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Transcendence

He, a seeker after Truth, set out on an audacious journey to see his old master with a handful of blooms he paused before the open door. from deep meditation the squatted figure, looked up. in a trance, he saw the silhouette of a man. on gazing intent, emerged distinct his former disciple, left long ago seeing his hands laden with flowers, the master smiled a recognizing smile. in close surveillance, the penetrating eyes gauged him through and through. the master’s pursed lips opened ajar. from him, arose a single word- ‘’ Drop” gentle but firm was its timbre. he dropped the flowers, one by one. in sterner voice, the master said, ‘’ Drop” all at once, he let the remaining blooms go off his clasp and down they fell around his feet. folding empty hands, he stood, waiting for the master’s behest after an eerie silence, once more came the hefty command-- ‘’ Drop” stupified, the disciple queried- ‘’ what more should I drop? “ eyes emitted sparks! ‘’ not the flowers, but your ego”- instant was his reply. a spear stuck deep into his self. as by a whirl wind, his body tottered. he felt a deep twirl inside. unfastening the hinges of the imperious shutters, a boulder rolled down, dropping to the ground with a thud. back home, the disciple gleefully walked, the clogged fog clearing from his head ego shorn, here now reborn in a state of divine transcendence feeling as weightless as a feather ~Placed First~ 8. Jan. 2022 This or That.Vol.9. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Edward Ibeh ~Placed Fifth~ In 'Ego Shorn, Here Now Reborn' Poetry Contest Sponsored by-Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 7/15/2022 4:30:00 PM
I love this poem ~ it has its own transformative power. Congrats!!!
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Date: 7/15/2022 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Date: 7/14/2022 8:43:00 PM
Message beautifully conveyed, Valsa. Congrats on your win!
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Valsa George
Date: 7/14/2022 9:33:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Seeker friend for the recognition given to my poem.... also for conducting the contests in an excellent way !
Date: 1/28/2022 10:19:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win. This is a captivating story with a strong metaphoric depth - a message for all of us. Putting "ego" behind us - knowing our need for God - puts us into an amazing place of unexplainable experiences and lightness of being. Sending you many blessings!
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Date: 1/28/2022 5:20:00 AM
Know what else dropped? My jaw reading your masterpiece, Valsa:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 1/28/2022 7:59:00 AM
:) :) That's a compliment so worthy to be cherished ! I should be thankful to you Edward for the great opportunity given and picking my poem for a win! Much gratitude dear friend !
Date: 1/26/2022 6:23:00 AM
Back with my congratulations on your well-deserved top contest win, Dear Valsa.
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Date: 1/25/2022 7:45:00 PM
"feeling as weightless as a feather" - True transcendence. Beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/25/2022 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Valsa. An excellent piece of writing with a sublime message. Love and BW ~ Mala
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Date: 1/12/2022 4:22:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Valsa! The moral of the story was divine. May love light your path in life always.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 5:39:00 AM
Thanks a lot great poet for your beautiful words and your kind visit to my page !
Date: 1/8/2022 6:04:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for sharing these gems of immense knowledge with us! You have ventured so deeply into your unique creativity to thoughtfully provide your one-of-a-kind piece of splendid poetry... a gorgeous depiction of your clever insights!
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Date: 1/8/2022 5:54:00 AM
Much depth to the essence of your message, Valsa. The man found his truth--though it was always there-he was enlightened to see it.
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Date: 1/8/2022 2:05:00 AM
We need to transcend our mundane time, place and soul to be able to see, hear, feel and understand.. getting the soul disconnected from the world of habits and unconscious everyday states allows us to ascend different zones where deeper awareness takes place.. dear Valsa, you have dug so profound into your imagination to offer your avid readers a unique poetry.. a stunning rendition of your insightful thoughts! Your poetry is not only a treat to read but also a wisdom to feed on.. Love and hugs.
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Date: 1/8/2022 1:15:00 AM
When man thinks he knows it all, he'll bring disaster on himself. A deep poem. Blessings.
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Date: 1/13/2022 5:37:00 AM
When he thinks he is always right and refuses to change, he brings disaster on himself ! Rightly said Victor.... Thanks a lot !
Date: 1/7/2022 10:09:00 PM
Beautiful! what a precise message for the egocentrics, egotistic! Beautiful construct. Thanks - Marshall
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 10:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Marshall for your lovely comment ! So delighted !
Date: 1/7/2022 10:04:00 PM
Thanks for sharing these words of priceless wisdom, Valsa! No sooner we feed not ego with thoughts spiralling fears & desires, we are free
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 10:58:00 PM
Ego is the most detestable enemy of all . A highly egocentric person is so difficult to deal with. Thank you Seeker for liking my poem !
Date: 1/7/2022 9:45:00 PM
A good reminder of life's lessons, of introspection, self-deprecation and enlightenment. A fine piece Valsa!!...ab
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 10:00:00 PM
Thanks a lot Anselmo ! Ego is a heavy weight on us. When we drop it, we feel very light

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