Long Aloha Poems

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Premium Member Aloha, Connie Marcum Wong

Aloha, Connie Marcum Wong

A fellow islander, here in the State of Hawaii
Plain common folks in touch with its aina (land)
Noticed by many soupers long before this tadpole swam the pond
Well-grounded, skilled with a pen, with a memorable persona,
In my view, I became a welcomed homey, charmingly receptive, in a comfortable regular confab of subject subtleties to filling, reflections of a lifetime,

From our friends to our families to our Hawaii ~~

                                          ...of a gorgeous floral lei, imagined or realized
                                                    ...both pales in comparison
                                                              ...Aloha always
                                                                        ...my blessings,
                                                                                  ...Connie
                        
2019 September 20

*2nd Place*

Pick a Friend on Soup
~~Bobby May
Form: Narrative


Premium Member Aloha

lift moon high,
swaddled in clouds 
between
two slender limbs —
soothing wailele.*
pontoon boat
far low,
quietly
nesting.
Hawaiian
aloha
breaching the tall mast.
mahina orchestrates
the
cool sapphire cascade.

9/4/2019
Emile Pinet’s Yalto poems only Poetry Contest

Yalto listed as verse. Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables


*howmanysyllables.com correct except for the Hawaiian word wailele. 
Can verify on https://www.to-hawaii.com/hawaiian-dictionary.php


wailele - waterfall (pronounced why-leh-leh)
aloha - hello (pronounced ah-loh-hah)
mahina - moon (pronounced mah-hee-nah)
Form: Verse

teralani - E Ku'U Aloha

Love finds its way from dead magma of my Soul
We giggle on our island with seemingly no enemies
I wonder if the Seven Sacred Pools are just an illusion
and waterfalls are tears of joy or ... sorrow.
This is a journey of a day for Gods 
- we leave a place and get back in full circle.
You prove to me how weak I am in your emerald embrace 
but do not look me in the eyes when searching for Our eternity.
Heavenly Earth - My Love - I ride alone although the car is full... 

I do not trust these rainbows - I think they play tricks with my heart- 
How can Purity regenerates from the coldness of Insanity 
and still be eternally yours when I am just another passer-by? 
Teralani - E Ku'u Aloha - it's time for me to go ! 

                                        *

"A tearful nude with wings slapped by the sad beauty of her sunsets" 
is missing here, today, at the burglarized Island's Art Gallery of Life...


for Syed's "Free Style"

Premium Member Pacific Ocean

Paradise is realized in the Pacific, excitement is found in her waters,
but never forget she can muster mighty storms, along her shores
there is a ring of fire - I retell her stories to my children,
their memories are out to sea.
—by Poet

The Cliffhanger castled above the waves.
The scorch of ring of fire, the club headed due South.
In darkness, the sea was disturbed.
Would our workplace be preserved - open mouth.
Hoping the Pacific behaves.

Aloha, we’ve flown over her; here’s paradise.
Exploring the North shore is exhilarating.
Unlike coast of California,
Oahu waters surround us, enticing, nice;
vainglorious waves, pulsating.

We play for three years, with three kids,
in Pacific sands and gliding on boogie boards.
We watch islanders leaping from the cliffs.
My twenties, spent in bathing suit, with its rewards.
Opening and closing eyelids -

the makings of a poet who never forgets.
I remember the eye of Hurricane Iwa -
holding my infant son; the breeze,
then weighty winds coming from the ocean diva;
a performer with majestic outlets.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member A Witchs Vavavavoom

As if the house had landed on a witch’s vavavavoom,
the door’s ajar, and my boy had alerted me…

surely tornadoes increase the velocity of speed
of a mom, to zero in on, a three year old.

Forget the broom. Hear the prophet speak
of pleasant things. The boundary has fallen

in pleasant places. If ignored the blessing
clears at the speed of light, taken

from the bright eyes of infinity. Listen to the kid,
not the seven dwarfs, nor the munchkins…

“Mom, come here.” The witch’s broom, stored away.
Clearly, at this point, you think me a witch! C’mon!

Teachable moment…parents lean in. When the dumb speak…
clearly, I mean, when your son is willing to share ANYTHING,

just like E. F. Hutton…stop the presses, lean in and listen,
especially if you want him to trust you with future things,

or trust you at all… so I’m on a run…still my heart…
What will this boy impart? Are we invested in Oz?

A side note, just because…we brought him to see
a 3-D short…the witch cackled…he screamed!

Back on Oahu, Aloha…the door is cracked, minah birds
minding theirs or someone else’s business, as they

are gossipers, given to mimicry. The world has opened,
the sun is shining, as the boy points at a plenary rainbow.

Oh my heart…oh my boy… I know they must grow,
but they forget their moms when they marry,

but moms don’t forget or they shouldn’t - the promise,
the flood of memories… I’m over the rainbow!!


Premium Member Tsunami

Tsunami

Clinging to a tree my might is numb
Teeth chattering, soaked in seaweed I succumb
to the shores of doom, the tides violent surge
Adrift and marooned all owed to a sudden urge
After the party I woke up on a tropical island 
Wild rainforest and coconut groves, tailor made in Thailand
The Turtle Island, underwaters heaven
We were seven, gone snorkeling the night before
None of which were ones who washed ashore
I heard scrambling voices from below
less those who didn’t survive the deathblow
Lungs spewing up ocean water, not the timeless turquoise,
but the stormy muddled wash, murky, writhing wildly 
sirening a crushing noise
Twigs, glass, and storms debris rips through skin
Blood seeps down red rivers running thin
soaked thoroughly, bringing shivers    
As tidal waves and ruthless rain cease their wells,
instinctively the islanders help each other through 
the fallen landscapes
As the beached turtles struggle in their shells, 
who once glided effortlessly in the sea 
I know what I must do
Keep with the spirit of aloha
and stay until the sky becomes blue 
Then set the turtles free
© I Am Anaya  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Beach Menagerie

At daybreak,  
I approach the beach across a soft hill of clover, 
past sleeping Pandanus palms,
and down a small sand dune.

I am enveloped by sea wind.

I look up to a flight of swallows - symbol of returning.
They occupy the airspace of seagulls.
A kookaburra laughs, somewhere to land-ward,
bringing fond memories of far off bushland. 

A Malamute passes beside me,
pulling a woman on a long leash. 
If she had a small sled she could mush
along this perfect white beach.

Tall lady pines grace the shoreline
their skirts just out of reach of sea water.

Seagulls sit in small conventions pecking free donuts.
They queue up for cups of coffee; I imagine 
their grey wings tucked through Aloha  shirts.
A German shepherd lopes, wolf-like, scatters them,
they swoop out to sea, laughing.
They'll be telling the folks back home
of their close call.

Now the sun's rays have reached the high rises,
awakening diamond fires from glass windows.
On the horizon, sunbeams reach down in straight lines
like sun-pictures from a  child's storybook.

My imagination runs wild but my walk has ended,
as I climb the wooden ramp - back to the street,
alive for what my day holds.

Premium Member A Thing Of Beauty part II

A Thing Of Beauty part II

‘The Mother’  The First Generation

The Me alas breaks free
claims my true pedigree
my lineage, my essence
who I was, who I am, who I shall always be
Of two generations après Moi
in awe how they've succeeded 
I drink from the fonts of my true nature
Nectar indulging deeply into my delicious sustenance 
Quenching a thirst for true belonging
Sturdily balanced upon a steady course
A radiant surge satiates my being
An abundance, a cornucopia of profusions— 
my cup runs over—to be savored and shared
upon lips of those who yearn to imbibe
The Me alas breaks free
© I Am Anaya  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Appreciation

Andy!

          -Aaron!
          -Aloha!

Aloha!
All
A-ok?

           -Absolutely

Amy?

           -Amazing

Awesome!
Alan
Apply
Army?

           -Almost

Almost?

           -Anchors
            Away

Ah!

           -Ahoy!

Amusing :)
Abigail
Alright?

           -Aye,
            Admiral ;)

Almost
Amusing :)

           -Andrew
            Alright?

Andrew's
Arrested

           -Arrested??

Amphetamines

           -Addicted?

Addict

           -Awful :(

Answer??

           -Adoration

Amen

           -Appropriateness
          -Acceptance
          -Approval

Also
Appreciation

           -Agreed!

Adios!

           -Alligator. . .





***
12/17/2019

Poetry form: Alliteration - Each poem in my Alliterative Alphabet Series describes conversations between two or more people while only using words that start with or sound like the first letter of the title of the poem. I’m publishing the poems as I write them on Wattpad.com, not necessarily in alphabetical order. My goal is to write at least 26 poems to cover each letter of the alphabet. I hope you find the concept interesting, maybe even clever. Most of all I hope you enjoy them :)

Disclaimer: This poem is fictional and does not depict any actual person or event.  The names used are ficticious and were chosen to satisfy the requirements of the poetry form.
© Mark Toney  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Aloha My Friend

*Image of Lewis Milton Hankins

aloha my friend
a bevy of doves
laurels wrestle a whirlwind
fair plumes coronet
                        ~"The Last Token"~03/22/21 
 
weasels and foxes
snow tracks charging the blizzard
freshness soothes the wit
                         ~"On Bullying"~12/08/22 

sun setting a scene
evening stages curtain calls
a hall full of stars
                         ~"Forever in My Heart"~09/03/22 

*Narrowing the involvement of his generous enlightenment, even as much as spotlighting these chosen few, I rested upon his constant hope, that 'Their Heart Are Truly Forever'~~Aloha, Milt & Deb, my friends...

2023 January 03
*1st Place*
In Honor of Milt - An Un-contest
~~Andrea Dietrich: Judged 2023 January 16

*HMS.
Form: Haiku

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