Haloing Poems | Examples


Premium MemberGrandma

I miss
the scent of you
in sweet cinnamon light
and sunlight haloing your face;
lines revealing truths of your life story;
the stories whispered just for me,
the walks we took laughing,
songs endearing,
I miss

Too young
to know the pain
you suppressed deep inside;
a  grandmother's  adulation
doting on your grandchildren, as they play
among your roses and sweet peas.
you guided, blessed us with
fervent passion,
Too young
Categories: haloing, family, meaningful, memory, poems,
Form: Rictameter

Premium MemberHollow

under streetlights haloing amid the black trees,
your shadow follows close to me
on the familiar sidewalk
where we talk of a million nothings

at home in the dark
I lie awake, again, 
whispering to you
my every thought
while the moon is caught
in the hollow space beside me
filled with the eager nearness of your
listening

now all is echo
hollow,  where we once walked
hollow, where we once talked
of the nothings and the everythings

never afraid
never alone
I am given the vaporous rush
of you, lingering

in all that love,
there is no love
like that
which I feel
when the night begins,
in the dim quiet voice
of the hallowed silence
Categories: haloing, deep, feelings, lost love,
Form: Free verse


That Gleaming Rail

i

pot bellied boasting navels
shiny round ball bearing stomachs
haloing out of diesel grime
over alls and silver buttoned railway
insignias

these long waxed pig curled mustache workmen
rotated their lives between shifts of day and night
with metal lunch boxes and coffee tin flasks
strolling main road home or to that gleaming rail
that provided a town’s livelihood

my grandfather worked that rail and my father too

providing me with the means
to take that broke back-heart break scenic route
out of town for good and forgetting

until now

ii

coming back everything changed
and the fat men were now old and wiry

sitting on subsidized railway porches
looking on main road maybe thinking rail

going to that station I found it desolated
and the once shimmering humming rail
all rusted up and silent

I touched it and imagined the once proud spirit of it
corroding away as the blue collar folks on the porch
Categories: haloing, childhood, community, youth,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberHello Sunshine

in this dream
to write beautiful
is to one 
who shines
brightest 
in the soul

standing on 
the ground
no more 
than earth
having two suns
a marriage
of light 
with darkness

a dark spirit 
creeps in shadows
black dancing 
with the light 
blood food
pumping love
paints color
each beat 
drum rolls

happiness forever
is with you
my shadow
bringing in
the light

when i look
upon you darling
as my sun
in your 
warm desire
floating emotions wings 
golden feelings

sparkle around
circle haloing
my sun shining
dearest angel
for you darling 
queen of 
my heart 

i bow 
when i look
into those eyes
shine inner beauty
a stunning soul
that dazzles
the most precious
sanctuary with love
Categories: haloing, angel, romance, sun,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberTopsy Turvy

all behind me now
a memory of blue sky 
a nebulous cloud haloing
darkness before me
mystery awaits the plunge
I peer sightless into dark

roots tendril to me
a grasping sight, intriguing 
my golden curls dangle downward
imbalance betrays 
I teeter on the abyss 
enraptured, sound echoing 

back lit baby fall
seek the navels ending point
heroine of day dreams, topple
leave the precipice
seek the joy of choice and fall
now, peeked, plunge, now called, now fall   


What I would write based on picture 1 for my contest
Categories: haloing, adventure, fear,
Form: Choka


Swimming With Ava~

Sinking pearls of stone, in an obligatory skip
before the plunge
Haloing the horizon in silver riddles
and the earth is still.
No tides to bite the green watered breath.
No new moons eclipsed by the earth's turn to greatness.
And we laugh.
Laugh in salty brine and cosmos air.
Following the stone's tunnels in a dive into the blue.
Capturing smoothness of hair and palms.
Breaking the evening ocean floor in rhythm
as we catapult to surface calm.
Silver tipped fish wings scatter in water rings.
Algae backed hermit crabs skitter on crackling legs.
And we are the epitome of glee tonight with a fist full of ocean
and two thirds of a wish never ending.
Categories: haloing, childhood, daughter, family, happiness,
Form: Free verse
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