Blacked Poems

Premium Membertoxicity alert

there had been no warning on the flask
no caveat for self-inflicted poisoning 
just a devilish delusion of filling the void

it was not the corkscrew that messed it up
but bottle to mouth resuscitation blacked out
all emptiness until surrender meant hope
Categories: blacked, addiction,
Form: Free verse

7 inches

Six feet high with a noose around my neck.
7 inches down doesn’t seem like a threat. 
Manic episodes got me laying in bed. 
Blacked out room to pretend I’m dead. 
Impulses done by the thoughts in my head.
Anger raging on as I start to bend.
All these emotions made ten fold. 
By the white little powder that will make me cold.
I don’t take drugs, the drugs take me.
To places in this world you’ll never see. 
Can’t come down from the binge I’m in. 
I won’t make it three hours before it wins. 
Forget finding me when traumas to great. 
Who am I to break down the barrier my minds put in place. 
A .22 for a single bill. 
I promise I’ll mention you in my will.
Why did I make it longer than you. 
When more people cared about what you do. 
Money going out before it comes in. 
Getting in debt just fly again. 
Staying up late, not sleeping at all. 
Don’t want to burden you with the call. 
Six hours now or seven minutes then. 
I’m leaving this world it’s just a matter of when.
Categories: blacked, abuse, addiction, anxiety, death,
Form: Rhyme


The Midnight Hunters from The Black and Blue Lodge

(A sad lone voice whispers)

My old love 
Loved shaking her crow blacked hair 

As old daydreams tumbled around her
Like autumn leaves in the air 

On any given day or night 

Dreams of divinity
Of God and light 

Like the first thing you see when you close your eyes at night

Temporal spaces filled with familiar faces
Crooning like nameless mockingbirds
Under a watchful moon

Dreams of us as a pair
Regale my eyes with surreal memories of us

Everywhere I now look since 
God closed that Crimson Book 

Us entwined at sea 
Surrounded by floating red roses as seagulls watched

Laughing like playful innocent school children
Free from all fears and good behaviour

But now the
Ancient Ones have called at midnight to remind me

“Those who once laid entwined in their sea as their seagulls watched 

Will soon get a visit 

From The Midnight Hunters from The Black and Blue Lodge”

(C)
Copyright John Duffy
Categories: blacked, grief,
Form: Rhyme

Soul Intact

Sticks and stones may break my bones but words can't hurt me so let's draw a truce lock arms and go dancing under this year's 1st full moon. Giving all praise to my creator while you give praise to his creation.Yes! Once I was you drenched in black mind loss and blue. So blue Lucifer said it's time to meet you. Day to night, Night to day oh my gosh! Morning dew seeped through this smoke-filled blacked out room,eyes aflame feeling gloom so much mind 
dragging affliction. Ouch! No jerking,
Soul intact,
My love for God won't be doomed
Categories: blacked, allusion, america, angel, anger,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberLadies Nite At Clyde's Bar

News flash
Huge bash

Big fight
Last night

Clyde's Bar
Bizarre

War zone
Chairs thrown

Snouts poked
Gals choked

Eyes blacked
Ribs cracked

Hair snatched
Backs scratched

Throats slashed
Heads bashed

Tossed stools
Blood pools

Ears chewed
Tossed food

Knees kicked
Knives pricked

Low blows
Stomped toes

Dames sprawled
Cops called

Clyde's closed
Foreclosed
Categories: blacked, conflict, humorous,
Form: Footle


Black Out Poetry

Words hidden in the dark some night,
As flame's whisper on a Moon lit wall,
Faint echoes of a lightning bolt,
Lost in ink, trapped on the page.

Blacked-out lines reveal the soul,
Truth emerges, stark yet bold,
On the tounge, new words take hold,
Meaning found in what’s not there.

Through the void, stories bloom,
From the edge, a voice, square room.
Categories: blacked, 12th grade,
Form: Rhyme

Paper Man, from THE WOMAN WHO COULD EAT WOOD

Paper Man


After work as a to-do list in a jewellery store 
Paper Man got drunk on wine a lot,
so a lot of what was said to him 
he forgot.

His paper wife kicked him out of their bedroom.
One night he came back so drunk he blacked out 
and fed himself into a shredder in the spare room.
Categories: blacked, humor,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberThe Tropical Island

Having partied all night on a yacht
and then fallen to sleep on a cot,
how strange it all was
when I woke because
on the cot on the yacht I was not!

On a tropical island was I,
looking up at a beautiful sky.
Asleep by my side
I saw the tour guide -
a charming and gorgeous young guy.

I’d blacked out when a storm sunk our boat,
but somehow with this man I did float
to this nice tiny spot,
Like the guy, it was hot
and from civilization – remote.

As it turns out, the man knew all ways
to survive, and we’d been there for days.
Well, days became years,
but I’ve got no fears.
For the man-mate I’m with never strays!
Categories: blacked, humorous,
Form: Limerick

A Barcode

I didn't notice that the lines had appeared. 
Tendrils of color stretching across my pale skin. 
The blacked lines from a tight grip,
Handprints made a map of the lines I crossed. 
I started to think they appeared because I didn't hold my tounge, or maybe because I didn't speak up enough. 
Because I'd done the wrong thing, or I hadn't done something at all. 
I looked at the black and blue handprints spread across my white skin, 
And in the lines I started to see a barcode. A price tag.
As if this hurt determines the price of my faults, or what I am worth to the world. 
It took a long time to understand that I was only seeing what I was worth to me. 
I didn't notice that I was becoming more aware. 
And you didn't notice I'd had enough. 
My asking to be treated well came as a shock to you, 
And I'm only shocked it took me so long.
Categories: blacked, abuse, anger, care, first
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberPolaroid Teardrops

Fingertips touch the polaroid photo 
my smile is transformed to teardrops;
Locked in a box for so long 
I’d almost forgotten that moment;

It wears a crease but not badly damaged 
maybe now I can bear the scar;
Traveling instantly back
will finally not give me whiplash;

Frolicking in the bygone reflections
dappled with beams of history; 
Perception stood suspended 
out of touch with time moving forward;

Emotions transform into a slideshow 
each image a sliver of me;
Erased permanent branding,
an edge blacked out with magic marker;

Encased indefinitely in a frame 
it’s okay to place on the shelf;
Lighting up at life’s snapshot, 
I let the past revisit my mind.
Categories: blacked, emotions, feelings, inspirational, introspection,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberIM SORRY

IM sorry is what you said when you made me cry.

IM SORRY is what you said when you hit me and
blacked my eye.

IM SORRY is what you said when you punched
me in the head.

IM SORRY is what you said when you saw me in
that hospital bed.

IM SORRY is what you said when you realised
my pain.

IM SORRY is what you said when you hit me once
AGAIN.

IM SORRY IS WHAT YOU SAID WHEN YOU DROVE ME
OVER THE TOP.

BUT IM NOT SORRY I LEFT YOU TO MAKE THE ABUSE STOP....
Categories: blacked, anger,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member- Dead End Street -

                                      Admit you lost track
                                   under a blue fever moon
                                      Buckle your seat belt
                                           The hysterical,
                                        the shrinking curse
                                       Chew dog food, gum
                                      it sure smells delicious
                                         Constant tinnitus

                                       Burn aromatic herbs
                                       Dangerous situations
                                   with sparks from the mains
                               A threat to the electricity pylons
                                        they are blacked out
                                      The street was familiar
                                       as one's own pocket
                                   Mysterious disappearances
                                      Even not Stephen King
                               understood what had happened
Categories: blacked, death, horror, mystery,
Form: Free verse

Wafflestomper

She donned her wafflestomper shoes
and strode towards the distant hills:
a walk was sure to cure the blues,
to dry her tears, forget the bills.
She spent the day enjoying life
and realised she would survive -
although no longer called his wife,
no need for death; she'd stay alive.
Returning home, her head held high,
she saw her ex and blacked his eye.
Categories: blacked, divorce,
Form: Rhyme

Wails from Gehenna

I let myself fall into guilt, time stands still,
      you say your heavy words while I try to grasp them,
      I’m tormented by the sentences they utter speaking through my behalf 
      as I try to mutter

      You’ve led me in this dark abyss the void fully consumed me feelings all   
      blacked out,
      tell me why I cannot find the light, for your spirits are weakening me

      I’m trapped in this darkness, the demons that come from your mouth tear 
      me thoroughly,
      my yells are hollow, unable to be heard, the words grab my fragile arm 
      pulling me to my fate

      This lamentation is immortal in this realm,
      the voices call to me from the distant hallways,
      I gaze into the mirror in my hands, gleaming with rusted metal
      revealing a distorted image of me transparent and translucent

      My appearance cannot be seen as my tears fall to the surface,
      they break the glass within every drop,
      I then vanish as the vestiges of my heart meet its time,
      my light is cast away, the stygian has met me
      filling my heart with the darkness of mine.
Categories: blacked, anger, corruption, imagery, lost
Form: Ballad

Early Bird

My arrival beat the sunrise;
it was still dark at the small jetty.
I dried the wet skiff, mind alert
to the soon to be lifting light.

Nearby,
an unseen water bird
clattered into the darkness.
Startled, I looked up,
there above me
a hole in that lightless sky
a circle of glowing orange
surrounded by the dim dawn.

‘I am blessed’ I thought.

As I gazed, the heavens opened,
a deluge of blacked-out rain smashed down
upon the sleeping land.

I got under the down-turned boat
and lay down
as the Ohio river faded away
replaced by a raging waterfall,
one that obliterated
that same sunrise
that had yet to show up -

until at last
that early bird I had heard
flew back to my ears and minds-eye.

Emerging from my makeshift shelter
I watched a rare black swan
settle and preen, drying its feathers,
as if it was perfectly natural
for a river to drown itself
under a small, up-side-down  skiff.
Categories: blacked, poetry,
Form: Free verse

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