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The Physics Within Us

Written April 6, 2015; 3:39 PM

The night's at rest
The darkness is idyllic
The last words must be said
I must kiss you goodbye

The space binds the law of attraction
When my heart met yours
The universe feels the buoyant force
When my soul found yours

But the last words must be said now
For I’am leaving soon
While our galaxies apart, 
Don't forget the cohesion, 
of my soul and the moon

Our love is in every star
Connecting our hearts from over 1,926 miles apart
Love, look outside for the moon, 
And the rays will reflect "I love you"

Those last three words are for you 
Recorded, like a reflected sound wave;
Like a doppler effect,
Away but will never fade

Like the gravity that holds an object
Like the laminar flow of the water
Like the sweet magnetic shadow above
Our love will continue to the moon and back

Premium Member Paradise Sought

Have you sought Paradise
     searched high and low

   Traveled the world over
     seen the laminar flow

   Wondered as galaxies glow
     danced a forever calypso

   Infinite the options life bestows
     ~ stalk eternal the no-shows

My Lost Love

Tonight, I found my love
Staying beneath the shadow of my pen
With beautiful blue linings
Laying across her white rectangular face.

The evening stars glowing, at once
Her wood pulp character cuffed my wrist
"Conceive in me, your rumbling heart."
However my ink shivers in cold fears,
My love- I'm filling in your blanks tonight!

Joyous how my dry heart
When blessed with your pours
See my  laminar smiles
Flowing through my dancing pen
After its loneliness of droughts.

I will conceive in you
The untold secret of my heart
After being ransomed with your presence
I never am bored
To paint the unwritten poems in you.

We met again to be a pair
After a long disperse, if not divorce
Albeit we are undivorced
We are equal parts lovely lovers.

Oh, Paper! 
My lost love.


Along Comes a Flood

When the flood came,
It was beyond what I envisaged,
It was deeply overwhelming,
My feet could barely find a place,
I've seen my father wade through floods,
Floods of varying depths,
Some almost swallowed him,
Some flow was turbulent,
He could hardly stand,
Everything he had was almost swept away,
He said,
Floods are an integral part of life,
He said,
Without flood life's story is incomplete,
For it spices life's experiences,
I'd rather wade through a
 laminar flow than a turbulent,
I’d rather raise a bulwark against a turbulent flow,
Make it flow in slow successions,
For the floods on the inside
 in no way can be compared
 to those on the outside,
They’re extreme disasters,
Only the unseen power is potent a bulwark.


February 08, 2022
Pick-A-Title, Vol 28 Poetry Contest – 
Along comes a flood
Edward Ibeh

Bitter Sweet

The lightning sparked up the world
The earth sees it and trembled
The heavens sees it and proclaims his righteousness 
& all the nations call this glory 

The Almighty takes no sides 
As for us life is like the grass, well grown and flourished into wild flower 
Turbulent as the sea and laminar like rivers
Cold in winter blow on it, and melted by the sun for all who lives
Sing every creature with a voice 
The taste ye so is bitter sweet

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