Dim View Poems | Examples


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Root Of All Evil

Isn't it funny how people see money
pieces of metal so very small
there's not a lot you can do
with a penny or two
money itself has really no uses at all
it used to be beads and once it was shells
at least you could wear them and buy or sell
how many have a dim view of money
pieces of paper so wafer-thin
there's not much you can fill with a note or a bill
money itself has very few ways it can thrill
its value is based on the bars of gold
buried in the basement of a bank
and whomever says whatever they're worth
is who we have thank
the root of all evil isn't money it's man
he'll wheel deal and steal to grab all he can
the more money he has the more money he needs
the root of all evil is mankind and his greed

YouTube and Chris Hodge

YouTube and Chis Hodge 

It came as a surprise to me that Chris Hodge 
has been banned on YouTube, a man of knowledge 
worth listening to
He is an honest intellectual; as such, it is hard
not to be critical of the Jewish negative influence 
in the world we inhabit 
Of course, I see on Facebook that I have become
skeptical of, the wiseman Chomsky often appears 
his criticism of Israel doesn't plow a deep furrow 
The Iranian attack on Israel was a warning 
as they couldn't let the Israelis bomb their
embassy go unnoticed.
I fear, since the Jews are always righteous and hard
done by, will retaliate, thinking by pushing the envelope 
further, will get the USA involved
This will not be too difficult, as the Jewish lobby 
practically runs the US's foreign policy, and for us
who have a dim view of Israel and are not optimistic

Agnostic Girl

the story of the girl with conflicted intention. her direction
was known only by a being she was impartial to. it seemed 
her thoughts and feelings had been compressed down into 
shrugs and one-word replies.

I don't think anyone completely knows or understands her, but, I 
like to think she is of two minds in the realm of heartache- with 
a dim view on an uncertain future. and when she lays her head down at night, she falls asleep to the nightmare of floating through death 
with a warm smile.

if I had to guess why she had found no religion, it was because, for 
as long as she could remember, she was the subject of worship. how hard it must be to have faith in an idea that offers nothing in return. all I want is to help her believe in something- once again.


Myopia

The dim view of confinement
 —the weakest look of all

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2018)

Premium Member What Is Wrong With Talking About Other People

Talking about other people can hurt you and them
 Even if you meant no harm
You could be guilty of a serious sin called, “calumny.”

If you believe the negative reports you hear about others without verifying the facts
You will be guilty of rash judgment
 False reports contributed to Jesus’ condemnation and death
Having suffered from them
One can imagine that Jesus takes a dim view of calumny and rash judgment
“Detraction” 
Another serious sin that involves disclosing someone’s faults or misdeeds to listeners who didn’t know about them
Without an objectively good reason
 Such a disclosure almost always impacts a reputation
Rather than risk hurting someone or sinning yourself
Follow grandma’s wise advise “If you don’t have anything nice to say don’t say anything at all.”

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