Hand of God

HAND OF GOD The deluge came like splattered tears, palm’s held out to see if it was real. Hemlines lifted as feet kicked against the water. The scourge of cold could be felt on their backs - throngs of men, women, sons, and daughters. Locked inside a cavernous boat, the saved, like latchkey kids of the Most High. Blinded from the pain of angry screams, attending to the cries of the hungry wild. Eventually, the water deepened and lifted the ark from the muddy ground. Was there anyone left to wish them well, to wave, to cheer? The Lord pats the roof and sends them on their way – for 40 days and 40 nights. God pulled out his list and crossed off: Deluge of complaints Deluge of suffering Deluge of immorality Deluge of selfishness Deluge of sin 2nd Place 8/27/2016 Contest: A Deluge Sponsored by: Julia Ward
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Neumann Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 11:02 AM
I like that. God and his tick box. Congratulations and wishes, Kai
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Thank you, Kai!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful imagery. I can feel the emotion evoked...Sunita.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 11:44 PM
Thank you, Sunita! :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 9:39 PM
Congratulations on a great write.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Scars Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Kim, wonderful poem you wrote here, congrats on your fine placement :)-luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, Luloo!
Haight Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 12:32 PM
I like the way you addressed the theme, Kim. Very creative and well-written. Congratulations on your fine podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Hugs :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 3:27 PM
ever pouring with graceful expressions, kim... fine write!..huggs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 11:07 PM
I don't know how the question marks got there...lol
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Thank you, Nette! ??
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