Joy of Unfastening

Inside the skull 
Tenderly kept a bud 
Petals are held
together tight 
Containing all the
beauty 
The driving force of
the world 
Like that of fingers
in strength 
Clinched into a fist

 
The fist looses its
fingers 
 In love and in
kindness
And falls flat to
turn 
To dissolve into a
palm 
Like that of the bud

Unfasten the tight
by the petals 
In rain, in light 
To bloom into a
flower
 
A huge release--- 
A great
revelation---
A freedom gained 
A relief from pain 
A beauty 
The real delight of
the heart is born 

 The flower drops
its petals 
In freedom, in
relief 
But gets wings of
reason and logic 
To turn, to
transform 
Into a baby -bird 
Like that of a moth 
Morphed into a
butterfly 
In ecstasy, in joy 
Test its power of
knowledge 
In its first flight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/29/2013 2:21:00 PM
- The joy that feels deep in the heart - really well written Wahab ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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