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Fever, Night Fever

With chips and fries, girl buddy Pam and I Lounged on a diva for night- time cable, When Travolta caught our TV- tube eyes Hips gyrating to Night Fever’s wiggle. Our feet tapped as we looked at each other “Let’s hit the town and paint it red”, we said; In a flash, we dolled up and tossed our hair Scooting the bar where pop- tunes drowned ahead. We paced the dance floor wiggling our hands To the height of beats like ‘ole college days Then, more late 90s theme songs rocked the band While starry eyes begged for music ablaze. The crowd mingled to pass few drinks around As we jigged along, romping like prom queens, Till street lights dimmed to imply---‘homeward bound’ No way! It’s Girls’ Friday till morn , supreme! Daren Watson's A Girls Night Out by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/9/2014 9:38:00 AM
NETTE, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-
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Date: 6/4/2014 12:57:00 AM
Interesting write, congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 5/19/2014 11:48:00 PM
Like it
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Date: 5/12/2014 2:25:00 PM
I have a sudden urge to go to a highschool reunion. This was a lot of fun Nette.
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Date: 5/12/2014 12:04:00 PM
I think songs and dance hypnotize young girls and like to have such a nice fever at night. Funny indeed. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/11/2014 7:38:00 PM
Your poem made me look to our impending night fever, Nette. In our next meet ups let's engage in one. I bet there's poetry waiting at a partyplace much like this fun and energetic poem.
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Date: 5/11/2014 6:00:00 PM
love this wonderful fun write, Nette
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Date: 5/11/2014 4:36:00 PM
Nette, fun poem nothing like a girls night out with a good friend
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Date: 5/11/2014 4:06:00 PM
Interesting outing..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2014 4:02:00 PM
Sounds like a grand time..I have admit though my sister is still mad at me because I took her disco record to "disco demolition" back in 1979. They blew up disco records between a doubleheader baseball game. Needless to say the 2nd game was not played. Hugs Tim
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Date: 5/11/2014 3:05:00 PM
Enjoy it while you can girls:)) You only live once...but be good! Give me the late 60s and 70s and 80s any time!! (just giving you clues to my age!) /x/ paul
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Date: 5/11/2014 1:51:00 PM
Sounds like a fun night to me Nette!
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Date: 5/11/2014 1:37:00 PM
- Have fun - dancing all night - Enjoyable poem - Soon there is a new week ... new Friday comes :) --- a nice and fun week! - " Diva Nette " :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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