Critical Poems | Examples

I'm Critical

On how I receive statements 
Permanent ink
I went to Japan for college 
In California 
I applied for an internship 
With a Japanese man
Studying science materials 
He is an r&d phD

Now I am an artist
Permanent stains in time affect life
Over the universe
Does not exist a degree
No university
Yet permanent adjustment 
To receive, speech, from another?

Premium Member Living with Critical Thinkers

“we estimate tomorrow’s rainfall to be between two and 88 inches.”
that weatherman’s bound to be right, I told my husband.
“not if it doesn’t rain,” he replied.
“Or if it rains less than two inches,” said my mother.
The perils of watching TV with two critical thinkers.

Premium Member Deep fake'

On second take..Lowe is not that great.' In fact i hear of
Late.' He wants 'bio meat on our plates?' Its beyond the
Pale.' Its all lookng stale, i beleive its time ti bale.' I had
Hoped against hope; for better.' Yet he's another bird of
False feather.' Along with Farage? Although giving and
Asking for it (large!) In support i mean.' What a dejecting
Scene is seen.' Yet to be fair (their was an irk) between
My shoulder blades it lurked.! So i must jettison any writes
Of support.. This type of skull-duggery appeares fully rife.?
( I must choose!) Ashby versus White..I do not consent in
Ink' to write.)


There's no rainbow being Critical

The wind blows the ashes
Sitting in the apparent Sunshine
I thought I was also getting the moonshine
but I hadn't the last laugh
being critical about my sister
trying to gain my fathers favour
even criticising her for Pink Floyd The Wall
the craziness of it all,
I instinctively knew it had to end
Lets be friends
with our own wooden chapel of love
There's no rainbow being Critical

Premium Member Critical mass'

After listening to Rupert Lowe M P, I do agree
All Migration should be curtailed
Its the far the better
Makes much sense
I would advise a trial
For one year to see.!

Premium Member Into the Great Unknown

("Night Sky Serpent", 2013, original pen and ink)

Into the Great Unknown

In this world of constant sorrow
Is there room for you and me
As the walls close in around us
Is there some place left to be

We had homes so full of love once
Before walls came tumbling down
A safe place to raise our families
Then floods came and made that drown

There’s nothing left to say now, and
Really nothing left to do
With a world gone topsy turvy
Being forced on me and you

In a world that’s lost its balance
Wokeness spreads its wings like fire
Lifting hope and dreams all rainbowed
White bones burn upon its pyre

So, we while away the sunset
Waiting for darkness to fall
Then with ol’ Big Dipper turning
Saddle up and leave it all.

What comes next you ask in wonder
Are we left then each alone
No, we’ll always ride together
Up into the great unknown

(7/5/24)


I am

I am         

I am man
I am nature
I am of life and of death,

I am lesser
I am greater
I am of right and of left,

I am mechanical
I am manual 
I am technically a wound up mouse,

I am loud
When I am silent
I am inadvertently at fault with doubt,

I the ego, me the person 
I the genius, me the fool
I am lost when I am chosen
Found
I am
A part from you.

Premium Member Wrongthink-Rightthink

Wrongthink is any think
You might do on your own,
You know, in the vastness
Of your inner space
As cloud trains drift by
Morphing into shapes
As fanciful as you allow.

Rightthink in contrast
Is mind control from without
With nothing fanciful or free allowed,
Just dogma and doctrine
And all the usual stuff
That makes thinking a chore and bore
Leaving us free to accept
Whatever it is they say we need to know.

Rightthink becomes our think
When we have lost touch
With what it means to be free
‘Cause being free
Means not knowing what might come next
As cloud trains pass
And shapes morph
Outside the boundaries of our mind.

(2/19/24)

Cavu

Question your beliefs, assumptions too,
Seeking reliable info that's true blue.
Analyze arguments, break them down,
Look for logic, don't let errors abound.

Different views, we're keen to explore,
Understanding others, we adore.
Evidence matters, it holds the key,
Separating fact from fantasy.

Reflect on thoughts, with an open mind,
Admitting when new truths as we find.
Changing perspectives, a better choice,
Letting reason speak with a clear voice.

Critical thinking, our trusted guide,
Lets us make choices, with wisdom beside.
Inquiring minds, we'll always be,
With critical thinking, we'll truly see.

Though it's just a rhyme, it's meant to convey,
The power of critical thinking every day.
So let's nurture these skills, both young and old,
And watch our minds grow, smart and bold.

Critical Race Theory In Florida

In Florida's land, a theory brews with strife,
"Critical Race," they claim, shaping endless strife,
But in its clasp, rights of black souls confined,
A divisive force, their spirits maligned.

Equality's dream, it seeks to assail,
Yet fosters discord, fuels an endless trail,
Let unity reign, embrace hearts anew,
For fairness and respect in all we pursue.

In harmony, let's forge a brighter way,
Where the rights of every soul have their brightest day.

Premium Member Critical Thinking Opens the Mind

Critical thinking is science at work,
   not hasty indictment with cynical smirk.
Start by collecting data and facts,
   then analyze, synthesize, hypothesize that.
At final judgement to general position,
    evaluate sides for the best supposition.

           Apply reason when testing
           Check facts to the letter
           Challenge your choices 
            From good to much better.

Premium Member Critical Overdose

I felt the pain as the needle went in.

It quickly faded as my journey began.

No one could sense the loss of my senses.

Walking the clouds with feet on the ground.

Time slowed down like babies crawl.

My eyelids carried the full weight of life.

Coursing ever down into the abyss.

The door closed with my final breath.

I am no more!

Premium Member Critical Creations

Critical Creations
David J Walker

All of these eyes
These words
Surfacing for attention

Arriving in Wrhymes of 
twos and threes 
Arriving with bad baggage in
		Sixes and sevens 
but no intentions

The no knowing of certain
And uncertain 
Definitions

It’s the same for 
	Every beginning of
Critical creations

Premium Member Less Critical Acclaim

pretentiously lame
                  altruistically tame
                    boringly aflame 
                  creativity a shame 
         dull tanka ends much the same 



Bite Size Poem no.37 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
HMS 5/7/5/7/7 
22/02/22

Premium Member Block This, Block That

Block this, block that
Black this, black that
I am sick and tired
Of seeing the hatred
And the obvious prejudices
Destroying countries, counties
Districts and municipalities
Where biased authorities
And utterly corrupt and ornery judges
Rule like lions in the wild jungles.

Black this, black that
Block this, block that
Where nobody wins
And everybody loses
From venomous doses
Of ignorance and intolerance
We are all fraternal twins
With different level of shade and nuance
Oh! Nobody is perfect
And I am daringly correct
Like the angel snoring on the deck.

I have never seen a black country
I have never lived in a black county
Unfortunately nonsense prevails
And common sense is assailed
Oh! I will spare you the details
So you won’t faint, fade, fall and fail
As you lurk, search, muse and chase your tail
Black this, black that
Block this, block that.

Copyright © February 2022, Hébert Logerie, All rights reserved
Hébert Logerie is the author of several books of poetry.

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