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Deep Death Debilitating Dreams

Deep Death Debilitating Dreams Oh take my hand this eternal sleep for my sorrows weep bondage of yesterday Black veils demand my soul to keep as they are thirsty and sweep my core away Succulent of my being escaping thoughts in tangled knots admits rains of gray Marauding music dwell the sounds of emptiness confounds the silenced stray Harbinger of hell hath no bounds as it punitively pounds wounds wilted weigh ~~~ Melancholy maids in the mist begotten brides with tenacious tides everlasting Within the darkness, we exist amongst great divides as our solitude slides fasting Beautiful baneful banishing lost in forever of the nefarious never of my grasping Resurrecting river of death in your endeavor with banks of clever evil surpassing Pillaging my benignant breath as you sever and take pleasure my abysmal assassin ~~theme...this eternal sleep~~ May.15.2018 A Poem about DEATH Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/2/2018 9:13:00 PM

Clever penning, WW. Congrats on your win.

Constance La France

Date: 5/19/2018 10:49:00 PM

Winged, congratulations on your win in my contest with this great write, well done ~

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/19/2018 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. This is beyond any words I have. As always, a masterful poet!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2018 2:43:00 PM

Many congrats on your win ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/18/2018 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations for your win WW :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2018 12:37:00 PM

- I would place it much higher, W.W. - Congratulations on your 5th place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/16/2018 6:30:00 PM

With a title like that, it's hard not to click on...and wow, what a beautiful poem. I am enamored my friend. Great is your use of alliteration throughout - my favorite moment in this piece is "escaping thoughts in tangled knots admits rains of gray" What an immense line. Keep letting those "rains of gray" flow! It's good for the soul. Poetry is so healing! Always, Laura

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 8:28:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend...very happy you came to visit Laura...love & light...^WW^

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 5/16/2018 3:56:00 PM

Damn! Makes me want to live a little longer! Lol. I love your words...you are a master of them.

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 4:19:00 PM

...and I love your words too lol...

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 4:13:00 PM

Hey poetic Sis...what up girl lol...I hope you live long and prosper lol...love & light...^WW^

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/16/2018 1:26:00 PM

Your intricate words and meanings pack a poetic punch in this outstanding poem, WW! Your alliteration is always spot on and the rhyme scheme is wonderful! This should do well in the contest...kudos to you! :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 4:11:00 PM

Thank you Laura...always nice to have you visit my friend...plus your comments are so poetic in their nature...^WW^

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/16/2018 1:18:00 PM

You always plan out your poetry just so. Its been a pleasure to read your words today. Thanks for sharing, and gl. in the contest

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 4:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pixie...I still love that name...love & light...^WW^

Joseph May

Date: 5/16/2018 7:33:00 AM

The "abysmal assassin" always has the scythe ready...Very nicely penned WW

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 4:06:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph...always nice to have you drop in my friend...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2018 5:24:00 AM

- Wowww ... an awesome write about death, W.W. :) - A winning poem definitely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 4:03:00 PM

Thank you, dear Anne-Lise...love & light...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/16/2018 5:24:00 AM

"Death is a celestial pillow upon which the soul rests for a while dreaming of the life to come!" D.Trifiatis. An inspirational metaphysical poem yours is my friend, WW expressed in a phantasmagorical language! Profound!

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend...'a celestial pillow'...where can I get one of those lol...love & light...^WW^

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/16/2018 3:44:00 AM

Excellent. Very deep write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 3:47:00 AM

Thank you Ravi...always nice to have you visit my friend...love and light...^WW^

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/15/2018 10:44:00 PM

Sounds more like a nightmare than a dream, WW. Although I am not your judge I have a hard time seeing someone with your heart anyplace but heaven. Good luck my friend:) Hoping you are well.

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/16/2018 4:18:00 PM

...I'm coping Danny...it's hard at times...sometimes even harder...but we move on...hope your doing well my old bud...L & L...^WW^

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/15/2018 10:52:00 PM

Although my heart bleeds heaven and seeks heaven...I've only experienced the latter...damn latter, got to get a new one lol...plus I think BW is death magnetic...and so am I lol...love and light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/15/2018 2:22:00 PM

Deep and melancholy..apt for the contest theme.. well written WW. Hope you win BIG.

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/15/2018 10:56:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, Vijay...your comments are greatly appreciated...love and light...^WW^

Charles Messina

Date: 5/15/2018 9:30:00 AM

Deep, Very! This write amused me from start to finish. Love how you ended it. Excellent poetry WW...All the best, my friend!

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/15/2018 10:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charles...love and light my friend...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/15/2018 9:24:00 AM

Wow WW. Well written. Your vocabulary captures me reading your poems. Good luck in the contest :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/15/2018 10:54:00 PM

Thank you, my dear, Heidi...love and light...^WW^