Debilitating Poems


A Fiddler's Demise



I feel riddled with sickness,
plagued by all infirmity.
Like a fiddle playing a -
score of sombre tunes.

(Kouta form - Japanese quatrain, 7,7,7,5)



03.20.2024
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Categories: debilitating, conflict, courage, dance, music,
Form: Other

Premium MemberDebilitating

In one moment it all changes
In every part of me
It grabs hold of my whole being
This powerful enemy

No warning does it give me
No time to prepare
Within seconds it has seized me
Within seconds it is just there

Intense fear consumes my being
Takes total control
Quickly dragging me down
That horrifying dark hole

Breathing is now difficult
My head heavy and tight
Legs
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Categories: debilitating, anxiety, fear, health,
Form: Rhyme


Hurtful and Debilitating Pain

Results of pain maybe have been hurtful and debilitating,
And to God would best if we really started closer relating;
Stop ignoring;
Start adoring;
We must pray to God soon as possible without hesitating.

With Father Farrell here is what must be addressed,
When I meet you I had been immediately impressed
Are in God's loop;
Start poetry group;
Liked great sermon and the
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Categories: debilitating, allegory, analogy,
Form: Limerick

Deep Death Debilitating Dreams

Deep Death Debilitating Dreams


Oh take my hand this eternal sleep for my sorrows weep bondage of yesterday
Black veils demand my soul to keep as they are thirsty and sweep my core away
Succulent of my being escaping thoughts in tangled knots admits rains of gray
Marauding music dwell the sounds of emptiness confounds the silenced stray
Harbinger of
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Categories: debilitating, death, deep, imagery,
Form: Rhyme

Excruciating and Debilitating

Excruciating and Debilitating

When we have pains that may be excruciating,
Have discovered they can become debilitating;
Much to learn;
This do yearn;
What we will really need is further educating.

Jim Horn
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Categories: debilitating, allegory, analogy,
Form: Limerick


Debilitating

It must have been love – or so I thought

When pain was all your teasing eyes and utterance have caused

This musing heart of mine doesn’t learn a thing

That even the sweetest device can be debilitating

Just like a tooth, from chocolates, end up aching
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Categories: debilitating, pain,
Form: Prose Poetry
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