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Football Commentary

I write in remembrance of the late Dennis Liwewe (Zambia's No.1 and Celebrated Football Commentator). Here is a short football commentary:
"Ah, this is Dennis Liwewe. We are here in Mauritius, where the two sides, Zambia National Team and Mauritius National Team will battle it out this afternoon. Capacity crowd 40,000.
The referee is from Kenya and match commissioners from Nigeria and Senegal respectively. 
At this point in time, the referee blows play on , and  Mauritius team take the ball back to their goal keeper. A loose ball pass the centre circle, a bad pass by Zambia we are in deep trouble, Only to be saved by the Goal keeper Efford Chabala. This is no other than Kapambwe Mulenga, defending very well. Ball zooms out for the throw in. We are beaten in the air, Ashios Melu picks up loose ball, he beats a man in a double one two situation, he kicks a tumble, which is well chested by Kalusha Bwalya ( popularly known as Great Kalu). Great Kalu beats two, three Mauritius defenders. Great Kalu within a firing range, hammer. It's a gooooooal 1-0 to Zambia. Back to the studio for our sponsors. Mauritius are coming in a counter attack situation, their dangerous striker is breaking even, Bomber. It goes away. Again and again, Zambia takes control of the situation here, Efford Chabala pumps a long ball passes the centre circle, we are good in the air. Kelvin Mutale dribbles two Mauritius defenders, hammer. It's a goooooal Zambia leading by 2-0 . Second half , Mauritius are very aggressive at the goal, they want to equalize. We are in deep trouble again here, sliding tackle by Kapambwe Mulenga, and the ball zooms for a corner kick for Mauritius. Headed away by Ashios Melu, a little pass to Charles Musonda, passes the centre circle, he turns 360 degrees. He passes the the ball to Kelvin Mutale ( the master dribbler), it's a gooooooal, 3-0 to Zambia. We are in the dying minutes here,
And the referee blows the final whistle. This is Dennis Liwewe signing off. Pick it up ZNBC studios in Lusaka, Zambia.

May his soul rest in eternal peace

Concept by Zambian Sports Lovers
Poetry Chipepo Lwele


Note: Dennis Liwewe made Zambians to love football in the 70's, 80's and 90's when we had 2 band radios and few television sets, we were glued to the radios young and old, less educated and highly learned. He made sure that the message is loud and clear.


Premium Member Foxnews Siege

If the FoxNews commentator
and his Republican Congressman colleague
with pro-public universal health constituents
zealously inviting themselves to siege his suburban home,
witnessed by terrified wife and daughter
fearing for their Business As Usual lives,
had the intelligence of a bilateral snake,

They might have seen
and heard
and smelled
and felt
the other, more dramatically lethal, half
Both/And
Elder RightBrain rumblings
of sieges past

What you just said
about Rabid Left
was also true of rabid Right
seething gunfire and baby tissue venom
against Planned Parenthood
and UnPlanned PanReGenerativity

As our Snake River
bends left for cooperative multicultural ownership
of EarthTribe PositivEnergy Global Democracy

And Right
for more conservation of sacred restorations
healing extended HolySpirit EarthTribe justice,
reinvesting through cooperative
SecularLeft-SacredRight co-ownership

On our most intelligent
bilateral
BothLeft  AndRight
journey toward aggressive sieging
and unsurging calm waters
Left-Right bicameral
Snake journey toward ZeroZone Paradise.

Wiser than a LeftBrain dominant Fox
with RightWing
patriarchal historic dominance,
listening too far Right Supremacist
to arrive on Cooperative Revolution of all EarthTribe,
MainStream sieges for health
and anti-sieges for death 
of interdependent matriarchal freedom,
MidWay, either win straight patriarchal or lose
WuWei, Win Ego co-arising Win EcoPolitical cooperative power
Vocational BiLateral ZeroZone 
bicameral Health/Wealth Target.

Fortunately, and unfortunately,
I enjoyed not hearing the more tyrannic tragic half
of their untold self-pardoning siege story
perhaps having forgiven themselves,
ourselves,
too easily
for absence of healthy climate care
during sieges against harder ecofeminist
and urban rainbow targets
out for WinWin ego/ecopolitical cooperative gain,

Trumpian anti-healthcare voices
for their own past rapacious sieging 
but not mentioning these unfortunate events
while speaking for unsieging the rabid Left--
a fake anti-sieging 
fake WinLose, when everybody misinformed loses, 
fake moral values 
talking without healing justice walking
game.

Premium Member Blind Faith

Blind Faith

So, even the expression, blind faith, makes my blood boil.
 
I've had one too many conversations with "intellectuals" who disdainfully look down on us believers for believing in a Creator. They imply by the expression blind faith, that we do not have the mental capacity to think or to reason, that we blindly, or naively, are lead to believe in God without any proof.

They say that believing in an invisible person, or force is foolishness, a mere childlike fantasy nothing more.  One commentator said "I used to have an imaginary friend, when I was a child, but I grew up, and no longer believe in fairy tales, and imaginary sky friends, like God".

Firstly, I would say that it is not foolishness, to believe in invisible forces. Science has proven the existence of radio waves, gravity, magnetic attraction, electricity, wi-fi, and on and on goes the list. So it is not the intellectually weak-minded who believe in invisible forces, it is all rational people.

To be frank, if there is no Originator of life, no Initial Causer, Creator, or Intelligent Designer, then what is left?  What initiated life? Chance you say! Ok, let's look at random chance as the initiator of life. Ask any scientist what are the mathematical probabilities, that life, even in it's most rudimentary form came about by chance,  they will tell you the odds are trillions to one, over billions of years!

So let me get this straight,  believing in a great Causer, when we see the effect (us, life as we know it) is unreasonable, but according to them, it is more reasonable to conclude, that life came from nothing at all, and the odds are trillions to one against it, and that it is a fact.  Interestingly, mathematics professors will tell you that  10 billion to one odds, is the limit, beyond that it is not only improbable, but rather, mathematically impossible to happen.

So, to prove God exists, all we need to do, is do the math! It is mathematically impossible that life came by random chance. For those that believe it to be true...sounds a little like...hmmm...... blind faith!


John Derek Hamilton
May 16,2017
Form: Didactic

Premium Member Lord God, You Are My Cause Checker

August 2 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on Jeremiah 51-52

Key Verse – Jeremiah 51:36 Therefore thus saith the LORD; Behold, I will plead thy cause…

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY CAUSE CHECKER			

Lord God, You are my cause Checker, 
and You lead me to fight evil agitator
Thank You for healing my heart, wounded by deceit of carnal commentator
Along Your standards I adhere to as Your awed spectator
While You establish me to follow You, my life Director.

Lord God, You are my cause Checker, 
and You confound me against falsehood
Thank You for redeeming my soul to grant me eternal biblical sainthood
Along Your rulership over my status, bearing believer’s priesthood
While You bless my inheritance and servanthood.

Lord God, You are my cause Checker, 
and You fill me against vain emptiness
Thank You for guarding my faith from doubt’s destructiveness
Along Your Scriptures I cling to with steadfastness
While You wake me up from fruitlessness caused by slothfulness.

Lord God, You are my cause Checker, 
and You correct me with Your authority
Thank You for binding my rebelliousness of fatal propensity
Along Your besieging divine tenacity
While You imprison me within Your loving security.

Lord God, You are my cause Checker, 
and You uphold me with Your truth’s pillar
Thank You for keeping my devotion within Your compassion-bar
Along Your throne that carries me to victory in my holiness-war
While You strengthen me upon Your inviting prayer-altar.

Lord God, You are my cause Checker, 
and You comfort me in my affliction
Thank You for pardoning my sins I confess toward my transformation
Along Your grace in Your pasture of sanctification
While You cleanse me from filthiness’ abomination.

Lord God, You are my cause Checker, 
and You protect me, defeating my adversary
Thank You for seeking my welfare against misery
Along Your prevailing kindness and mercy
While You empower me to proclaim Your Gospel story.

August 2, 2023
Form: Rhyme

' Constructive - Criticism ... ' ( An Oxymoron - For All, But a Few)

‘ Constructive-Criticism … (An Oxymoron, For All But A Few) ’

Constructive-Criticism Is Good, It’s True
But, I’ve Only Seen It Used Properly, By A Few …
‘Cause, One Thing I Know, That I Have Seen
‘Some’ Use Criticism, Just To Be Mean …

Then, The Term Should Be:  Destructive-Criticism
‘Cause, They Ain’t Even Getting Paid! … To Spout Poison In ‘Em
I Know Then, They Want To Abuse, in Jealous-Individualism
So, Maybe, They Need An Enema, or Have An Embolism 

Coming Up (or while under Construction) I Was Told
And The Engineer-Advice, Was As Good As Gold
‘ If You Can’t Say Something Nice, Don’t Say Nothing’ At All’
So, I Don’t Bomb Somebody’s Building, Just To Watch Them Fall

Constructive-Criticism, Don’t Sic That Dog On Me
Take It and Go Bark-Up, Somebody Else’s Tree
Take A Look At Your Own, Before You Tell Me What’s Wrong
You Know What You Can Do With That … (and The Horse You Rode On)

And In The Words of ‘Tom Snyder’,  (The Idea I Relate):
“Just ‘Cause I Think Somebody’s Trying To Kill Me … Don’t Mean They Ain’t!”
And, If You Don’t Like My Building, There’s The Door, Walk Away
I Don’t Need You Cutting Down, My Structure of What I Say

And If Negative-Criticism, Is Under Construction ... That’s A Front !
When Have You Ever Heard of Something Negative, Building-Up ?
Maybe Somebody Dropped Them On Their Head As A Child
But That’s No Excuse To Criticize, Somebody Else, or Their Style

And that  ' True ', for A Few, I Meant at The Beginning
Here Are The Ones, I Accept Their Condescending:
GOD … Loved-Ones … Close Friends … (and Me)
‘Cause I Am My Own Worst-Critic, You See …

Constructive-Criticism, That’s an “””Oxymoron”””
And Look How That Word Is Spelt … Hon


(I Prefer The Term:  Commentator ( Cause I Love to Comment ! )
   ‘Cause I Want To Polish Your Metal, Without Leaving A Dent


Forro Part Two Glams and Glamorous

Former champions (World Heavyweight and Tag Team champions)
were managed by manager Solfege Virtuoso. Trying to regain
their now lossed titles
the manger withdrew them from contention
and disallowed their return match clauses.
He fired them and replaced them with new members in his stable.
He told his former proteges that they had" fell off the Horse and the
saddle had been refitted for someone who understood what winning was all about!"
He bough in "The Hoss" Barrence Gonzales
and "the Ox" Jigero BluBarb( " Ox of Oaxaca") who 
were former champions in three different organizations.
Their reputations preceded them, they
were guaranteed a title match and so was the guy who was
to defeat the World Champion upon
he first match and title opp,
in this new to him organization.
The introduction of " Lavender" Capucine Ferreira bough a quietness
across the arena and it was the beganning of the end of
the current worlds champions reign.
The promoter were said to have agreed to the managers terms
only at lunchtime the day of the
television taping. Minuet Dancer the representative of
the organization spoke of A new Narrative or a Climax to
a great story". They named the show
" Fate,and Fear, ". The managers dealing bought a new since
of change
to an organization who had a championship wrestler who worked tirerestly to promote
his style of wrestling, to be defeated by a showmen who enjoyed wrestling
and could out wrest nearly any one on the chart. This only prompted the former champions
and the now fired member to unite and recreate their selves and there approach.
They sought the wisdom of Ruggero Doolins, a manager who
had been a color commentator. They wore masks and got evening jobs .
Know one thought they were who they were
after all those guys worked for another company.
Form: Bio

Drams of Gold

said to debut .
The American All-Pro Division Champion
to bring both Title and Nine contenders to
The  World Of Wrestling league.
He will defend against "Company Prize"
and "Finger Boa" three way dance with specail guest
commentator the Swain Fame Game.
We know Bainez Managment
will be on hand, it's said
they fear's this mans famous or imfamous
"Griffe Ossouse" or in english
" The Bonic Claw" Ladies and Gentlemen
let me introduce..... mmask and all
Doctor Wolfgang Sinister, with his manager
"The Useful Idiot" Crooner Savage.

Sinister: looked at the sheet page
and confirmed the date: ah hell
told mister mans here to make it fun, get one of
those fools dude calls his freind
to sign on for a chance at greatness. told him
step right on up
and get in line. Let Ole Doctor Sinister
find out what wrong with ya'll.
Strum the strange and tune up the Tenor
somebody gotta listen to this ladies song!
Boy what ah night to get me where
I need to be. What a night to have me
doing what I do best!
The wrestling World right in
the claw of greatness.
Guess I got me another one!
Ha: ha; ( his evil laugh)


Docter Sinister is a flute player. He was fired from the Opera for
selling instrument parts from
the salvage scrap pile. He and Crooner swore to extract revenge on an uncaring world.
He dawned the mask and made his partner his manager.
and began wrestling in the Ole New Canada Wrestling group.
He married a woman there, when she began outshining him
in song he sent her home. He calls his time on the road
tourss. He has won Twelve Independent World titles.
He has unified four companies.
He has been called the greatest Champion of our time.
We proudly present Doctor Wolfgang Sinister!

From the desk of
Miss Cual ya'll
Form: Ballade

The Spanish Queen and Football

The Spanish queen and fooball

This forenoon in Cascais was very hot, sensibly I was not going out, switched on the TV and saw the second 
half of a football match between England and Spain. 
England, the favorite was on goal down at the time, but this didn't bother the biased commentator.
Since Spain was the underdog I rooted for this team but also because I took umbrage at his arrogance.
Not to forget, Spain is next door to Portugal, one has to show loyalty to Iberia.
What was watching was a new sport, similar to soccer
fast, but with sonorousness, that bad tackles and hurts
a temporary interruption, of a ballet on turf.
The last minute was dramatic, the English team went all out to score a goal but were denied.
The game was played in Australia and the Aussie public was even-handed and marvelous.
The Spanish queen with her daughter, had gone to Australia to see the match, this was a moral booster that helped, gave the extra strength to succeed.
Leticia, the Spanish queen, has brought King Felipe much happiness; this meeting of royals and commoners 
(you and me) is not always smooth 
I think of Prince Harry of England, a young man who liked to go out with his mates, hunting deer, a sport of blood that is a part of the upper classes, maybe Harry was not too keen on this sport, but preferred fast cars and
running in the woods.
He met, the love of his life, an American actress, she soon seduced him and they married.
Alas, she didn't take well to the royal obligations and
headed for the hills of Hollywood.
The sad part of this is she hates football, a sweaty game
not worth the effort
They have two small boys, wouldn't be great if they, one day, joined Liverpool Football Club?
© Jan Hansen  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Who Was Vin Scully

That really is my trademark. Day to day, week in, week out. If something happens and the crowd roars, I shut up.

~

Good is not good when better is expected.

~

Don’t let the winds blow your dreams away…or steal your faith in God


~ Quotes by Vin Scully

WHO WAS VIN SCULLY

Who was Vin Scully? I can surmise that he was wise.
He knew when to let life take over. He’d bend to the crowd’s
delight, stop his galloping tongue when the stadium exploded
with applause, oohs, ahhs, cacophonous roars.

Good is not good enough - how tough do you have to be
to leverage average? It is quite alright to be disappointed,
even angry in a less than stellar performance. Better
was expected - before they took the field, the dreams
of glory against the other team. Esteem not,  poor performance.

We view life as a sports game. Defeat can bring a grounder.
Depression can still every bit of light, the dreamweaver
kicked to the curb. Pick up that ball and bat and crack
that stitched odyssey out of the park than grab a footlong
and foaming beer and celebrate with all your teammates.

Bless the Lord who gives excellent dreams, allows the
arrow to stay a little too long, pulling back, pulling back
and still not ready but oh…oh when it flies, when
the little white globe, like a full moon, sails in just the right
direction over the spectator’s heads, breaks the speed
of light then it…all preparation, all potential energy, all
the teamwork was worth the wait, and the commentator
can say goodnight…rest in peace Vin Scully.

8/3/2022
Form: Prose

Prophet Mohammed and Holy Quran Miracle

Every prophet comes with miracles...someone asks what were the miracles of prophet Mohammed(May peace be upon him), now I will be mentioning some of them in the future, but here is one that I know and NASA did know when   Neil Armstrong  walked on the moon...he found a very wide line splitting the moon into to equal parts...As you know they properly didn't mention that fact ,but anyone who read the astronaut Neil Armstrong Biography may find that information,,,everybody in Earth was fascinated   by the fact that Humans made it to the moon.

the splitting of the moon was performed by God during the life of Prophet Muhammad(May peace be upon him) in order to convince Quraysh of his prophethood.[8][9] Virtually all Muslim commentators accept the authenticity of those traditions. The following Sorah 54:2, "But if they see a Sign, they turn away, and say, 'This is (but) transient magic'" is taken in the support of this view.[9] The classical commentator Ibn Kathir provides a list of the early traditions mentioning the incident: A tradition transmitted on the authority of Anas bin Malik states that Muhammad split the moon after the pagan Meccans asked for a miracle.


The splitting of the moon (Arabic: ?????? ??????) was a miracle attributed to Muhammad in Islamic tradition.[1] It derives from the Qur'anic Sora "Sura Al-Qamar, Sora1-3"54:1-2: The HOUR (of Judgment) is nigh and the moon did split. And if they see a sign they turn away, and say: "This is transient magic." Sura Al-Qamar
Form: Rhyme

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