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Hollow

under streetlights haloing amid the black trees, your shadow follows close to me on the familiar sidewalk where we talk of a million nothings at home in the dark I lie awake, again, whispering to you my every thought while the moon is caught in the hollow space beside me filled with the eager nearness of your listening now all is echo hollow, where we once walked hollow, where we once talked of the nothings and the everythings never afraid never alone I am given the vaporous rush of you, lingering in all that love, there is no love like that which I feel when the night begins, in the dim quiet voice of the hallowed silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Lovely, Carrie. A moody and haunting poem. A FAVE for me. Most deserved congrats to you.
La France Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Carrie congratulations on your win in the contest. Hope you have a nice day. Constance
Roper Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Carrie. Hugs Eve ~' *
Sands Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Excellent and I love the ending too. Congratulations for your win :)
Macmillan Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 11:43 AM
HI! Glad I stopped by for this read! Love the tone of this piece, especially the "all is echo." Love the imagery. Hope you are well, Carrie. Summer is coming and I know your love the season! Cheers, Cyndi
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Such a beautiful, emotional poem, Carrie. This is so deserving to be at the very top of the podium. My heartfelt congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 5:34 PM
I was right as always. THE BEST! Congrats.
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Congrats on your fine win..Sara
Das Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Beautiful lines like "now all is echo" linger on in memory. So deep and beautiful. Congratulations on your top win.
Pinet Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:32 PM
You manage to capture a sate of being and wrestle it to the paper before is vanishes from your sphere of recognition. Very deep and profound. Emile. #7
Ryerson Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 5:35 PM
How you do that? You NEVER cease to amaze...Congrats dear friend - Your biggest fan: Tim------- PS: Thanks for the Adagio. Gotta admit I never heard it before. I watched and listened three time and it is now on one of my Spotify playlists. Will be sending more to you in return...
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 1:10 PM
So happy to see this poem take top honors Carrie. I loved it. Congratulations!
Relish Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 11:34 PM
Congrats on the win... a brilliant poem..#7. nad
Trichet Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 6:00 PM
I'm speechless! This is quite simply BRILLIANT. Congratulations and a fave for me Carrie. :)
A  Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 11:05 AM
congratulations Carrie. SKAT
A   Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 9:57 AM
A wonderful win Carrie, wishing you a wonderful Mothers Day.... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Lawless Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Wonderfully done Carrie, congrats on the top placement..a 7
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 2:08 AM
Wow Carrie, this is brilliant! Your poem makes one search inside seeking that same silence. It is one of the best I have read for the contest. I hope to see it do really well. 7
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 2:32 PM
the same quote is what I meant
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 2:31 PM
oh wow, Carrie, I think I chose the same one and did a similar poem (not posted yet). I really love how you did yours. One of the BEST!
Poet Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Beautiful!!
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 1:59 AM
So so beautiful Carrie I chose this visual too:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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