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Premium Member Chasing Rainbows

Chasing Rainbows

I've never believed in chasing rainbows.
How would I find the end of one of those?
Where do they begin? Where do they close?
I never have learned where one quickly goes.

It's as elusive as a night without sleeping,
Or wasted tears over lost love's weeping.
A love no longer held in safe keeping,
Caused a pain in me that was deepening.

I couldn't climb the mountain, though I tried.
I had to reach the summit before I died.
After my teardrops had all been dried
I found the courage to say goodbye.

Climbing my way up was no easy task.
I knew the answers to questions unasked.
No guiding light in which I could bask.
I couldn't live my life while wearing a mask.

I'd been living in subtle shades of gray.
Love faded like rainbows that never stay.
I stumbled and fell in so many ways.
I was lost within an inescapable maze.

Life is not a game played without care.
A cloak to discard when too warm to wear.
It shouldn't be filled with grief and despair,
And never treated as a burden to bear.

I had many doubts as I was leaving,
But I had to end my sorrow and grieving.
And through it all I went on believing,
It was only himself he'd been deceiving.

I'm no longer haunted by the falling rain.
I freed my heart by unfastening the chains.
I frayed the ropes that caused me pain.
But terrible memories will forever remain.

I shouldn't hold on to them. I shouldn't cling,
Nor penned these words to give them wings.
But perhaps it's good to remember the sting
Of chasing rainbows and illusions of things.

            ~ April 2015 ~
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.

Music In the Rain

I walked by the old cafe on Rue De Sienne and heard an angel playing harp 
a cherub an ethereal mome bewitching me and playing softly with my heart 
she wore a halo made of gold, a soul that laddered up beyond the tarp  
and as the fluent clouds rain-teared upon her alabaster tunic.... Art !  

Each star a studded light inside her angel eyes of blue.  Each  note   
commemorating, unfastening, abducting, a copious symphony of one 
The buckling breeze became her muse I, a kite released in far remote      
a Mystic with no malice in sight stringing up the moon and jealous sun.  

June 20, 2018

Premium Member Transcendence

He, a seeker after Truth, set out
on an audacious journey
to see his old master

with a handful of blooms	
he paused before the open door.

from deep meditation 
the squatted figure, looked up. 
in a trance, he saw the silhouette of a man. 
on gazing intent, emerged distinct
his former disciple, left long ago

seeing his hands laden with flowers,
the master smiled a recognizing smile.
in close surveillance, the penetrating eyes
gauged him through and through.

the master’s pursed lips opened ajar.
from him, arose a single word-
    ‘’ Drop”
gentle but firm was its timbre.

he dropped the flowers, one by one.

in sterner voice, the master said,
     ‘’ Drop”

all at once, he let the remaining blooms
 go off his clasp
 and down they fell around his feet.

folding empty hands, he stood,
waiting for the master’s behest

after an eerie silence,
once more came the hefty command--
     ‘’ Drop”

stupified, the disciple queried-
‘’ what more should I drop? “

eyes emitted sparks!

‘’ not the flowers, but your ego”-
instant was his reply.

a spear stuck deep into his self.
as by a whirl wind, his body tottered.
he felt a deep twirl inside.
unfastening the hinges
of the imperious shutters,
a boulder rolled down,
 dropping to the ground with a thud.

back home, the disciple gleefully walked,
the clogged fog clearing from his head
ego shorn, here now reborn
in a state of divine transcendence
feeling as weightless as a feather


~Placed First~

8. Jan. 2022
This or That.Vol.9. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Edward Ibeh


~Placed Fifth~

In 'Ego Shorn, Here Now Reborn' Poetry Contest
Sponsored by-Unseeking Seeker


Impromptu

unfastening
her belly
button

Premium Member Borrowed Gravity

When I read, gravity loosens its grip,  
a small unfastening felt first in the ribs.  
The page tilts the air, bending it around me  
like a soft distortion in the fabric of breath.  
Words behave as particles~ 
colliding, scattering, recombining in the quiet behind my eyes.

Characters arrive as changes in mass,  
their presence altering the room’s center of pull.  
Some make the world lighter;  
others press gently on the sternum  
as if adjusting the density of thought.  
I feel them move through me  
like currents slipping along an unseen axis.

Sentences stretch time~ 
not metaphorically, but with the slow elasticity  
of something being warmed by attention.  
Moments dilate; minutes contract;  
the clock becomes a suggestion  
rather than a law.

My pulse syncs to the story’s frequency,  
a low hum of shifting energy  
that travels through bone and breath.  
The book becomes a field generator,  
rewriting the physics of the room  
until everything around me feels slightly untrue  
and beautifully so.

By the final page, equilibrium returns~  
but not the same one I began with.  

When the book ends, the world doesn’t snap back.
It settles slowly, in its own uneven way,
as if the constants I rely on have shifted a little.
I move through the room with a changed center of balance,
still feeling the story’s pull inside me,
a private force that lingers long after the cover shuts.

Premium Member A Beautiful Flower

Unfastening clusters shining 
one treasure in the mind
planted with seed of joy 
you're the life within this garden

Sunlight of you absorbs into my being
petals blushing lips of truth gently whispers
Blowing in the wind beautiful flowering leaves
a warmly misting vision colors beauty in your eyes

A single flower leans into the waterfall
pulling me down under 
delicately broken in a gentle silence rustling
when the cherry tree opens its blossoms

Embracing feelings in the merest touch electric
holding hands wishing in the sweetest moment forever linger
Dream you sing with the songbirds
amongst the angels chants your harmony a blessing
Sweet scent of summer hawthorn blossoms
you take me away into another world sailing on your tide

A co write by Maria Mc Laughlin and Liam Mc Daid


The Glass Menagerie

She was ethereal in her beauty.
 I always loved her of course.
 But only from a respectful distance.
 She collected glass animal's.
 I always gave her one for birthdays.
 She would kiss my cheek in thanks.
 Not the kiss I craved but a kiss.
 Her perfect French braids
 framing her lovely face.
 I fantasized unfastening them
 Slowly so her hair flowed
 Like the soft spring rain
 washing my bare skin.
 She would show me the
 Intricate color mix
 in her glass menagerie.
 But I only saw the colors
 of her hair her eyes her lips.
 When the sickness came
 Her skin became
 taught and translucent like glass.
 The weight loss 
showing her frame
 She looked more and more
 like one of her 
beloved glass collection.
 Then when we lost her
 She left her collection to me.
 But the one I wanted
 Was on a high shelf
 Beyond the clouds
 Far beyond my reach.
© Jude Kyrie  Create an image from this poem.

Concern

stress gives way to pain
provoking paranoia
unfastening fear

Crash Dummies

Depress gasp peddle
make jest mettle, mannequin IQs
easy to steering will move

Simple-minded plan acceleration,
night shift flux be
turbo stupidity

Oxy dark vacillation
speedily end in
moronic wind tunnel termination

Pulse crash dummies
swerve change rational lanes
dash bored recklessly

Cranial balloon buffoons
always gon fail
those lobby pop quiz pitch tease

Stooge sputtering cartoons
fatally skid sail — 
Icy ad vice was a lemon squeeze

Vacuous palpitations
ventricle bend:
Idiotic windy flummox sensation

Pulse crash dummies
defective air bag manic brag
of vent kill mentality

Empty parking lot feelings
are plastic bosom empathetic tested
Accidental findings be fume ingested,
poser belt fear unfastening

Sift through the scattered remains 
of collateral crash dummies
Tik-tok stamp the carnage strange,
ventriloqi emotional debris

Shelf Life of Sunshine

Shelf life of lights 
=
A thoughtful commentary on the shelf-life of sunshine 
flares up on the kitchen; here her quick hands have been 
getting pickled and spicy, with each turns of time she’s spent.

Days are, of course, growing thin; like her little family 
which has been unfastening. Son has gone to the town;
his dad has lost appetite; the vegetable patch’ve dried.

She looks at the brown cat, it seems to attain bodhi.
The salty air teases her hair, unknotted it.
“You look great.” The wind’s accent, slightly slurry, comes inside.

It reminds her of youth, insouciant, innocent. 
=© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

Premium Member A Child's Follies

Porky Pig plastic bank, streaked with tears
Offered at my parent's bedside as they quarrel
          over money scarce like the scent of angels
Bickering exhaustion
          that steals the dark's stillness.
       ______________________________

7am Saturday morning cartoons
          incentive to rise and spy Bugs Bunny
          a trickster, brash, cocky 
          pulling me into rabbit hole hijinks
Elmer Fudd befuddled - Daffy Duck diddler
Road Runner renegade,  as Wile E. Coyote flattened
          explosive pursuits
          surreal mirth
Jarring clang of animation - smack down liberated
          from the blare of discontent 

Saturday morning cartoons, Looney capers,
          sketching my childhood fantasy
          in flannel pajamas comfort
For a TV box, within my reach, magical getaway
          vortex of forgetting

Cartoons of hilarity
          washing my sealed world in whimsy
          unfastening laces of grit
          thriving like the history carried within us
          robbed, from a child's bank of remembering.










Poem revised: January 27, 2021

Joy of Unfastening

Inside the skull 
Tenderly kept a bud 
Petals are held
together tight 
Containing all the
beauty 
The driving force of
the world 
Like that of fingers
in strength 
Clinched into a fist

 
The fist looses its
fingers 
 In love and in
kindness
And falls flat to
turn 
To dissolve into a
palm 
Like that of the bud

Unfasten the tight
by the petals 
In rain, in light 
To bloom into a
flower
 
A huge release--- 
A great
revelation---
A freedom gained 
A relief from pain 
A beauty 
The real delight of
the heart is born 

 The flower drops
its petals 
In freedom, in
relief 
But gets wings of
reason and logic 
To turn, to
transform 
Into a baby -bird 
Like that of a moth 
Morphed into a
butterfly 
In ecstasy, in joy 
Test its power of
knowledge 
In its first flight.

Let's Sing

When the New York City jazz deafened
With fiddles through the fogs 
A random of birds buried themselves down within 
The cloudless sky more than ever.
Nothing else appeared to recovery through the dust 
Of the moonlight beyond the mass of maiden flowers
The deep wall that soon would fade into the horizon.

Have you ever seen the sun hardly showing himself
With strangely scarf the fall of this soft morning? 
I've seen it as a centerfold howl unfastening
Its wings peeking out at the exhausted dew.

After such a long gaze, when the airplane 
Had reached its heights below toward the other world 
Fitting my tears the waves of people swallowed 
The massy star through the dirty blue into fire.

Where, in this tearing moment, to call it a day,
I might find my old man playing chess at Times Square
Or sitting along the Central Park feeding
The filthy pigeons with peanuts and M&M candies 
While the gazes go on and on after the 9/11 nightmare.

Premium Member Autumn Leaves

the chill wind through 
a tightened throat blew
against the trees, upheaves,
unfastening the leaves 
exposing limbs on eaves.
the leaves fell away
as wanting to play.
they ripped their way
through the breezeway.
they been noticed after all
knocking into the wall
then vanish down the hall.

10/5/2020
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member knobby knotty

                              life knobby knotty
                               does not run smooth
                             but tangled in thorns, weeds-
                               winding twisting curvy-

                               complication confusion 
                                perplexity on enmity
                               always to confront 
                          with confidence and courage
                           accepting life as challenge 
                                 not always uneven
    
                              all along life does not show 
                                 dark charcoal night-
                               bright full moon also illumines path -
                                sometimes you can untie knots
                                 though mostly get chained in shackle
                                   yet not to give up 
                                    but to rise above
                                     having patience to win
                                       unfastening
                                        unleashing
                                        knobby knotty
                                              life

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