Paradise Sought

Have you sought Paradise
     searched high and low

   Traveled the world over
     seen the laminar flow

   Wondered as galaxies glow
     danced a forever calypso

   Infinite the options life bestows
     ~ stalk eternal the no-shows
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Tor Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 10:21 PM
Spontenious genius thoughts in minutes. Bottle that Gershon and sell it my friend, just remember your friends when you make the millions... Thanks for sharing...
George Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 9:22 PM
Beautiful... ! Love the cheery mood and the ease and spontaneity of words.... dear Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 9:29 PM
You really detected something here, Valsa. I wrote this in about three or four minutes. Just came spilling out. :) gw
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