Hypercritical Poems | Examples


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A vision of obscurity

If I watch you closely dose that make me insecure.
If you're longing for a lover maybe?
My love is to impure.
Impleaded fantasy's
 I'm sick and you're the cure.
Materialistic lament, 
hypercritical that's for sure.
Under a blanket of infidelity, 
obscene and obscured.
hearts are devoured,
blood thirsty, and I want more.
A monster lives inside of me.
Indecisions and he not sure,
If I'm the cause of all his debility.
I refuse to feed him more.
A loss of all my faculties.
He is obscene and I'm obscured

For Want of a Nail You Don'T Stand a Dog's Chance

Look what you have done to my shoelaces, Fluffy!
Now that's hardly a  nice thing to do.
There are things in this world, from a twig to a bone,
that are more admirably suited to chew.

I don't wish to be hypercritical, Fluffy.
You might easily have done something worse,
but there are things in this world, which,  not done up,
lead one all too soon to a hearse.

Premium Member Spin-Doctors

Doctors take the Hippocratic Oath
  though many are quite loath
to try to save older folk --
  They view the oath as a joke

Politicians also take an oath
  A 'Hypercritical Hypocritical' Vow
To blast anyone who dares ask why
  He should believe their outright lies


Premium Member Coronavirus Blues

Crazy COVID-19 has us all in a tizzy

Too much information making all of us dizzy

Most who’ve been exposed self-quarantine

Running out of toilet paper making us mean

“Social distancing” is the phrase du jour

Scientists scrambling now to find the cure

Hurry!


(Chorus)

COVID-19 apolitical

Proper testing so critical

Slow response hypocritical

Naysayers hypercritical

Division and strife

Don’t take my life

Give it back!


What started out in China as an epidemic

No respecter of nations totally pandemic

All around the world countries shutting down

Even New York City looks like a ghost town

Is there no end to this viral mess

As our way of life’s forced to evanesce?

Scary!


(Chorus)

COVID-19 apolitical

Proper testing so critical

Slow response hypocritical

Naysayers hypercritical

Division and strife

Don’t take my life

Give it back!





March 14, 2020
Coronavirus COVID-19 Cash Prize Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Team PoetrySoup

Premium Member America Is Dying Babylon Is Falling

America is Dying Babylon is Falling 

And the spirit took me up
I lost my breathe
all that's left
Is to slip of the cup
Gods holy name I no more defile
I'll walk steadfast upward getting out of the bile
No more abominations 
I am committed to rebirthing this nation
Ungodly men standing for
Spiritual cremation
I stand inflated
Forms of Godliness debated
Hypercritical
Altars afar off
Off with the heads of those lions
America is dying
Babylon is falling 

12/28/17
written words by James Edward Lee Sr.

It's Matter To Time

What an experience?
So monological your 
days were,
so hypercritical was 
your then,
so hypocritical was 
your pains, were 
when,
very analogical  was 
your sorrow went,
in moan and swone 
your definition was 
sent.

your name and your 
fame had no meaning 
but a shame meant,
you had no happiness 
except the ones you 
usually rent most  
times in torrent.

Amazing speaks of 
your  unfathom 
testimony,
in it time killing made 
your success a snap 
amp. 

YESTERDAY IS A 
STORY WORKOUT THE 
UNWRITTEN HISTORY!


Troubled Times

Were living in troubled times elevated by hypercritical self-righteous minds, 
that use the lords name for condoning a number of sin based crimes
Revelation continues to show these signs

forgotten seems is the word; that we are all of one flock, of one herd to fight 
against and kill one another using our heavenly father’s word; for the lord has 
said is absurd 

the lord gave his life not for people to use his majestic might; in a selfish 
personal crusade bleeding us from the beauty our savior gave, but to ensure that 
from our sins we were all saved, remember the beautiful life he gave and that 
truly through him all are saved  
keep the faith

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