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Ladies Nite At Clyde's Bar

News flash
Huge bash

Big fight
Last night

Clyde's Bar
Bizarre

War zone
Chairs thrown

Snouts poked
Gals choked

Eyes blacked
Ribs cracked

Hair snatched
Backs scratched

Throats slashed
Heads bashed

Tossed stools
Blood pools

Ears chewed
Tossed food

Knees kicked
Knives pricked

Low blows
Stomped toes

Dames sprawled
Cops called

Clyde's closed
Foreclosed

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Joe Maverick Date: 2/1/2025 12:37:00 AM To border.!! Better.. dis-order.) Return flights Day night' Costs less My guess? Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/5/2024 12:26:00 PM BACK! Isigned this tesreday, before you were crowned Poem Queen f the Day. I thought it ewas hreat, being from Chicago, which I think is Bar City. Womeem were a rarityin a bar. Except on weekends which we dalled Amateur Night. LOL..congrats twice. Pangie xx Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 1:36:00 PM Thank you, Pangie! So thoughtful of you to drop by and comment. I cherish your support - BoB

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/5/2024 11:38:00 AM Hey, Hey. Together we two equal one Babe Ruth: I call 'em, and you knock it out of the park! Congratulations, on POTD, Bob! Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 1:35:00 PM Well said, Sir! Thanks, Gershon - BoB

Arlo Parker Date: 9/5/2024 9:07:00 AM Simply awesome, entertaining, clever!!! Footle bouquet. Oh, and POTD for RH. :o)) Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 9:54:00 AM Thank you, Arlo! I cherish your comments and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/5/2024 8:17:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your fun Footle writes. Have a fun day writing away................ Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 9:55:00 AM Thank you Paula. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Best to you always - Bob

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/5/2024 7:39:00 AM LOL Robert. Sounds like Ladies Nite was quite the fight site! Reminds me of the recent (August 26) anniversary of the Hell's Belles (not the band) brawl. I needed that little giggle this morning. Congratulations on POTD with this cute footle! :) Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:55:00 AM Thank you, Linda, for your kind and generous comments - if it gave you a giggle, I think I've done my job as a writer - best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Joseph May Date: 9/5/2024 6:59:00 AM A boozy night with fights, Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:32:00 AM Thanks, Joe! Sounds like a hot time in the old town that night! Best on you - Bob

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 9/5/2024 6:04:00 AM WOW! What an exciting group of Footles! You have created such a hair-raising story in few fantastic rhyming words! Talented story-teller! Congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:33:00 AM Thank you, Mal. A rousing time indeed! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

John Lawless Date: 9/5/2024 4:55:00 AM The never should have put up the LADIES INVITED signs.....great group of Footles Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:56:00 AM Thank you, John. Old Clyde made a big mistake by hosting a ladies only affair!!! Best on you, friend - Bob

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 9/5/2024 4:54:00 AM Hello Robert, What a great flowing poem that tells an entire story all the way to the end. Wonderful Read and Congratulations on POTD. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:57:00 AM Thank you so much, Daniel. I really cherish your comments and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Karen Jones Date: 9/5/2024 3:19:00 AM Wow closed and foreclosed! What an exciting potd! Congratulations! Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:53:00 AM Yep, the cops put dear old Clyde out of business, for sure! Glad you enjoyed, Karen and best on you - Bob

Tania Kitchin Date: 9/5/2024 3:09:00 AM Bob, a fun and creative collection, congratulations on POTD. Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:52:00 AM Glad you enjoyed, Tania. Thanks, as always, for your continued support - Bob H

Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/5/2024 2:53:00 AM These words can be read top to bottom or bottom to top. A great string of Footles. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:51:00 AM Beryl: Thank you for your kind and supportive comments - much appreciated. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/5/2024 2:48:00 AM Congratulations on POTD. I enjoy your footle. Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:49:00 AM Thank you, Hilda, for your kind support and comments - glad you enjoyed. Best to you Bob

Frank Mashina Date: 9/5/2024 1:21:00 AM Congratulations for your POTD honor. Keep it up my friend Frank Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:48:00 AM Frank thank you for your kind comments. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/5/2024 12:31:00 AM Clyde returns lol, congratulations to you Bob on today's POTD honour. Hope you're keeping well. Tom Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:46:00 AM Thank you, Tom for the congrats and your continued support. Hope all is well at your house - Bob

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/4/2024 12:07:00 AM you got me all revved up , bob... this superb footle with a story is amazing!... the bar says cheers Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/4/2024 9:22:00 AM Thank you, Nette, for your kind comments re my nonsense. I like to write poetry that tells a story. Footles are kinda hard to compose to stay within the rules but I find them fun to work up. Best to you - Bob H

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/3/2024 8:04:00 PM Hey, Hey, Bob! This is going all the way... to POTD. Betcha I'm right. We'll see in a day... What a winner of a footle. FAVE-time for me. Thanks, Gershon Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/5/2024 7:45:00 AM Zingo, Gershon! You called this one for me! POTD, indeed! Best on you - Bob H Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/4/2024 9:23:00 AM Thanks kindly, Sir, for your encouraging comments. I'm honored you consider it a fave! Best always - Bob H

Ilene Bauer Date: 9/3/2024 5:16:00 PM ha! you've told a great story with these entertaining footles, bob! i enjoyed... Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/3/2024 5:20:00 PM Thank you, Ilene! Clyde's place sounds like a nuisance that, as Darlene expressed below, should be foreclose forever! Best to you - Bob

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/3/2024 4:20:00 PM Robert! Congratulations on this write, it showcases your outstanging verstility., You paint a picture with words. Awesome. Ni images necessary with a poem done so very well. You crack me up! Pangie *…* Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/3/2024 5:14:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind words, Pangie! Oh, I forgot to add that this was "girls night out!"

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/3/2024 3:31:00 PM Hello Robert Hinshaw, A good reason for a bar to be closed. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/4/2024 10:29:00 AM Hello Robert, It does sound like it could be a girls night out. I love your nonsense. -enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 9/3/2024 5:18:00 PM Thank you, Darlene. Sounds like this could have been "girls nite out - ha! Thanks as always for your continued support of my nonsense - Bob H