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Premium Member Through These Lens

When you fall fast asleep 										
and awaken the next day,										
All is the same and 										
nothing is in play.											
But what if every night of sleep 									
was followed by a new beginning, 									
an awakening in a land 											
where all may not be grinning.

This is not a part											 
of our conciseness yet,											
but should be to make sure										 
all get a fair bet.											
If this was actually factual 										
not just a mere thought,										
all would make sure											
not to land somewhere with naught. 

This fine formula											
to assure fairness for all,									
obviously people cannot see									 
beyond their own needs.									
Humankind should care										
about all on our earth, 											
hopefully all can look 										
through these lens 								 			
and find everyone’s worth.

Memories returning

Memories returning 
There comes a time
When will be the revolution of the mind 
Life shall be lifted above what is normal now 
We shall all pass into a new stage 
A new face of time 
And upon this era shall be 
Memories returning 



Memories returning 
There is a natural mystic 
In the air 
There is a natural revolution in energy 
We can’t go back to our old mind
There is a natural turn around 
So catch up with your self 
Not with what life offer anymore 
The new way is about conciseness not materialism

Hymns of Hope

Hymns of Hope 
God is great 
His  creations are divine 
Am a part of it 
The earth is my heaven 
My pains are my hell 
So take away sorrow and agony 
So far from my struggles oh God 
Let life be good for all 
The earth is not a suffering prison ground 
And we are not prisoners of our heritage 
So let the weak be strong 
Let our conciseness be of humanity 
Let it be free from wars oh God 
So we could enjoy heaven 
Here on earth 



Hymns of Hope 
God is everlasting 
Life is eternity 
Our body dies yet our soul lives on 
Our spirit reincarnates 
We might be far from the truth 
But nature never lied 
What a beautiful world we live in 
What an amazing gifts life offers 
Yet we die too young just to survive 
Our own deformities 
So are we getting better or 
Are we lost by our own mind


Days go by

I watch as the days go by,
I can’t help but wonder why,
why was I the one chosen to live in silent pain, as the days by, they leave me alone in my everlasting pain

every day goes faster than the last slowly eradicating my conciseness,
I gradually go insane more and more every day,
I can’t tell the difference between reality and my reverie anymore,
I can’t tell real from wrong so I indulge in my dreams knowing they take me nowhere in my reality.

the days just keep passing by leaving me alone in the darkness of the night,
I stare at the stars dreaming of a life that differs from mine,
it’s a far-off dream that I know will never become trustworthy but I can’t help but dream,
for my reverie is the only thing keeping me sane, in this horrible little reality.

Distractions

Distractions 
What falsely makes you happy 
Could be your destruction 
Cos there is no paradise in hell 
Most hell feels like heaven nowadays 
So trade your ways with cautiousness 
Let your conciseness be alive 
Their is power in thought 
So picture your life by yourself 
Be the author of your ways 
Be the origin of your movement 
The universe will moves with you 
Only when you are ready to be yourself 
So I chant satisfy my soul oh God 
For I have been wailing 
Yes I have been through ups and down 
I refuse to be where the world thinks 
I should be 
Cos my dreams is not their vision 
My prayers is not their answer 
My life is not their ways 
My sermons are pure 
Yet the world is made  of false hope 
Full of diverse 
Distractions.

Premium Member Like So Much Dust

As the years accumulate, like so much dust,
Time makes its presence known:
through wrinkled skin, hair loss,
and an assortment of aching bones.
And you tick off the moments, days, months, and years,
as they accumulate: like so much dust.
Death is tethered to Life:
fundamentally, it's the competition of Life.
Birth gives birth to Death; they're conjoined:
one cannot exist without the other.
Tears spontaneously flow at both times, equally.
Death is not the end, nor the beginning!
A circle has no beginning or end:
and neither do souls.
We are souls: created in the image of God,
eternal, ethereal, and sentient.
Circles within circles, Birth and Death,
dreams within dreams: life death, death life: 
words ingrained in our thoughts:
that explain reality as we perceive it.
Our view, limited by our conciseness,
labels Death as the end of everything;
including ourselves. 
But is that true?


Howl Revisted

I.
Written,
Upon a TV snap,
Exquisite implosion, for
Crippled words,
In land of lords, and
Crimson shepherds.
My I, and 
Hands at play.
Now moments are
Me bitter.
To work then, 
This sharp,
A blade to sunlight,
To cut our fat.

      II.
A Howl,
In New York,
Black and white,
By the day's genius,
A fad long past,
With a wish, return.
When I Deep,
Held naked, In rhythm
His shaky, pitch,
Mantras voice,
Erect,
Brilliantly nasty,
Tentacle opean,
Nods to comrades.

      III.
Need beats,
And crazy men,
Gay jew,Buddha alkee,
Agent Lunch,
For we are no better.
Personally,
Been raised by woman,
In there works,
Need wild Intel.
Abstractly man, 
Baby.

     IV.
Arrogantly, Once,
Proclaimed, I was
The beats reincarnate,
Madman's conciseness,
Now, Have to be.

Speculation

Speculation 

What is the best time to die? 
A beautiful summer’s day 
or in the winter when it rains.
There is an untimely satisfaction 
that mourners - if there is any-
will be wet and die of the flu.
Sitting in the antechamber
discussing where we are going.
My plan is clear its Saragossa
where the dream of life continues,
because our conciseness was
a flash of light in the darkness.

Premium Member Shadow Man Escapes

smashing great performance
flying cats 
exuberance and energy

villain sparkles in a silent mirror
artistic persuasion relishes
gray tone magic

blurry waves of conciseness
partnership precarious as
shadow man escapes

waking not a wink 
snoring deeply
heart beats faster

Premium Member I Surrender My Soul

I am not afraid of dying or what lies beyond Death.

Some may question why I have no fear,
Until they understand that I am a soul;
Released at the time of my death.
Realizing the truth of this, 
Entrenched my spiritual convictions.
Now that I am older, I accept that
Death is an inevitable certainty.  
Everyone dies, but Jesus spoke of a spiritual
Resurrection, once Death releases us from mortal flesh.

My beliefs will guide me past Death's door, where I'll
Yield to God's love and judgment as a soul.
 
Suppose for a moment, there was no God, 
Our existence, our conciseness, would all be for naught.
Until we accept we are souls, we are spiritually blind;
Look beyond the reality of now; look through the eyes of faith.

(Acrostic)


Mar. 09, 2019

Premium Member Full of Hope

Hope is the only thing that keeps me alive
Every day I push myself to strive 
Lord thank you, just these two words describe how I’m grateful
My life is full of obstacles and mistakes that’s what makes it intriguing and beautiful
Life sure has not turned out the way I have wished
That is why I must persist
The conciseness of these words is a gift to you from me
Poetry paints the whole world of what I need to say about what my spirit sees
There is more joy in being content 
Life is a work in progress it is not finished yet 
At times we may not get what we want or what we think we need
Patience is a virtue and it makes us take heed
When I think about that my live appears pretty full
Let life happen if it takes its toll 
I will pray for the hearts that don’t have hope until my voice becomes gravelly, and my bones are weary 
I will then rise in a new reality, and singing praises for all eternity

We must accept finite disappointment, but never lose infinite hope. 
Martin Luther King, Jr.

Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow. The important thing is not to stop questioning. 
Albert Einstein

Anything Is Possible

Where did you come from?
Every ancestor you ever had, had to beget with who they begot.
If any link in the chain begot with someone different.
If someone turned left instead of right.
You’d not be here today.
By being here today you won the infinity lotto.
Or
Some say this place we exist in is just one of many.
They say in fact the number of realities existing in parallel is infinite.
Different links in different chains, infinitely so.
It was, therefore, inevitable you’d appear in at least one.
Or
You, your soul, your spirit, your conciseness is eternal.
Moving though different realms of existence for any number of reasons. Maybe you have much to learn before you arrive.
Maybe immortality gets dull and boring.
You live finite packets of reality infinitely with no connection to keep things fresh and interesting.
Or
Maybe something else is going on.
A finite mind can’t know all the infinite makes possible.
Since you can’t know what’s possible, anything is possible!

A Grain of Stardust

from a photo challenge in A Poet's Haven
Out there amidst the glowing stars
She lived a thousand, thousand times
Holds onto memories from each one
She has loved the same man
In each one as their love 
Has never ended and she searches
For him now out there amidst
The glowing stars is the one
She has loved a million times
And here amidst are humble Terra
There are but a few who
Understand the conciseness of a single
Grain of Stardust let alone all 
The memories contained within each one

The Undertaker

The undertaker
A vile cruel man 
He that rots in the depths a foggy abyss 
Chained by the sinful sorrowful
He only slightly emitted into a netherworld
His makings of the undone
His scythe piercing the heart
Of the two people 
I loved most in this world
Sadly I wasn’t invited in this ordeal
I’m sure they were great for the feast
Though for surely not my conciseness was fed 
Either Mentally or Physically
Most definitely he will rebuke the taste
For they are too untainted 
For a vile man such as he
For he is always starving
For the purely unclean

Past, Present, Future

Past haunts the present,
 Past lives in the future.
 It crosses paths with what’s to come,
 Shows its face when you don’t expect.
 Casts its shadow when you think you escaped,
 mistakes felt, feelings lived through.
 Choices uncovered comes back to you,
 No point to run or hide from what’s left,
 It will be beside the secrets you kept.
 It will follow filling the hollow
 spaces and places that mind hides and erases.
 Heart beating rhythm, time won’t forgive them,
 Mistakes, choices and old lost voices,
 Conciseness burning and life keeps on turning

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