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Premium Member Spiralling

                             Sipping the
                           Poisoned, dark
                         Inky medicine..
               I am Remiscent of a
             strange Alchemy
              silently lulLing the 
            unsuspecting Lovers
             surreptitiously Into the twisty,
                   snakey, turNy underworld of
                                Gnarly trees and
                       rootS that writhe to
                       triP the unwary heart.
               a pastIche of memory that
                       Reminds of 
                      Alluring all
                  the Lost souls
                        sLowly
                           Into the 
                             Nocturnal
                              Gaze of the
                         omniScient
                      ever Present,
                ever lovIng
                    fatheR and creator
                         of All things;
                          indeLible,
                            everLasting,
                              consIstently
                                  eNgaged for
                                  Goodness

Spiralling Stardust Sight

Spiralling Stardust Sight



Chasing clusters of dust and Venus vapid lust
We sail and we sway throughout the Milky Way
In a thrust, we land on a planet of candescent crust
And with dynamic display spiralling star dust spray

Jupiter and its moon Callisto a calamitous cocoon
With craters of ice, the shivering silence shall suffice
Off to Mars by noon on a botanical baronial balloon
It has paid the price with scars that scabrously splice

And lest we not forget Pluto a throw away or asset
A tiny pinhole within the cosmic super galactic bowl
On the night we met the stars shining as we sweat
The love that you stole along with my heart and soul

All this on a spontaneous starry narcotising night
Within a spiralling stardust spraying sensuous sight.




Oct.11.2017
The Cosmos
Sponsored by: Thvia Shetley 



First submitted on May.07.2017
Resurrected for this entry

Premium Member Spiralling Motions

Neolithic stones
Majestic motions upward
Bathed in fairy prances
Ancients questioned the meaning
Of the skies above,
Many assuming they knew the truth
Pertaining to solar systems and solstices,
Those humans were created,
Along a perilous journey
That led them to Paradise
In ancient spiralling motions


Premium Member Spiralling Into Despair

Prayer wheels make me dizzy 
getting tangled in my hair 
I bought scissors ten a penny 
clumps and mats everywhere 

Prayer wheels make me giddy
I shave my head, going spare
Place a thimble on each finger 
using pin cushions, roots I pare

Prayer wheels make me hazy
I scalp myself beyond repair 
Hack skin grafts off my legs 
botched job, a skull’s laid bare

Prayer wheels make me crazy 
at brain tissue, I readily tear
Pus blooms inside my eyeballs 
and optic nerves, reek despair

By
David Kavanagh

Slow Spiralling

Cloudy,
A storm cloud comes in the horizon.
Thunder,
Rumbles as darkness settles.
Lightning,
Crashes with anger and rage.
Rain,
Downpours with power.
Tornado, 
Tears through a town. 
Sun,
Peeks through clouds.
Madness, 
Slow Spiralling.

Spiralling In

Spiralling in, out, and somewhere in between existence's consciousness' subconsciousness' unconsciousness' perceptions versus realities finding meanings versus misinterpretations
learning versus understanding
knowinging versus pretending to know
doubting versus believing
giving advice and it's not taken versus not giving advice
being literate versus not being literate
disagreeing versus agreeing
being emotional versus being apathetic
adhering to one's self versus whatever everyone else wants you to adhere to
living in reality versus living in a fantasy
factualizing falsehoods versus not believing in these falsehoods
fictionalizing history to fit victors and layman's biases versus finding the truth about history
fictionalizing unpopular truths and facts versus taking them as absolutes
proud of yourself versus not being proud of yourself
and every other this versus that scenario!


Spiralling Out of Control

SPIRALLING OUT OF CONTROL

Yes, our planet is heading out of control – 
no one can stop it or those who wish to bring down the end.
The Americans try to look back in time – will they ever manage it?
Crazy people think the aliens are about to take over – is it true or just make believe?
You tell me. This is the ride of our lives – it could kill us or bring us the thrill of a 
lifetime.

Go on, drive your car into a lorry, you may live to tell the tale. 
Will enemy bombers threaten our cities and our very lives?
These are questions we can’t answer but there is always some that we can;
someone will die, someone will live in the game that is called life.
Our world is a fragile place – day-by-day it falls apart.

People just plod on with their mundane lives, not looking to the future – 
it’s much too big for them, scary unknowns. All they see is the past and decay.
One day when mankind is nothing but dust, the world will be free of her burden, man.

Spiralling Into The ation

fill (someone) with the urge or ability to do or feel something, especially to do something creative

A father swings his daughter in the warm embers of a summer night

A fragile woman sits in a seat her chemotherapy drip pushing poison through her veins but smiles

A husband  stands in the rain with an umbrella waiting for his wife’s return

A sunbeam strikes a wave as it makes its way out sea

A poet uses words and senses
A teacher uses knowledge
but what to inspire
Hope 
Love
Create a tivity
Intangibles tangled in torrid traps
No hope without the hopeful
No love without the loved
Is passed tense the past tense of past tense
No creativity without the creatures to create
Urge with an nudge
Find the somethings new

Hope until you can’t 
Love until it gone
Create until everything is done

Spiralling

At times we feel that
our longest years on earth
are but milliseconds
of another birth;

are we then to wince in pain
or grin with mirth
for whatever shame
or pride it's all worth?

or have we been 
to this planet banished
from a paradise
that has long vanished,

with nary an inkling
that our wandering
is but a round-about,
slow-motion spiralling?

Spiralling

Images flash across the screen 
What does it all mean 
People dying 
Children crying 
Values lost 
Out of control 
Death nears 
Anger flares 
We are filled with such despair 
Peace is gone 
Hope is lost 
Mankind seems bent on destruction at all costs!

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