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Premium Member Hand of God

HAND OF GOD

The deluge came like splattered tears,
palm’s held out to see if it was real.
Hemlines lifted as feet kicked against the water.
The scourge of cold could be felt on their backs -
throngs of  men, women, sons, and daughters.

Locked inside a cavernous boat, the saved,
like latchkey kids of the Most High.
Blinded from the pain of angry screams,
attending to the cries of the hungry wild.

Eventually, the water deepened and lifted the ark
from the muddy ground. Was there anyone left
to wish them well, to wave, to cheer?
The Lord pats the roof and sends them on their way –
for 40 days and 40 nights.

God pulled out his list and crossed off:
Deluge of complaints
Deluge of suffering
Deluge of immorality
Deluge of selfishness
Deluge of sin

2nd Place
8/27/2016
Contest: A Deluge
Sponsored by: Julia Ward


Unconditional Paternal Love Toward Shana Punim

Screaming writhing violent
uncontrollable spasms of abandonment
immediately followed her (like Mary's lamb)
where e'er she went
verbal communication attempt didst rent
ear piercing outpouring

barrage heard clearly by vested gent,
a bajillion miles away e'en
stymying the likes of Lois Lane, Clark Kent
or special ABC letter writ agent,
when aforementioned younger daughter
raged day and night without abatement

soon after our baby's birth
agonizing distress self evident
when bundle of joy became a toddler,
which ordinary concomitent
expectant joyful milestones
hoop fully attendant

with hypothetical offspring
aurally learning oral rudiment
basis of language skill
with instructional accouterment
mastering native tongue
celebratory breakthru achievement

acquiring brisk command of lingua franca
easily excelling telly
tubby "FAKE" accent
gibberish with cogent
encoded development coaxed ability
regarding divine acknowledgement

pertaining to obvious delayed development,
when dada decried disabled
doc's "NON FAKE"
dupe forced mine abhorrent
realization upon crestfallen papa,
that our precious progeny

requisite remedial requirement
versed here, viz poetic abridgement
thee youngest of
(deux) daughters afflicted
at young age initial

general consensus genetic accident
engendered ambiguous diagnosis,
cuz forming words absent
purportedly linkedin with
high functioning autism
spurred self blame abutment,

sans cognitive fluke (most
likely inherited) malady immediate adherent
parental duty entailed, promoted
vouchsafed, et cetera
lifelong intervention convert,
a blessed webbed accompaniment

decades later nearly wrought total abolishment
whereat now grown year old lass
defied wildest predictions, adjustment
witnessed thee cherished apple of my eye
metamorphosed since early adolescent

to secure part time employment
attending Bend, Oregon Community College
and coordinating advancement,
where Shana Punim secured plane ticket
and took to friendly skies to my amazement!
Form: Ballad

I loved my son

Inspired by the moving storyline in a show. It's not easy when our children grow up to abuse their children. Even when they disappoint us, we still love them.

I loved my son 
By Michelle Morris
24/12/2025

When we have children
We are optimistic about their future
We believe in their potential
We believe in their goodness

We pray for their hearts
Their minds, their souls
We pray that they'll be 
Good as gold

But that's not always 
The way life works 
Their journey is their own 
Their choices can hurt

I loved my son
Despite what he did
I loved my son
From cradle to grave

Good or bad
He was my son
Good or bad,
I loved him all the same

Good or bad,
I feel his loss in my bones
Good or bad,
My heart is broken; my soul, alone

I love my grandson
He is another son to me
I love my grandson
He is a good man, indeed

Someone I'm proud to know
A man whose choices are gold
He is a hero, a warrior 
He is a good father and friend 

Life is a lot of loose ends
We don't always get the closure we deserve
We have to smile and accept it 
We have to breathe and find peace 

When we have children
We assume they'll outlive us
We don't imagine that heartbreak 
Attending their funeral; trying to survive it

We pray for their hearts
Their minds, their souls
We pray that they'll be 
Good as gold

But when they're gone 
Before their time
It's a silent scream 
Against the reason and rhymes

They may not be 
Who we hoped they were 
But it the end, we still love them
Because that deep love endures

© Michelle Morris, 2025

Premium Member Alcoholism and Hope

Oh, how we loathe those who drink,
Such sinners, such losers, they are!
But we think we certainly are far more than perfect?
As we drive high on pot, drugs and booze zooming our oh, so saintly cars?

We stamp their foreheads with big letters, "DOOMED"
Never realizing that praying to God, is the very least we can do.

It's tragic for all involved, the drinker, the family and all his friends, too.
They make him or her the evilest and of him as a human, they loathe and eschew.

Having no idea that lawyers, priests, writers, actors, teachers and children as young as thirteen.
At this very moment attending AA meetings, their desire to be clean and sober is astonishingly keen!
It's never to late to live!

Unless you know someone who has overcome this most daunting task.
You are doomed to think they are lost with their face in a glass.

Untrue, a lie, please have faith in the Lord for healing, on your knees be kneeling with some feeling?
Only Satan wants you to buy into the concept, that there is no room and no hope for healing.

Dedicated to the alcoholics who still suffer, their families and friends!

Love, Panagiota 
(Who lost her husband to alcohol at a young age.)

AA - for Alcoholics
Alanon- for famiiy and friends of alcoholics
Alateen- for teenagers with relatives or friends imbibing 
ACA- Adult Children of Alcoholics
GA- Gamblers Anonymous
OA- Overeaters Anonymous
SA- Sexual Addicts Anonymous

All information is online. Meetings, chat rooms and support. All free.
Take action for you....whether alcoholic or not.

In memory of my husband. Gone, but not forgotten!

Premium Member Inner Alignment

Life going by for most
In vacuity like a ghost 
Unable to vitalise
The divine within to rise
The oft felt inner stirring
Needing tender attending
Yet our wilful neglect
Inability to stand erect
In mind-heart alignment 
Blocks bliss contentment 
Whilst by simply being still
Our cup of joy overspills
Automatically 
Enigmatically
As layer by layer
Discarding fear we uncover
Magnetic electricity
Elixir of divine connectivity
As this nectar we imbibe
Bliss words cannot describe 
Pulsates within in renewal
Rapture in ignition continual 
Consciousness bliss shift
Leaves all else save love adrift
Mind-body thus in resonation
With pulse of the Ohm vibration 

Ohm the quietus
Leaving no hiatus

Within
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member The Glory of Life

Come sit by the fire... let's reminisce
About this and that, about what makes us sing
Watching a robin take its first flight
Or a squirrel scurrying up a tree
The sun coming out from behind the clouds
The gentle breeze blowing the leaves in autumn
The gentle snow flakes softly falling in winter
Covering the ground like a warm blanket
Or is it the laughter of a baby
The purring of a kitten
The sound of cows mooing in the field
The twinkling stars on a warm summer's eve
A shooting star
The hum of the city
Which tells us we're one of many
Enjoying life on this amazing planet of ours
The roar of a jet engine
Taking people away on a happy vacation
The sound of a marching band
The smile on the cashiers face
As she wishes you to have a great day
So many images throughout life
Remind us how amazing it is to be alive
To experience these simple pleasures
To conjure up these amazing vignettes
Of the wonders we see and feel every day
I still remember my very first day at school
That was eighty years ago
But it's just like it was yesterday
Attending my very first baseball game
And none other than Jackie Robinson
Playing second base for the Montreal Royals
In his very first professional game
I could go on and on but as I age
My memory is not as reliable as it once was
Memories are wonderful to try to hold on to
To look back on a life filled with happiness and joy
Of course, there were some sad times
But they were far outnumbered
By just the simple pleasures we all experience
My life has been amazing!

Edith Is Found

At the foot of the stairwell 
face up she lay, knocked, smashed, kicked, 
robbed, disfigured, lifeless so
it seemed, when the police came,
with ambulance attending.

   In the trauma ward it was 
   all we knew, except her name
   was Edith. Over eighty 
   the nurses guessed she might be.
   Her face so swollen, she lay
   unconscious, so dependent
   on attentive hands nursing.

   Edith was just a form; charts
   recorded her distressed state;
   a person we could not know.
   Without family would she
   have anyone to live for?

The third day two young people 
arrived; shocked to see her so
unresponsive – as neighbours 
they came again with others.

Before she opened her eyes
we began to know Edith,
her nature mirrored in those 
she had befriended, cared for.
Cared for, injuries began
to heal. Pillowed, her hair washed,
we could imagine her as
lively, full of interest.

   One day she seemed aware of
   conversations, their presence
   touching, encouraging her
   response which came with a hand
   held out to grasp friendship; found.

   From there it was a long way
   for Edith to get back up;
   and to walk, to climb those stairs
   to home, but with therapy
   she was remade with young friends,
   friends to live for. She was found.
Form: Narrative

Premium Member HEART THAT BELIEVES THE LORD WHO PERFORMS WHAT HE SAYS

April 17 Heart for God Bible Meditations Based on 1Kings 12-14

Key Verse – 1Kings 12:15 Wherefore the king hearkened not unto the people; for the cause was from the Lord, that he might perform his saying, which the Lord spake by Ahijah the Shilonite unto Jeroboam the son of Nebat.

HEART THAT BELIEVES THE LORD WHO PERFORMS WHAT HE SAYS

Our heart believes the Lord Who performs what He says with His grace
Surely making us obtain favour in His sight, despite our sinfulness’ trace
Indeed, upholding our salvation by His compassion’s brace
Ever kind to accept our worshipful praise.

Our heart believes the Lord Who performs what He says with His goodness
Surely forgiving us of our admitted selfishness
Indeed, accepting our repentant earnestness
Ever merciful to pardon our filthiness.

Our heart believes the Lord Who performs what He says with His guidance
Surely directing us toward His deliverance
Indeed, guarding our decisions against ignorance
Ever authoritative to subdue our arrogance.

Our heart believes the Lord Who performs what He says with His generosity
Surely providing us according to His rich bounty
Indeed, meeting our needs to vanquish poverty and futility
Ever magnanimous to fill our dearth or scarcity.

Our heart believes the Lord Who performs what He says with His gripping
Surely enclosing us inside His care against fright-caused groping
Indeed, warming our spirit around His revival’s wrapping
Ever gentle to soothe our soul of painful hurt’s griping.

Our heart believes the Lord Who performs what He says with His glory
Surely hearing us in our lamenting misery, as well as in our triumphant story
Indeed, attending to our prayer and confession expressing sorry and fury
Ever timely to grant our expected faith-propped victory.

Our heart believes the Lord Who performs what He says with His glow
Surely cheering us by His provisions along blessings’ flow
Indeed, supplying our spiritual fuel against faithlessness-woe
Ever ready to rejuvenate our revival fire from distress’ blow.

April 17, 2026

Premium Member Cinqku Profound

Style speaks
Charm hurls voice
Cinqku profound
Understanding transcends
Surprise


Heed now
Sensorial
Feel nature spark
Movement in mundane glimpse
Blossoms


Smile sweet
In plain sight
Love light aglow
Live with sun and shadow
Blessings


Sensuous
Curvy lines
Kamasutra
Adrenaline pleasure
Rapture


Live wire
Electric
Feisty field trip
Quantum soup reflection
Wonder


A maze
In a daze
Wander in craze
Grandeur and splendour ace
Bright gaze


Look now
Deep within
Go deeper still
Beyond sure heart and will
Reveal


Venture
Adventure
Avoid censure
Measure beyond measure
Pleasure


Without
Not within
Vain disclosure
Dementia attending
Mindless


Warm gift
Momento
Downtown shopping
Branded goods selling cheap
Loose change


Calm cheer
Sits right here
Twirl of sweet spheres
Sensory upheaval
Touching


Hello
Keep in touch
Before the end
Tunnels jolt twist and turn
Goodbye


Tour group
China calls
Holiday trip
Glorious getaway urge
Five stars


Airport
Leaving now
Will be back soon
To be or not to be
Hurling


Report
Nameless
Missing person
Don't know what's happening
Query


Reason
Beyond rhyme
Problem puzzle
Jigsaw metaphor crafts
Unsolved


Twin hearts
Craft one love
Affair pleasures
Climbing up mountain top
Lasting


Lovely
Sensorial
Erotica
Primal pleasure mosaic
Climax


Nonsense
Unspoken
He says, she says
No one knows the ending
Nowhere


Words cite
New version
Verse craft wordplay
Awkward words in patchwork
Contest


Downpour
Flooding rain
Sudden wetness
Drenching weather report
Dowry


Live well
Touch and tell
Plain policy
Blossoming signature
Pleasing


Leon Enriquez
18 Mar 2014
Singapore
Form: Cinqku

Premium Member Lord God, You Are My Saviour of Great Compassion

September 16 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on Mark 7-9

Key Verse – Mark 8:1 In those days the multitude being very great, and having nothing to eat, Jesus called his disciples unto him, and saith unto them, I have compassion on the multitude…

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY SAVIOUR OF GREAT COMPASSION			

Lord God, You are my Saviour of great compassion, 
washing me by Your holiness’ cleansing
Thank You for forgiving my half-heartedness of shallow praising
I repent from worshipping You in vanity’s enclosing…
To You do I lay my life along Your commandments’ pressing.

Lord God, You are my Saviour of great compassion, 
working through me toward spiritual profitability
Thank You for rebuking my lack of dedication midst obvious iniquity
I repent from defiling myself with wickedness’ impurity…
To You do I cast cares that cause my soul’s infirmity.

Lord God, You are my Saviour of great compassion, 
wiping me of my filth by Your sanctification 
Thank You for purifying my heart against sinfulness and transgression
I repent from breaking my pledge to You because of temptation…
To You do I lay my all with sincere dedication.

Lord God, You are my Saviour of great compassion, 
watching me with Your understanding
Thank You for enlightening my mind along Your truth’s leading
I repent from rejecting Your corrections toward my arrogance-bending…
To You do I bring my need for Your gracious attending.

Lord God, You are my Saviour of great compassion, 
weakening me of my flesh-powered endurance
Thank You for listening to my prayer, providing for my eternal insurance
I repent from neglecting to prioritize You because of ignorance…
To You do I give my submission, braced by Your assurance.

Lord God, You are my Saviour of great compassion, 
winning over me from worldly entanglement
Thank You for securing my freedom against secular humanistic involvement
I repent from seeking enjoyment from temporal, ephemeral allurement…
To You do I surrender my unbelief while clinging to Your promised fulfillment.

Lord God, You are my Saviour of great compassion, 
warning me against peace-robbery
Thank You for gripping my commitment by Your miracles’ victory
I repent from offending You with my doubt and worry…
To You do I offer my sacrifice in the ministry for Your glory.
Form: Rhyme

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