Loan Poems | Examples

One Loan

I don’t have to remind you. Yesterday is behind you. Temporary is the time these bodies will hold the spirit inside you. Whether you are a millionaire or broke and in debt. Life has a beginning middle and end. It’s those three points that we try to make our friend. Since our timer starts when we exit the womb and enter the earth’s play pen. We must take heed and protect our time, with prayer and faith, before the end of our body’s last sigh.  It may not be as long as an end, wrinkled and gray, as everyone’s timeline is different not everyone gets to meet old age. Each being has their exit date, some sooner than we anticipate. Nonetheless, we all will leave this place in the same state, and not with these loaned bodies not that I have seen to date. Though if you have faith your spirit will be returned to its maker to recreate. We never end completely, we just get repurposed for the next version he sees a need. So,  Temporary is the time in this vessel with a clock that just ticks and tocks until the arms one day just stop.

THE COST OF SUCCESS

I took a loan
to build myself a home
just a little space to breathe
to rest without chasing time.

For a while, I lived with ease
forgot the ticking clock
watched joy bloom like flowers
but never watered the debt behind me.

So I borrowed again
to pay what I once owed
then borrowed more to mend the last
circling like a bird with broken wings.

Yes, I tasted success
but couldn’t chew its fruit.
I had lost all my teeth
trying to do too much with too little.

Reading Material

Another chapter in my life
over much too soon
when there's so much more to live
it's just not opportune
but is Anonymous the author
or would it be myself possibly
writing this tale so true
could it be an autobiography
and yet I won't be put on hold
my one and only guarantee
tho' late won't be overdue
when it's check out time for me
for on turning a page today
I came to realise and to clarify
I'm living a story in a book on loan
from the Great Library in the Sky


Premium Member Response to Loan Request

Have you looked at the purple house down by the bay?
It is the one with green shutters, a shabby gray.
A terrific value, says that realtor, Mrs. Dray.
She would know and she always has her say.

Okay, then, here’s another idea said May.
Why don’t you buy a home over in Bray?
It’s a cheaper town, I hear people say.
It is a heck of a value, I was told yesterday.

You need a loan? I wish there was some way.
But all of my money is maxed out, said Lay.
Wish I did not have to go, but I cannot stay
For some imbecile is now towing my car away

Premium Member if I was a Loan Shark

If I was a loan shark
I would fail
some can ask exorbitant prices
I cannot ask for money at all

Some loan sharks demand thirty-percent interest
I would not even be able to ask for my initial investment.
always been shy about asking for repayment.

I would have to gift everyone their money
and I would go broke
it is my way

Premium Member ON LOAN-

Beloved Spiraling 
thing wrapped around 
the circumstance of wanting, 
on loan 
 Lo! this I arrived
 at my prominence. 
On loan 

Soaringly is I within
 and around.
 A jointing 
attracted to your quiet.
 On Loan I love you
 courageousness.
On loan

You have to be patient
 hint of impatient 
I love you. 
In your storm
 is the calm the Father's 
from the Lord but most
Most of all I love you with in 
In Him because you are
 on loan from the Lord our God

9/8/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr 2024


Premium Member She's On Loan I LOVE HER-

Beloved Spiraling thing wrapped around the circumstance of wanting, on loan  Lo! this I arrived at my prominence. Soaringly is I within and around. A jointing attracted to your quiet. On Loan I love you courageousness. You have to be patient hint of impatient I love you. In your storm is the calm the Father's from the Lord but most of all I love you with in 
In Him because you are on loan from the Lord our God

9/8/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr  2024

The Burden of Dreams

A man with dreams, so bright and grand,
Sought capital from a bank's cold hand.
He borrowed much, with hope so high,
Bet his house, beneath the sky.

The bank’s burden, a weight unseen,
He turned to cheer in a bar’s dim sheen.
With borrowed funds, he drank his fill,
A fleeting joy, but fate’s cruel thrill.

A girl beside, with eyes that gleam,
Whispered promises, a fleeting dream.
To a motel’s room, they swiftly flew,
In the haze of night, where shadows grew.

Awoke alone, with dawn’s cruel light,
The woman gone, without a fight.
The motel's manager, demand so fierce,
For payment due, his woes increase.

In search of her, in clubs and bars,
He faced only silence, under stars.
Heavy labor to pay the cost,
Of dreams now shattered, all but lost.

A year of toil, his health declines,
AIDS/HIV, the cruelest sign.
From a fleeting touch, his life now frayed,
A cautionary tale of debts unpaid.

In shadows deep, where dreams collide,
He pays the price, where hopes reside.
A man who reached for dreams so high,
Found only burdens beneath the sky.

Premium Member FATHER'S BELOVED BEAUTIFUL ON LOAN TO ME-

I soul love you
You spirit mesmerize
My heart eyes

Enjoying the views
Radiant your enter view
Inquisitive your mind hue

Eternalize you're intangible
This first I can't see
This is why first I loved thee

You belong to God
Yet such you're on loan to me

Beautiful Beloved
Hallelujah


8/13/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. ©2024

Premium Member to EACH HIS OWN OUR LIFE IS ON LOAN-

Posture heart beating
 Even though it’s evil, 
God can remold, soften –
and pour into it
To each His own 

I am not my own 
Even my life is on loan

2/28/29
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2024©

Premium Member DEVOTION ON LOAN TO ME-

Beautiful devotion on loan to me
Your His alone
Thinking about you night and day
 it's wrong I think about you always in song 
beautiful devotion on loan to me
I pour myself onto my knee spiritually 
unto you confused 
I just don't know what to do 
beautiful devotion on loan to me
you are His alone I want you to hold
I ask your Father for you to be on loan
beautiful devotion on loan to me


2/23/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2024

Premium Member SHE'S ON LOAN TO US-

She's on loan to us
Cherished in my heart
 She is still a child so dear to us
 I embraced her with my mind,
she's on loan to me to us
So dear to us,
she is beautiful. 
She's awesome she's a blessingness
In God we trust
Blessed daughter of the most high God so she is
On loan to us




1/22/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr 2024

Daylight Savings and Loan

We haven’t gained much interest yet
Save an extra hour of light
Which isn’t bad, but you can bet
It came right out of our nights

Come next statement there’ll be fees
And I’m sure that they’ll be lofty
We’ll pay back that hour, guaranteed
Boy, is daylight savings costly.

Premium Member Loan Unto Me Your Beautiful

Oh! Father God 
This heart of yours 
May it be on loan, loaned to me
For me in your honor and glory
LOAN UNTO ME YOUR BEAUTIFUL
          ~
 the love I see 
You soon let it go, let it go
Father may it come to me
 LOAN UNTO ME YOUR BEAUTIFUL 
          ~
Let it become the essence 
from the very heart and soul
May it come unto me O' Lord
LOAN UNTO ME YOUR BEAUTIFUL 
         ~
Oh! Father God 
This heart of yours 
May it be on loan, loaned to me your beautiful 
May I embrace your heart of heart
For me in your honor and glory
Loan unto me your beautiful 

4/10/23
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr 2023

Premium Member A Loan For Grace-

If I had a dollar for every time;
I’ve sin I be a billionaire;
If I had a dollar taken away by God;
Because of those sins;
I’ll be impoverished;
So I went to the Bank of Jesus;
We’re covered by FDIC?
(Father’s Deliverance in Christ Jesus)

I also got a loan for my new home in heaven;
A home that’ll be my mansion;
Only credit I needed was repentance;
So  I got eternal payment plan;
Now I’m neither rich nor poor;
I am just a once sinner freed sanctified saved by grace;
I have no need for monies, got Jesus promises;

     ~a loan for Grace

Original poem10/23/17 
James Edward Lee Sr©2017
Revised poem 1/5/23
James Edward Lee Sr©2023

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