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Premium Member The Soul Breathes On

Though a body dies, the soul breathes on
     elegance undeterred, graceful as a swan

   So it was with Sarah, her influence ever-growing
     from the seeds of renewal she'd been sowing

   Urgent now was widower Avraham's* mission
     to find a wife for Yitzchak,* save the Jews from perdition

   Servant Eliezer brought back Rivka* for Yitzchak to marry
     Who brought her to Sarah's tent, he did not tarry

   Rivka's entrance sparked the Sabbath candle's revival
     Once again it burned from Sabbath to Sabbath upon Rivka's arrival

   Sarah set the standard high for Jewish motherhood
     In death as in life, her influence all for the good



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   *Notes: Avraham = Hebraization of Abraham
               Yitzchak  =          "         of Isaac        
               Rivka      =          "         of Rebecca

Premium Member Love That Is Blind

They say in his old age, Isaac was blind
    yet like his father Abraham, unusually kind

  Rebecca, his wife, came from a family evil and cruel
    her brother Laban tried to rob Eliezer of all of his jewels ... 

  Isaac loved his 'hunter-son,' Esau, a chip off Laban's block
    in Esau's brother Jacob, her pure son, Mother Rebecca put her stock -- 

  Foiling Isaac's plan to give his blessing to Esau, one so cruel
    ~ Love that is blind must not be permitted to rule

Samael's Visit

1.09.2008

Samael's* visit

"Please, do not scream",
He gently said
And pressed his hand 
Upon my lips -
And I could sence
The bliss of death
Close by my searching
Fingertips
"Please, do not scream,
It's not your time,
So many more still yearn to die...
I just stopped by 
To spread my wings -
To rest before -
Again 
- I'll fly... 



*  In Jewish lore, Samael is said to be the Angel of Death, the chief ruler of the Fifth Heaven 
and one of the seven regents of the world served by two million angels; he resides in the 
Seventh Heaven. Yalkut I, 110 of the Talmud speaks of Samael as Esau's guardian angel. In 
Sotah 10b, Samael is Edom's guardian angel, and in the Sayings of Rabbi Eliezer, he is 
charged with being the one who tempted Eve, then seduced and impregnated her with Cain.


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