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Ladies Nite At Clyde's Bar

News flash Huge bash Big fight Last night Clyde's Bar Bizarre War zone Chairs thrown Snouts poked Gals choked Eyes blacked Ribs cracked Hair snatched Backs scratched Throats slashed Heads bashed Tossed stools Blood pools Ears chewed Tossed food Knees kicked Knives pricked Low blows Stomped toes Dames sprawled Cops called Clyde's closed Foreclosed

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Joe Maverick

Date: 2/1/2025 12:37:00 AM

To border.!! Better.. dis-order.) Return flights Day night' Costs less My guess?

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/5/2024 12:26:00 PM

BACK! Isigned this tesreday, before you were crowned Poem Queen f the Day. I thought it ewas hreat, being from Chicago, which I think is Bar City. Womeem were a rarityin a bar. Except on weekends which we dalled Amateur Night. LOL..congrats twice. Pangie xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Pangie! So thoughtful of you to drop by and comment. I cherish your support - BoB

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/5/2024 11:38:00 AM

Hey, Hey. Together we two equal one Babe Ruth: I call 'em, and you knock it out of the park! Congratulations, on POTD, Bob!

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 1:35:00 PM

Well said, Sir! Thanks, Gershon - BoB

Arlo Parker

Date: 9/5/2024 9:07:00 AM

Simply awesome, entertaining, clever!!! Footle bouquet. Oh, and POTD for RH. :o))

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 9:54:00 AM

Thank you, Arlo! I cherish your comments and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2024 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your fun Footle writes. Have a fun day writing away................

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 9:55:00 AM

Thank you Paula. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Best to you always - Bob

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2024 7:39:00 AM

LOL Robert. Sounds like Ladies Nite was quite the fight site! Reminds me of the recent (August 26) anniversary of the Hell's Belles (not the band) brawl. I needed that little giggle this morning. Congratulations on POTD with this cute footle! :)

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:55:00 AM

Thank you, Linda, for your kind and generous comments - if it gave you a giggle, I think I've done my job as a writer - best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Joseph May

Date: 9/5/2024 6:59:00 AM

A boozy night with fights, Congrats on POTD

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:32:00 AM

Thanks, Joe! Sounds like a hot time in the old town that night! Best on you - Bob

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/5/2024 6:04:00 AM

WOW! What an exciting group of Footles! You have created such a hair-raising story in few fantastic rhyming words! Talented story-teller! Congratulations on POTD!

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:33:00 AM

Thank you, Mal. A rousing time indeed! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

John Lawless

Date: 9/5/2024 4:55:00 AM

The never should have put up the LADIES INVITED signs.....great group of Footles

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:56:00 AM

Thank you, John. Old Clyde made a big mistake by hosting a ladies only affair!!! Best on you, friend - Bob

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/5/2024 4:54:00 AM

Hello Robert, What a great flowing poem that tells an entire story all the way to the end. Wonderful Read and Congratulations on POTD. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:57:00 AM

Thank you so much, Daniel. I really cherish your comments and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Karen Jones

Date: 9/5/2024 3:19:00 AM

Wow closed and foreclosed! What an exciting potd! Congratulations!

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:53:00 AM

Yep, the cops put dear old Clyde out of business, for sure! Glad you enjoyed, Karen and best on you - Bob

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/5/2024 3:09:00 AM

Bob, a fun and creative collection, congratulations on POTD.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:52:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Tania. Thanks, as always, for your continued support - Bob H

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/5/2024 2:53:00 AM

These words can be read top to bottom or bottom to top. A great string of Footles. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:51:00 AM

Beryl: Thank you for your kind and supportive comments - much appreciated. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/5/2024 2:48:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD. I enjoy your footle.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:49:00 AM

Thank you, Hilda, for your kind support and comments - glad you enjoyed. Best to you Bob

Frank Mashina

Date: 9/5/2024 1:21:00 AM

Congratulations for your POTD honor. Keep it up my friend Frank

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:48:00 AM

Frank thank you for your kind comments. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/5/2024 12:31:00 AM

Clyde returns lol, congratulations to you Bob on today's POTD honour. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:46:00 AM

Thank you, Tom for the congrats and your continued support. Hope all is well at your house - Bob

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2024 12:07:00 AM

you got me all revved up , bob... this superb footle with a story is amazing!... the bar says cheers

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/4/2024 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, Nette, for your kind comments re my nonsense. I like to write poetry that tells a story. Footles are kinda hard to compose to stay within the rules but I find them fun to work up. Best to you - Bob H

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/3/2024 8:04:00 PM

Hey, Hey, Bob! This is going all the way... to POTD. Betcha I'm right. We'll see in a day... What a winner of a footle. FAVE-time for me. Thanks, Gershon

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 7:45:00 AM

Zingo, Gershon! You called this one for me! POTD, indeed! Best on you - Bob H

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/4/2024 9:23:00 AM

Thanks kindly, Sir, for your encouraging comments. I'm honored you consider it a fave! Best always - Bob H

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/3/2024 5:16:00 PM

ha! you've told a great story with these entertaining footles, bob! i enjoyed...

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/3/2024 5:20:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene! Clyde's place sounds like a nuisance that, as Darlene expressed below, should be foreclose forever! Best to you - Bob

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/3/2024 4:20:00 PM

Robert! Congratulations on this write, it showcases your outstanging verstility., You paint a picture with words. Awesome. Ni images necessary with a poem done so very well. You crack me up! Pangie *…*

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/3/2024 5:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Pangie! Oh, I forgot to add that this was "girls night out!"

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/3/2024 3:31:00 PM

Hello Robert Hinshaw, A good reason for a bar to be closed. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/4/2024 10:29:00 AM

Hello Robert, It does sound like it could be a girls night out. I love your nonsense. -enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/3/2024 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Sounds like this could have been "girls nite out - ha! Thanks as always for your continued support of my nonsense - Bob H