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Bitter Sweet

The lightning sparked up the world The earth sees it and trembled The heavens sees it and proclaims his righteousness & all the nations call this glory The Almighty takes no sides As for us life is like the grass, well grown and flourished into wild flower Turbulent as the sea and laminar like rivers Cold in winter blow on it, and melted by the sun for all who lives Sing every creature with a voice The taste ye so is bitter sweet

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Date: 4/30/2016 12:01:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Nobahle. :)
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:56:00 PM
Hi Nobahle, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:59:00 AM
Nobahle,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:45:00 AM
Nobahle, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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