Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Footle

Ladies Nite At Clyde's Bar

News flash
Huge bash

Big fight
Last night

Clyde's Bar
Bizarre

War zone
Chairs thrown

Snouts poked
Gals choked

Eyes blacked
Ribs cracked

Hair snatched
Backs scratched

Throats slashed
Heads bashed

Tossed stools
Blood pools

Ears chewed
Tossed food

Knees kicked
Knives pricked

Low blows
Stomped toes

Dames sprawled
Cops called

Clyde's closed
Foreclosed

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Joe Maverick February 1, 2025 at 12:37 AM To border.!! Better.. dis-order.) Return flights Day night' Costs less My guess?

Panagiota Romios September 5, 2024 at 12:26 PM BACK! Isigned this tesreday, before you were crowned Poem Queen f the Day. I thought it ewas hreat, being from Chicago, which I think is Bar City. Womeem were a rarityin a bar. Except on weekends which we dalled Amateur Night. LOL..congrats twice. Pangie xx Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 1:36 PM Thank you, Pangie! So thoughtful of you to drop by and comment. I cherish your support - BoB

Gershon Wolf September 5, 2024 at 11:38 AM Hey, Hey. Together we two equal one Babe Ruth: I call 'em, and you knock it out of the park! Congratulations, on POTD, Bob! Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 1:35 PM Well said, Sir! Thanks, Gershon - BoB

Arlo Parker September 5, 2024 at 9:07 AM Simply awesome, entertaining, clever!!! Footle bouquet. Oh, and POTD for RH. :o)) Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 9:54 AM Thank you, Arlo! I cherish your comments and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Paula Goldsmith September 5, 2024 at 8:17 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your fun Footle writes. Have a fun day writing away................ Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 9:55 AM Thank you Paula. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Best to you always - Bob

Linda Alice Fowler September 5, 2024 at 7:39 AM LOL Robert. Sounds like Ladies Nite was quite the fight site! Reminds me of the recent (August 26) anniversary of the Hell's Belles (not the band) brawl. I needed that little giggle this morning. Congratulations on POTD with this cute footle! :) Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:55 AM Thank you, Linda, for your kind and generous comments - if it gave you a giggle, I think I've done my job as a writer - best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Joseph May September 5, 2024 at 6:59 AM A boozy night with fights, Congrats on POTD Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:32 AM Thanks, Joe! Sounds like a hot time in the old town that night! Best on you - Bob

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 5, 2024 at 6:04 AM WOW! What an exciting group of Footles! You have created such a hair-raising story in few fantastic rhyming words! Talented story-teller! Congratulations on POTD! Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:33 AM Thank you, Mal. A rousing time indeed! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

John Lawless September 5, 2024 at 4:55 AM The never should have put up the LADIES INVITED signs.....great group of Footles Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:56 AM Thank you, John. Old Clyde made a big mistake by hosting a ladies only affair!!! Best on you, friend - Bob

Daniel Henry Rodgers September 5, 2024 at 4:54 AM Hello Robert, What a great flowing poem that tells an entire story all the way to the end. Wonderful Read and Congratulations on POTD. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:57 AM Thank you so much, Daniel. I really cherish your comments and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Karen Jones September 5, 2024 at 3:19 AM Wow closed and foreclosed! What an exciting potd! Congratulations! Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:53 AM Yep, the cops put dear old Clyde out of business, for sure! Glad you enjoyed, Karen and best on you - Bob

Tania Kitchin September 5, 2024 at 3:09 AM Bob, a fun and creative collection, congratulations on POTD. Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:52 AM Glad you enjoyed, Tania. Thanks, as always, for your continued support - Bob H

Beryl Edmonds September 5, 2024 at 2:53 AM These words can be read top to bottom or bottom to top. A great string of Footles. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:51 AM Beryl: Thank you for your kind and supportive comments - much appreciated. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Hilda Greenhough September 5, 2024 at 2:48 AM Congratulations on POTD. I enjoy your footle. Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:49 AM Thank you, Hilda, for your kind support and comments - glad you enjoyed. Best to you Bob

Frank Mashina September 5, 2024 at 1:21 AM Congratulations for your POTD honor. Keep it up my friend Frank Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:48 AM Frank thank you for your kind comments. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Tom Cunningham September 5, 2024 at 12:31 AM Clyde returns lol, congratulations to you Bob on today's POTD honour. Hope you're keeping well. Tom Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:46 AM Thank you, Tom for the congrats and your continued support. Hope all is well at your house - Bob

Nette Onclaud September 4, 2024 at 12:07 AM you got me all revved up , bob... this superb footle with a story is amazing!... the bar says cheers Robert L. Hinshaw September 4, 2024 at 9:22 AM Thank you, Nette, for your kind comments re my nonsense. I like to write poetry that tells a story. Footles are kinda hard to compose to stay within the rules but I find them fun to work up. Best to you - Bob H

Gershon Wolf September 3, 2024 at 8:04 PM Hey, Hey, Bob! This is going all the way... to POTD. Betcha I'm right. We'll see in a day... What a winner of a footle. FAVE-time for me. Thanks, Gershon Robert L. Hinshaw September 5, 2024 at 7:45 AM Zingo, Gershon! You called this one for me! POTD, indeed! Best on you - Bob H Robert L. Hinshaw September 4, 2024 at 9:23 AM Thanks kindly, Sir, for your encouraging comments. I'm honored you consider it a fave! Best always - Bob H

Ilene Bauer September 3, 2024 at 5:16 PM ha! you've told a great story with these entertaining footles, bob! i enjoyed... Robert L. Hinshaw September 3, 2024 at 5:20 PM Thank you, Ilene! Clyde's place sounds like a nuisance that, as Darlene expressed below, should be foreclose forever! Best to you - Bob

Panagiota Romios September 3, 2024 at 4:20 PM Robert! Congratulations on this write, it showcases your outstanging verstility., You paint a picture with words. Awesome. Ni images necessary with a poem done so very well. You crack me up! Pangie *…* Robert L. Hinshaw September 3, 2024 at 5:14 PM Thank you so much for your kind words, Pangie! Oh, I forgot to add that this was "girls night out!"

Darlene De Beaulieu September 3, 2024 at 3:31 PM Hello Robert Hinshaw, A good reason for a bar to be closed. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu September 4, 2024 at 10:29 AM Hello Robert, It does sound like it could be a girls night out. I love your nonsense. -enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Robert L. Hinshaw September 3, 2024 at 5:18 PM Thank you, Darlene. Sounds like this could have been "girls nite out - ha! Thanks as always for your continued support of my nonsense - Bob H