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A Beautiful Flower

Unfastening clusters shining 
one treasure in the mind
planted with seed of joy 
you're the life within this garden

Sunlight of you absorbs into my being
petals blushing lips of truth gently whispers
Blowing in the wind beautiful flowering leaves
a warmly misting vision colors beauty in your eyes

A single flower leans into the waterfall
pulling me down under 
delicately broken in a gentle silence rustling
when the cherry tree opens its blossoms

Embracing feelings in the merest touch electric
holding hands wishing in the sweetest moment forever linger
Dream you sing with the songbirds
amongst the angels chants your harmony a blessing
Sweet scent of summer hawthorn blossoms
you take me away into another world sailing on your tide

A co write by Maria Mc Laughlin and Liam Mc Daid

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 10/20/2015 6:39:00 AM

Your poetry does take into another world, I can just picture it as real x wendy

Skat A

Date: 6/3/2015 1:09:00 AM

a delightful collaboration.... did an awesome job. enjoyed:) ~Luv S.K.A.T.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/30/2015 10:06:00 AM

What a beautiful romantic collaboration this is!! WOW! I am so impressed with this passionate piece! It's a "7" from me! Best regards. Pandita

Sharon Gulley

Date: 5/26/2015 12:42:00 PM

I love this write Liam, A 7 for me. I love the passion and romance with such softened touches. The flow of words are so dreamy and well written. I love your artistic flow and great imagery.......Sharon G. :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/23/2015 12:28:00 AM

Another 7 my friend. Great romantic write.....

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/21/2015 3:57:00 PM

Hi Liam and Maria!Another very beautiful love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam and this time in collaboration again with your dear sister Maria.Just dazzling!This piece is so romantic and sweet filled with a lot of love,warmth,passion and tenderness.A very dreamy and romantic piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Awesome collaboration.A big 7 +++to each!Great imagery!Summer sunlight flowers,everything sings and dances and brightens up this captivating piece even more:)Very beautifully written!I enjoyed it.Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love and hugs!xoxoxD.^O^