Debilitating

It must have been love – or so I thought

When pain was all your teasing eyes and utterance have caused

This musing heart of mine doesn’t learn a thing

That even the sweetest device can be debilitating

Just like a tooth, from chocolates, end up aching
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 9:06 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 21, 2016 at 10:46 PM
awesome write, Jet... LINDA
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January 15, 2016 at 8:11 PM
DEPP WRITE..... LOVE IT....SKAT
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