and I
Lounged on a diva for night- time cable,
When Travolta caught our TV- tube eyes
Hips gyrating to Night Fever’s wiggle.

Our feet tapped as we looked at each other
“Let’s hit the town and paint it red”, we said;
In a flash, we dolled up and tossed our hair 
Scooting the bar where pop- tunes drowned ahead.

We paced the dance floor wiggling our hands
To the height of beats like ‘ole college days
Then, more late 90s theme songs rocked the band
While starry eyes begged for music ablaze.

The crowd mingled to pass few drinks around
As we jigged along, romping like prom queens,
Till street lights dimmed to imply---‘homeward bound’
No way! It’s Girls’ Friday till morn , supreme!


Daren Watson's A Girls Night Out
by nette onclaud
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member The Old Man In a Boat

Our nephew and his lovely wife invited us for an afternoon on their boat
and I immediately thought of The Old Man And The Sea…you know the book that Hemingway wrote.

As I lounged in the softness of my seat and felt the wind blowing through my hair…I wondered about Hemingway’s fisherman…and how he and I would compare.

We learned Santiago was an old and experienced fisherman as his story did unfold…I am not a fisherman…but like Santiago…I am old.

Santiago put in early…it was for the big catch he did wish…our boat left the dock around midday heading to a restaurant where we’d eat fish.

Santiago’s boat was a little skiff…he fished all day and all night under the moon…we were out for a few hours in a bigger boat…with a motor…and pontoons.

Santiago fought an enormous marlin…worried he’d make a mistake…without a worry we gawked at enormous houses on our leisurely ride across the lake.

Santiago fished alone…hoping the bad luck he experienced of late would come to an end…I sat there thinking how lucky I was to be surrounded by family and friends.

Santiago braved the elements…the fish…his own fatigue…the cold…Gee, I guess when I really look at it…all we have in common is that the two of us are old.

Yes, after throughly thinking this through…that’s the only comparison I can see…between my experience yesterday…and the old man and the sea.

And although Hemingway’s novel won him a Pulitzer and is, arguably, one of the finest books he wrote…I think I prefer my version of the old man in a boat.
© Jim Yerman  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Team Usa Going To Pieces

One moment there was a time  

When things had to be done on a dime  

I will never decline  

A VHS treasure find  

If you get over the hypocrite's hatred of the dirty mind  

Image beautiful and sweet  

Puzzle needing to complete  

Displaying a model athlete  

Depended on the qualifying heat  

When they compete  

Not able to afford graduating from state  

Revealing the losing scholarship death card, sealing their fate  

Every interlocking piece  

Police could connect to the recently deceased  

An idea from Spain  

Who would complain?  

The one winning the game?  

Achieving fame?  

And what about the loser looking for someone to blame?  

Back in eighty-two  

When LA lounged near the pool  

Pieces came out  

Reclining couch audiences screamed and shout  

Chainsaw dismembered  

Vietnam War remains remembered  

Finally, asking ‘is this the student’s life?’ 

Decided by the psycho's knife  

While the orchestra plays the fife  

And strums  

The patriotic drums  

Saying everything is all right  

Go ahead let’s all fight  

When slasher films unspooled, it made us feel  

Knowing the body parts were not real  

When thinking up a new deal  

Bring peace into the mix  

That is an answer we could all fix  

Killing is not a good plan  

Instead write a script my dear great grandson of Sam 

It may end up a streaming hit  

Especially lurking inside a tool boxers kit
Form: Rhyme

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