Long Advising Poems
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Whenever you come closer, my brain chimes,
Indicating to my heart: someone special's coming, someone lovable, who's mine—
Someone with whom the word "love" will rhyme,
Someone who can’t be described even in 100 lines.
Everyone wants that one person with whom they can spend some time,
Someone who can take the role of the sun and, in their dark times, shine—
Someone who can act as their wine,
Making them forget their sorrow and realize that everything can be made fine.
I'm lucky to have my wine, who's lavish and cold.
For her, my love increases every day as she grows old.
People sometimes say she's not the best fit for me, because she's not who she is and isn't real.
I'd like to inform them to stop advising me, 'cause I extremely love bittersweet wine, dear.
mailed copious letters to friends
acquaintances, a couple to publisher
to elicit opinion which poet
perfection used to examine
acute as hesitation extracted
Darkness games —— Emily’s
intuitive aim put Robin Hood to
shame exacting was her Veracity
brook too clear to cross calmly near
So — this divinely embodied
Spirited Crystal lowered her sweetie
eats to children below her window
not resisting her feats Giggling
Family and contextual wealth a
gift from Lord Above though parental
closeness not too well fulfilled —-
adoring Austen and Vinnie jelled did
she Su as sister-in-law she could
not but completely open her door to this
endearing Core so smart with Presence
tangoing too impressive —— that rumours
abounded intimacy illegitimate
…
Flowers as neutral nifty charmers
Untainted with emotion her favourite
Devotion —- in perennial garden
Emily laboured with them advising
floundering pistils In own
orchards, fresh fields and woods
she knew them all as Inspiration
on willing call Spring or Fall
Emily —- an ember clear without masks
ambitions, mirages illustrious Lily light
from yonder
authentic her magnetic innocence sought
no validation Circled by Knowingness
within Singularity
sovereign her poems into Infinity
is sown ——- for near on two
centuries we now Crack her
Marbles which into booklets poetess
stitched
—- those on ink and under iridescent
skull nourishing West Cemetery
in Amherst dispersed
Emily’s ‘I felt a Funeral in my Brain’
STILL making Headlines
dying for Beauty surrendering
to Truth Penetrating pure her vibrations
across grey matter
She watches me
W R I T E
2025.03.08
You told me you were a loner,
You made me an invisible hanger.
Patiently hanging on for your next words.
You said you were a writer,
Indirectly you made me a waiter.
Waiting for you to tell me
When to contact, when to disappear,
That was not a good idea.
When I had no credit on my phone.
Indirectly, I had given you time to be alone.
Instead of advising me,
You let me wondering day and night.
Whether you were fine and alright.
Never mind, so we let bygone be gone by.
Wait a minute. Hang on,
Were you telling me after your birthday,
We were going to stay away,
From each other until your next birthday.
Never mind. It was fine by me.
I was no body cup of tea and I did not want to be.
One year on, I posted this birthday wishes,
Which was for yours eyes only,
It was all yours for the last 365 days,
You never treasured it any way.
So, it could be read by many others.
So long, Mr Loner. I bit you farewell.
Take care of yourself.
November 30 Scripture Meditations Based on Titus 1-3
Key Verse – Titus 1:3 But hath in due times manifested his word through preaching, which is committed unto me according to the commandment of God our Saviour.
MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR MANIFESTING YOUR WORD TO ME
Thank You for manifesting Your Word to me through clear preaching
Indeed exposing me to Your truth’s teaching
Readily wise for my knowledge-searching
Always instructing against worldly coaching.
Thank You for manifesting Your Word to me through constant counselling
Indeed advising me with Your precepts’ dealing
Readily corrective for my character-instilling
Always comforting against miserable failing.
Thank You for manifesting Your Word to me through authoritative guiding
Indeed directing me by Your statutes’ leading
Readily available for my revival-breeding
Always working against slothful minding.
Thank You for manifesting Your Word to me through earnest declaring
Indeed telling me to Your standards’ gearing
Readily assertive for my fruit-bearing
Always stirring against humanistic daring.
Thank You for manifesting Your Word to me through continual proclaiming
Indeed affirming to me Your commands’ claiming
Readily vocal for my virtue-grooming
Always checking against critical blaming.
Thank You for manifesting Your Word to me through stern warning
Indeed reinforcing to me Your testimonies’ winning
Readily effective for my ministry-training
Always reigning against wicked sinning.
Thank You for manifesting Your Word to me through vibrant admonishing
Indeed reminding me Your principles’ pushing
Readily functional for my worship-flourishing
Always charging against busy rushing.
November 30, 2022
~ “Hey - returning your note!” ~
perhaps I'm not your type, alas
but I'm behind you, here in class
adoring each and every thing you do
the way you talk - so soft, yet clear
and tuck the tresses 'hind your ear
(the hair I'd love to run my fingers thru) ...
I love the way you tilt your hip
and always bite your bottom lip
whene'er you get excited or annoyed
the way you pass me secret notes -
crimped origami swans and boats
advising me the girls I should avoid ...
for me it's not the threads or bling
it's each sweet, steamy little thing
that other guys don't care about at all
and yet, if added - two-plus-two
they make for one amazing YOU
(the enigmatic You I'd love to call) ...
you might not know me very well
trimesters - long enough to tell
I'm apt to always treat you with respect
you're tres romantic - much like me
and know that love can someday be
as faithful as two hearts can thus affect ...
so, if I may, I'll start this task
as rhyme and meter, meant to ask
if you might give us just an evening each?
perhaps a steak house - Japanese
a theater, next - that new release!
and then a dreamy walk along the beach ...
the stroll may seem a bit too soon
but sad to waste that lovely moon -
what romance it’ll weave, no one can tell
so ..
I hope you'll flip this page and write
you'd “love to” date me, (friday night)
but quickly now, before they ring ...
the bell!
~ POETRY AGAINST POVERTY ~
( photographic art created copyright-free by the author with Gemini AI / Meta AI software )
Libby Lou was a professional intermeddler
She had her hands in all most all of the towns people’s pots
Adding carrots and potatoes to some, digging tomatoes out of others
Criticizing the amount of thyme and pepper,
Constantly tasting, moving between their houses, burners and pots
Taking out, putting in, advising everyone, fixing things
Stirring, stirring stirring. Constantly stirring.
She came up missing in the middle of winter, chili fixing season.
We did not find Lilly Lou’s body until the park thawed out in March.
Murder was afoot.
There were potholders placed over her dead not-now-prying eyes.
It must have been a woman killer, the police chief said.
It is potholders, right? A woman’s weapon.
But wait, what about Marty, the short order chef.
Does he use potholders?
Coroner could not figure out cause of death.
Police gave up after a year or two.
Too many suspects.
Whole town knew Lou.
She had been fiddling in their stews for a long time
Criticizing everyone’s pot.
I’m tired of influencers faking nervousness.
my generation wants to care less
these days.
it’s a counter-current hack.
we want to be less defined.
we can search and reflect for ourselves.
we’re sick of the emotion
that’s all over everyone’s faces,
the unsightly splotches of opinion.
the entire election machine,
the process of getting there, is smudged.
It’s a curated mess, an advising spin,
an incomprehensible hex:
“Oh profit pondering,
contradictory means to an end
- bless weave, and conceal,
bloodless dollar debt options,
painful penny pincher paradoxes,
and deadly debt bliss dilemmas..”
“Is this a witch or an arbitrager?” Lisa asked, after rudely leaning over and reading up to this point.
“I was shooting for a numinous type of beat,” I revealed.
“We’re supposed to be working on our thesis definitions,” she said accusingly.
“Are you not challenged, here, hour by hour?” I asked sarcastically.
“I need ideas - well - I have too many ideas, I need some focus, I wanted to see what you had.”
I deadpan looked at her, “Well, you broke the spell - I lost my train.” I complained dryly.
“Don’t put me in a situation.” she said, waving my gripe off as insignificant.
.
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Songs for this:
Easier Said Than Done by Thee Sacred Souls
drive ME crazy! by Lil Yachty
Melt by Nilüfer Yany
Have you found a place in the world yet?
Perhaps just that one where you can belong?
A one place and time you have swept
A place you know you have lived to begone
Creating moments beyond grasp to flee
Have you that living moment for yourself only?
I would like to remember the moments that made me
Have I that touch unfelt to consider barely?
We all assume to have lived like someone
When even we ourselves barely grace the surface
What is it that we know... what have we become?
To be advising someone else for our dreams to chase
Can we just not think we know everything?
Why do we always think we know and pretend to know more?
Why and how does it mean from nothing?
Are we all living from someone else's advice before?
Can I say... perhaps far too many times I am swept
And my foundation isn't dated to belong
Simply... the world isn't to belong to anyone yet
Simply because... humanities are made to be gone
July 15 Scripture Meditations Based on Isaiah 7-12
Key Verse – Isaiah 9:6 … His name shall be called Wonderful, Counsellor, the mighty God, the everlasting Father, the Prince of Peace.
MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR BEING MY MIGHTY GOD
Thank You for being my mighty God, called as the Wonderful
Who is exceptional, divinely beautiful
Always enabling me to be faithful
So that I can do my all for You, diligently fruitful.
Thank You for being my mighty God, known as the Counsellor
Who is wise, advising perfectly--- the best Tutor
Always leading me, Your sailor that relies on You, my Director
So that I can pursue toward Your righteous endeavor.
Thank You for being my mighty God, declared as the everlasting Father
Who is loving, constantly my satisfaction-contentment Provider
Always meeting my needs for faith maturity further
So that I can please You, my bountiful Rewarder.
Thank You for being my mighty God, proclaimed as the Prince of Peace
Who is gentle, longsuffering whose mercy does not cease
Always cheering me up, forgiving my confessed sin that causes guilt’s crease
So that I can fellowship with You with trust-increase.
Thank You for being my mighty God, recognized as the salvation-Source
Who is sovereign, really supreme in every redemption-course
Always assuring me against doubts from evil unbelief-doors
So that I can worship You joyfully midst any challenging force.
Thank You for being my mighty God, esteemed as the Author of compassion
Who is caring, dealing with me along Your endowed virtuous transformation
Always empowering me to prioritize You with utmost devotion
So that I can seek first Your kingdom by Your instruction.
Thank You for being my mighty God, acknowledged as the Truth and Light
Who is brilliant, shining midst transgression-darkened night
Always illumining me through Your Word of holiness-might
So that I can live for You with submission-delight.
July 15, 2022
March 14 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on 1Samuel 1-4
Key Verse –1Samuel 1:17, Then Eli answered and said, Go in peace: and the God of Israel grant thee thy petition that thou hast asked of him.
LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY PETITION GRANTER
Lord God, You are my petition Granter,
answering me when I pray
Thank You that You accept my sacrifice offered according to Your way
As You bring me to Your faith-brightening ray
For me to abide in Your Word everyday.
Lord God, You are my petition Granter,
anointing me to rejoice in Your salvation
Thank You that You lead my soul toward biblical conversion
As You have mercy on me, forgiving my confessed transgression
For me to cease from religious frustration, secured with Your redemption.
Lord God, You are my petition Granter,
advising me through Your wisdom
Thank You that You deal with me with Your truth’s freedom
As You correct me of my disobedience due to vain boredom
For me to walk along Your righteousness, advancing Your kingdom.
Lord God, You are my petition Granter,
admonishing me with Your Word
Thank You that You enlighten me from dimness-discord
As You teach me through Your Scripture-record
For me to perform Your will in Your accord.
Lord God, You are my petition Granter,
alerting me against iniquity
Thank You that You purge me from my sins’ impurity
As You cleanse me by Your sanctification-certainty
For me to glow in virtuous sincerity.
Lord God, You are my petition Granter,
accompanying me in righteousness-battle
Thank You that You fetch me from earthly vanity shuttle
As You direct me to Your covenant and there I serenely settle
For me to fight and win by Your strengthening mettle.
Lord God, You are my petition Granter,
awakening me from fatal backsliding
Thank You that You deliver me from grievous pretending
As You help me with Your encouragement upholding
For me to dwell in Your glory by Your bestowed divine understanding.
March 14, 2023